Arshi FF:Over The Coffee chap10 pg41 6/7 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This by far had been the most casual way of arnav to approach khushi.. He has been honest, calm, nice, welcoming, li'll rude, yet good.. And khushi has been nothn more than a shying teenager.. But i do like the confident side of hers!

The way their relation just kicked off at the first meet was surprising yet good, then coffee wid aSR and after that the whole kiss fiasco was all different and new!

I liked it a lot.. And waiting for the nxt part.. Don't want their this date to end up badly! Come on, khushi's put up efforts for it!:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
interesting--great descriptions hun😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awesome update.
Samaria, u did a great job. Khushi not confident about her looks, liked how arnav tried to put some sense into her brain. Wonder how their second date works. Hope it wont be a disaster.
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
great update dear
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
just love your all 4 parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: aashi12

This by far had been the most casual way of arnav to approach khushi.. He has been honest, calm, nice, welcoming, li'll rude, yet good.. And khushi has been nothn more than a shying teenager.. But i do like the confident side of hers!

The way their relation just kicked off at the first meet was surprising yet good, then coffee wid aSR and after that the whole kiss fiasco was all different and new!

I liked it a lot.. And waiting for the nxt part.. Don't want their this date to end up badly! Come on, khushi's put up efforts for it!:D


i am really glad that u likd it nd i've always wantd arnav to b this way opp. His portrayal in the serial and many other ffs nd yeah d date won't end up badly that i cn promise for sure , coz ya khushi hs put so much of efforts on thnx so much for ur lovly response :D:D:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: gmsk

hey, ALL THE BEST FOR YUR UT'S...👍🏼

SORRY I COULDN'T CATCH UP WITH YUR PREVIOUS UPDATE EARLIER..
M NT MUCH REGULAR ON IF THESE DAYS..
BUT STILL LOVED BOTH THE UPDATES...😳
N THANK U SOO MUCH 4 D PM..😊


thnx for ur wishes :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
loved it! it was a little short please make it long next time. Thanx for the pm!...:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
as soon as you say..."50 shades" I thought Christian Grey and Anastasia is fine...but not that overall theme...of F***...F*** F***


luckily...

hope...

the best and


better from you...


comparing ASR with Christian Grey !!!




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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
hmm...

18+ is okay...

but a request...

that is not a CRITICISM

don't write over Sex as it is in "50 shades"

please give more importance to the souls and the feelings !!!

telling these lines cause you are inspired from 50 shades...

please don't take it other wise...

and this is a risky take...

let's wait and watch how you do it...

expectations are high !!!


and please give a longer update if possible

and waiting for your comments in Rusted Relations

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