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Posted: 12 years ago
i just lv the way u potray indira she is such a strng woman
arnav and kushi r so in lv
i just lv dis arnav
cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i feel sad for lavanya and indira
nice update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
read through the three updates i had missed..kvb is a very intelligent man indeed😊
loving the bonding arnav n khushi share now😃
beautifully written updates 👏
update the next soon n do pm me dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't believe I missed the first two chapters of this thread!!!! Blasphemy!! Anyways... Both of these parts were so good! Suraj is now finally in a place where he can think with a clear head.. Without any sort of attachment clouding his thinking! Even Lavanya realized and is starting to heal!

Loved the convo between khushi and indira! Hope it's not a dhamaka when her being pregnant cones out to Arjun! As always the constant in this story... I absolutely adore Arnav and khushi!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Again an awesome update and thanks a ton for sending the email. I feel really sorry for lavanya, I hope she gets some love from suraj.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing and brilliant update, I'm loving the bond Indira and khushi share it so affectionate and heart warming. Also Indira is pregnant but she is confused about Arjun and does not know how to react or feel as she probably does not trust him anymore, especially in the way he treats other woman outside the family, but I'm glad khushi gave her some brilliant advice and assured her to think about her self first. Lavanya has seen the love that both Arnav and khushi share for each other and knows she would never get that from Suraj, but she has realised that Suraj has changed a lot regarding his feelings towards khushi. Please update soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love how realistically you have etched all the women who were in this update. Indira, Khushi, Lavanya and even Lila.

Indira is the quintessential Indian woman...hiding so much behind her stoic facade...while the emotions are roiling beneath where she strives to be true to herself and her relationships. she dislikes the man she loves.

Khushi is the other side of the coin, essentially the same and yet different because she is loved and loves and has a happy, healthy relationship with the man she loves.

Lavanya is not in a relationship...she is a lonely soul. Lila on the other hand is used and abused.

I am really glad Lavanya has given up on her relationship with Suraj. At least now she accepts that it was not a fair relationship to her.
Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Kalyaani,

That was an interesting chapter 72.

Before I start writing on this chapter I wanted to tell you something about the previous one. It looked like Suraj was seeking KBV's assurance. Looked like in front of KBV his insecurities came to the fore and he did not mask it as usual. He even went to the extent of sharing what Khan said over the phone with KBV! I feel that has indicated what is Suraj's next step. I had told you there were three options in front of him and of the three only two were viable. I think he has made his choice. More than KBV it was Vijayendra who has pushed him into it!

This chapter showed how much they care for one another. Indira though maintains an inexpressive face with years of practice, Khushi with her simple straightforward and endearing way is able to penetrate, the put on veneer but without annoying her! Somehow things never bypass the eyes of resident Sherlock Holmes and who also takes the role of the Cupid! Like the way Khushi makes people comfortable around her. The minute Khushi tells Indira of knowing about her pregnancy, Indira opens up and confides her fears and insecure feelings!

Indira is clear that she loves Arjun even with all his drawbacks! But she is right to voice out her fears that the shadows of his deeds would cast over her kids. Like the way Khushi reassures her nipping off such thoughts in the bud itself. Indira realizing what a wonderful giving and understanding person Khushi is and voices out that Arnav too appreciates having her in his life.

"You Raizada men don't know how fortunate you are to have understanding wives" she mumbled. A devilish grin took form on his face, "I am aware of my good luck darling and I have you to remind me about it from time to time" These lines also show that the women of this household do have a standing of their own and are not meant to be swept aside.

"When you want to kiss me, kiss me properly" she scolded. Khushi who had inhibitions even to kiss outside their bedroom has come a long way, after all she learnt from the seduction master himself, what else can be expected!

Well, Lavanya seems to be on a roller coaster not knowing whether she is on her head or on her feet! She is getting what she wished yet unable to believe!

She saw first hand Khushi's intelligence and Arnav's shrewdness. what Suraj had seen before. What a deadly combination!

Looking at Arnav and Khushi she realized how a relation should be but she had resigned herself thinking what she had was what was in store for her future too. One that was filled with uncertainities. What I felt was she has not taken Suraj's changed attitude into consideration. She has confused herself by clubbing both the Suraj earlier to Suraj now. Poor girl! She can't help being so unless she gets not subtle but clear signals, like verbalizing the thoughts and feelings. When Suraj asked her to join forces with Khushi to work alongside that should have been an indicator to her. Moreover he had told Lavanya that it was not necessary to consult with him for everything on that particular matter. It showed he had faith in Vajpayee blood!

Once again it was a lovely update!

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love how this story is unfolding. For some reason, I've always liked Suraj. Even though hes always been an asshole, I do have a soft corner for him and Lavanya, both. I'm sure she deserves someone better but I somehow feel they are made for each other and should end up together! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update reminded me of those old days when Khushi would advice Indira regarding Arjun and how Indira would explain her stand. You brought in a situation I was least expecting at the moment in Indira's life. Probably this might make Arjun change for good. And I can so understand Indira's fears and ill-feelings regarding the man she loves yet under circumstances is bound to abhor. She has bounds of strength to raise a child on her and instill good values in her.

Does Arjun even realize how much Indira goes through because of him? Now, I am all the more curious to see Arjun back.

Good chapter, Kalyaani
Edited by deereyedgal504 - 12 years ago

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