Raizada and Sons [6] - Link to thread 7/Pg155 - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

967

Views

130.1k

Users

245

Likes

3.5k

Frequent Posters

Hanuharshita thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
I read the whole fanfiction at one go and must say it is beautifully written.
The way you describe each and everything is just fabulous. Please, i dont want to offend you but this question just popped in my mind . The way you describe about politics is just mind blogging. Are you related to politics or any family member of yours? Please no offence but the way you describe about elections and fundraisers and all the other thing i just thought that you may be related to it or must have deep knowledge about it. If you think that this question is encroaching your personal space then you don't need to answer. I can understand that and please i dont mean to offend you but your FF is very much close to reality and mostly what happens that's why i asked you. Sorry if i asked a wrong question. I didn't mean to offend or point a finger at anyone by asking this question. And if u send pms then please send me the next time.😊
Dimz13 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
The little cracks are showing in Indira after years of putting up defenses...more importantly she is allowing the cracks in her shield to show...what does this mean..? new life on the way...? Additional character..new impacts...?

Love how Arnav cannot keep his hands to himself..it has to be somewhere on Kushi or in Kushi...!

Poor Lavanya...the heart yearns...!will La be able to figure out the GAME unintentionally..?

You outdo yourself with every chapter...awsome update.
sweet_5 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Arjun get your shit together...

I loved the interaction between Indira and Khushi, Indira is a great woman and her children will mirror that as well.

If I was lavanya I would be jealous of arshi too, I mean they radiate love and support!

I'm looking forward to the main event kalyaani!
_disha_ thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
I am totally in awe of Indira !
It amazes me how she manages to be so true and honest to her self and accept her feelings which are so complicated.
The feminist in me wants her to just leave this sorry excuse of a man who is her husband but then as a wife i think the better of her actions.
Indira and Khushi are the best things that have happened to the Raizada's ... they are the soul anchors who make sure their family stays afloat.

I don't know how to react to her pregnancy ... i really don't know what to comment quite honestly.
I am shocked that she decided to have a baby at this point of her life !

About La and Suraj ... well Suraj is never clear about his intentions with respect to La or Khushi for that matter ... yes he addressed her as another man's wife but then is he over her?? ...not at all
I dont know why La is holding on to him,,, like it was mentioned they are together just to "satiate a very basic primal need ". in that case she can move on and find a man who is able to fulfill her emotional and physical needs !! This relationship has been doomed from the beginning i am surprised she is still hanging on to it !

And of course thank you for the little guest appearance by Arnav !! 😳
suma.2911 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Indira is such a beautiful woman. Strength, loyalty, beauty, love all that can be attributed to her. It is so difficult to stay with a person whom you know to have double standards at all times. She knows and accepts that Arjun loves her and respects her, but what about the other women? She expresses her affection and hatred for the same man without any bias. And I can understand that emotion too. I really hope that the rehab does Arjun good in a way that he overcomes his vices.

this might be a delayed reaction, but after hearing all this from Indira I fel so much resentment towards Bhavna. She could have mended Arjun's ways - spare the rod and spoil the child ( metaphorical rod or otherwise ). But she did not. To see her and to see women like Indira, khushi as her daughter-in-laws- is ironic.

Lavanya and Suraj's complicated relationship dynamics always makes me question this one thing: She says that they are in this relationship for satisfying their primal needs. Then why can't she get out? Unrequited love is painful. She knows that. She is experiencing that. Even in the worst of situations there is always that tiny hope that things can get better and he can someday love only her. Is that why she is still in it? she accepts his weakness and still loves him?

I can't help but draw similarities between her and Indira.
Rasgulla_sp thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
Both Indira and Lavanya have men in their life they don't know what to do with. They are good to them but not to others. Both are on a path to possible change and i want to see if both the women get what their heart desires or not. I wouldn't want a heart break for either of them. It's not their fault the men they love are antique museum pieces.

I love Khushi's equation in everyone in the family and Arnav cannot keep his hands off of her, can he?

What happened to the baby issue??
lalarukh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...loving these two intelligent womens :)...and arnav's constant support...beautifully written asusual..loved it
-Reader- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Indira – SHAKTI indeed.👍🏼

K - I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, more as a woman and no complaints about not having much of Arnav Khushi. You truly gave a glimpse into how mature and strong woman can be. Be it Indira, Khushi or Lavanya.

I think Indira is probably the strongest character in this story.

Oh! I feel so much for her; Her turmoil, her fight with her heart and mind, love and dislike for Arjun, a hope for a better future with her reformed husband and guilt of unfairness towards victims of her husband's cruelty. It's not easy to be sane with so many storms inside you and fighting so battles at the same time.

I have so much respect for Indira and her maturity really amazes me. She is a very content, confident and intelligent woman. Come to think of it, anybody in her position will be jealous of Khushi and Arnav's relationship, given how shallow her marriage is. But here she stands by Khushi, loves Khushi and never misses and opportunity to tease Khushi and remind Arnav how lucky he is. She never shies away from praising Khushi and letting her take the lead.

Indira and Khushi's strong bonding is very touching. They have a very special relationship of friendship, of sisters and of hearts. They know and understand each other without saying in so many words.

Khushi has as the ability to crack through anyone irrespective of the masks they put on and the layers of personality. If her heart is filled with overwhelming love, her mind is full of tactics, which is a dangerous combination.

It's heartwarming to see how Vajpayee and Raizada families function like a well oiled machine. It's always them against the world. Each one of them is a type A personality, have strong opinions, some conflicting, have strong likes and dislikes, there are lot of disagreements but in the time of trouble they all stand together and do the right thing forgetting their differences.

I always sympathized with Lavanya and glad she sees the change in Suraj and a ray of hope!!

Oh! Please give us more of PAAGAL Khushi and her PAAGAL husband!!😳

yoga123 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Liked khushi today who supported her Indira Bhabhi and assured her about that...feeling bad for lavanya...Nice chapter

rulama thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 12 years ago

Kalyaani,


Somehow, I had missed this update (Chapter 71) as it was in the new thread and then I was away. Anyway I got it.

For Arnav when Khushi is around his mind seem to be always in two levels. Though assimilating whatever she talks subconsciously his mind seems to be dwelling on lascivious thoughts and he is an epitome of slave to his libido. Since it is his wife and a wife who too has the same licentious thoughts of him after getting used to his ways it is fine. I just can't imagine. Arnav- Sheetal pairing! Though Arnav tries to rile Khushi invoking Sheetal's name! One thing though Khushi is sure of is Arnav is not turned on with anyone other than her. She is worried about the predatory instincts of the other females including Sheetal of putting Arnav in a fix. With so many scandals prevailing around, none of them want anymore added to it! Like the way Arnav melts down Khushi's anger with just parrotting whatever she was talking making her understand that he was giving his attention to her with a part of his mind even though his eyes and mind (major portion) was involved in visually feasting on her and imagining how he could feast on her physically! What dedication!

One thing Arnav has not got correct is Suraj not consenting easily for Lavanya to join with Khushi. Arnav who doesn't want to let Khushi go away from the bed is alert and ready to do anything with the name of KBV brought in. How much he looks upon this man! Somehow he( KBV) is one who has my admiration too! A truly a statesman. Kalyaani you know he had and has always reminded me of his namesake ABV the honorable ex-PM. Looks like you have modeled this character based on him!

The much awaited meet has finally taken place! Liked the way KBV made Suraj welcome and the way Suraj unconsciously greeted him by touching his feet! Even while blessing him he gives Suraj the choicest of it - Happiness that had eluded him so far and when he voices it out KBV tells him everything depends on the each person's perspective. Suraj is surprised to see how well KBV knows his taste and expresses it. It showed a new facet of KBV to him and it reinforced what his nanny had told him about KBV, that he always took care of him discreetly. Suraj too comes out with what had been plaguing his mind rejection of his proposal for Khushi's hand in marriage. Once he realizes there was nothing personal and only Arnav had the chance to seek her hand he is relaxed.

Suraj posing the relevant question, "Why did you not tell me before?" KBV confirms to him that he was always wanted and it was his mother's decision to cut off and thereby spoil not only her life but also Suraj's. She took wrong steps and made Suraj too tread the same path. But KBV had ensured that nothing drastic happened in his life.

The final nail in the coffin was the call from Khan telling him the plans of Vijayendra planning tax raid on Sheetal's father to extract more money for the elections! "Dowry extraction in a unique way" and "I am as aware as you are about the things that happen in our world, Suraj" are extremely significant! Both the sentences are loaded! Whether Suraj makes out the hidden meaning or takes it at face value is yet to be seen. But KBV has sown the seed of doubt in Suraj's mind on Vijayendra's intentions. He has nothing to doubt KBV who has always been his supporter discreetly which he now knows on retrospection. KBV has done this not only to safeguard his family but even Suraj who is a part of it too. As he knows Vijayendra would not hesitate to throw Suraj to dogs if he finds him an encumbarance or of no use anymore.

Once again I have gone bonkers to comment so much. But what to do ? what you write has so much stuff and my fingers won't stop typing until I write fully!

If I write I loved this update it is just unnecessary as it is obvious!

I'll post my views on Chapter 72 later

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".