I started reading this last night and it was up till 4.30 am that I read all parts... I was so overwhelmed with your story your characters and the brilliance of it all...
I have come across the story a lot of times while looking for stories to read and the thought of it being a political story sort of would discourage me but yesterday I decided to actually start reading and I was addicted...
Love all the dynamics of every relationship...from Khushi and Arnav, arnav and his FIL, Khushi with Indira and her mother in law, even with Arjun, it's so beautifully portrayed, I feel like I know all your characters and am part of their lives...Khushi and Babuji especially on her return from London and how she hugs him!
I like how Arnav wants to always find out her reason for her anger and loved that talk she has with them about her inclusion in their lives as her own entity ...loved how he reacts and her point of view...loved how he asks her to get up and sit across if he wants her to get any talking done...
Love how Khushi is really a woman of substance here a perfect blend of a little of everything...just the correct amount to make her what she is...love how she remains silently so wisely when required and then sometimes uses her wise words too.
This relationship that you have shown developed between Khushi and Arnav...that was so amazing...their love, their passion their fears their joys and their insecurities and pain...they are truly one...love how their togetherness and their support and trust in each other and their love has seen them overcome all deal with these past issues. I love their passion and desire for each other as much as I love their love !
Love the babuji and her intelligence, actually love how all 3 at their levels have dealt with things Khushi immediately notifying Arnav about the jewellery set...Arnav and Babuji probing into the matter to get to the bottom of it like they do with the land deal...their idea of keeping thi holiday destination from everyone ...Babuji driving them to the airport...their unravelling the truth about tayaji, Suraj, Viren ...beautifully done...
Suraj is a bit complex...hate his obsession but looks like that might end now that he knows the truth...
Anjali well lets just blame it on the hormones for now...she did give Arnav some sound advice...
I feel bad for Indira she gets a raw deal...loved her outburst and was silently applauding her...I was always uncomfortable about Khushi keeping the Viren incident (both) from Arnav...glad that came out too...their acceptance of each other is now in full and in totality!
I am glad to see Arjun getting treated ...I am hope he comes put clean and a changed person...
I could go on and on...but will stop now but not before I tell you how brilliant this story is...each words, each emotion that you have written the many layers of depth...its sheer genius...and dammit it ...Magical !
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