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hey guys! dekho mai phir aa gaya! but is baar mere haathon likhi ek poem ke saath! ya aditi ke saath mai bhi poems likhta hoon! shanu (shanae_diamonds) ne kaha ki mai apni bhi koi poem post karoon!

okay guys apne risk se padhna because this is really a sad one! ye maine tab likhi thi jab mere life me ek bohot hi sad phase chal raha tha!

bohot saari problems thi and aap sabki cutie aur mai tab enemies the! i mean we understood each other but uss time me hamaare beech bohot saari misunderstandings thi! so here you go-


SAD AND ALONE


i am feeling very sad

i am feeling very alone

there is no one beside me

my loved ones are gone


i don't know what to do

i want to just shout

when there will be silence

i want to cry my heart out


i am living for the life's sake

but from inside i am a dead soul

if i can wish something

i will some love in a bowl


a person who cares

and lots of love is all i want

i want to stay happy

that's all i can't


guys maine kaha tha na sad hai! n i know meri three sisters ise padh rahi hongi! please behna don't cry! jab mai nahi ro raha hoon to tum kyun ro rahi ho anji? yuki you also don't cry! n if you guys will cry then i will also cry!

mere chehre par smile hai na so please! don't you guys dare to shed your tears! i know aditi bhi jab padhegi she will cry! kyunki usne mujhe ye sab sehte dekha hai!

par pata hai kya guys ye phase zyada samay ke liye nahi raha! aap logon ki cutie ne fight karte-karte mujhe smile karwaya! mujhe ab bhi yaad hai mujhe smile karwane ke liye usne kya-kya kiya tha! mujhse itna ladhti thi par sad nahi dekh sakti mujhe!

now i am totally cool! aap sabki cutie jo hai mere saath! jab wo saath mai hoti hai na to i am always better than the fine! wo jabse meri life me aayi sab kuch badal gaya! ek soft breeze si aayi aur mere tension ko yun chutkiyon me bhagakar smile de gayi!

it feels so good, so lucky to have her by my side! how should i tell that how i am feeling! whenever i see her it feels like i am seeing her for the first time!

each time when i look into her eyes heart says to drown in them forever! for me she is the worlds most beautiful girl! how pure how innocent she is!

i don't know what made me fall in love with her because everything related to her is lovable! i just wanna say that i love you aditi! i love you a lot! i loved you, i love you n i will always love you!

guys i have a surprise for her! a cute teddy bear! she just loves teddies! when she will get well i will give it to her! it looks like this-


please comment guys! your comments are precious! and agar accha laga ho to like bhi kar dena! n guys please tell how is the gift? she will like it na?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES!! Unres!

😭 jiju!! Apne bola ki apki bhene nahi roo sakti... But mein toh roo sakti hoona!! I don't know what had happened then jiju... And y my pyare jiju was feeling alone?? But i just wish ki esa phase apki life mein phir kabhi na aayi!! 😭 and i wish u and adi di stay together forever!! As ap dono ka pyar is like!!... Is like wat i look upto!! Ur love makes me believe ki iss duniya mein aise bhi koi log hai jo ek dusre se itna pyaar kar sakte hain!!

And when u said all u needed was a bowl of love and someone who cares... I immediately thought of adi di!!! I'm sure ki bhagwan ne apki hi sune!!

And the teddy bear!! Awww jiju!! I'm sure she'll luv it!! Bohot cute hai jiju!! And adi di 100% roone wali he isse pardke!! And 110% percent iss teady ko dhek kar smile karne wali hain!! Ur the best jiju!!!

Hope di gets better soon!! Wishing u both all the love!! Health!! Care!! Wealth!! And most importantly... all the HAPPINESS in the world!! All the best for future!! Because ap dono ke liye ek dusre se better koi nahi ho sakta jiju!!

Luv u both!!! ❤️
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭bhaiyuu..aap bol rahe ho mat rooo...par kya karu..i can feel n i do know aapka vo tym kaisa tha...i know dat tym aap apne aap se f8 krte the..aap kitna rote the...par bhaii uss tym ko yaad krke aapke eyes me agar aasu aate hai so u lose d right to stop us frm crying..coz we really luv u n cant see u upset...im soo thnkful to bhabz for chnging my bhais lyf..really..wat shes done for a sister is just sooo much..i bet anju di will also agree to dis..nyways no crying only laughing now..aur mere romantic majnu bhaai kya lines thi..itnii filmy..wah wah !! Aur gift..mat poocho coz me apni bhabz ko bohoot ache se janti hu..aap ki har gift se unhe pyaar ho jaata hai..ur evry gift is special for her coz ure soo speciall...luv u bothhh sooo much..muaah
Edited by taareeyforever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOWWW What a gift i love you jiju for this and wanna hug you bada wala tight wala hug sachi mein itni pyaari poem i started crying yaar sachi mein you made emotional...this what comes from straight away from the heart ...what a poem jiju superb awwsome jo bolun cum hai sachi mein and i assure u di ko jarur pasand aagyegi dekh lena aap becoz ye aapne dil se likhi hai and ab chup ho jaati hoon warna mera bhaahan endless hoga and dont worry she'l be fine soon😊😊😊😊
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊😊😊

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

hey guys! dekho mai phir aa gaya! but is baar mere haathon likhi ek poem ke saath! ya aditi ke saath mai bhi poems likhta hoon! shanu (shanae_diamonds) ne kaha ki mai apni bhi koi poem post karoon!

okay guys apne risk se padhna because this is really a sad one! ye maine tab likhi thi jab mere life me ek bohot hi sad phase chal raha tha!

bohot saari problems thi and aap sabki cutie aur mai tab enemies the! i mean we understood each other but uss time me hamaare beech bohot saari misunderstandings thi! so here you go-


SAD AND ALONE


i am feeling very sad

i am feeling very alone

there is no one beside me

my loved ones are gone


i don't know what to do

i want to just shout

when there will be silence

i want to cry my heart out


i am living for the life's sake

but from inside i am a dead soul

if i can wish something

i will some love in a bowl


a person who cares

and lots of love is all i want

i want to stay happy

that's all i can't


guys maine kaha tha na sad hai! n i know meri three sisters ise padh rahi hongi! please behna don't cry! jab mai nahi ro raha hoon to tum kyun ro rahi ho anji? yuki you also don't cry! n if you guys will cry then i will also cry!

mere chehre par smile hai na so please! don't you guys dare to shed your tears! i know aditi bhi jab padhegi she will cry! kyunki usne mujhe ye sab sehte dekha hai!

par pata hai kya guys ye phase zyada samay ke liye nahi raha! aap logon ki cutie ne fight karte-karte mujhe smile karwaya! mujhe ab bhi yaad hai mujhe smile karwane ke liye usne kya-kya kiya tha! mujhse itna ladhti thi par sad nahi dekh sakti mujhe!

now i am totally cool! aap sabki cutie jo hai mere saath! jab wo saath mai hoti hai na to i am always better than the fine! wo jabse meri life me aayi sab kuch badal gaya! ek soft breeze si aayi aur mere tension ko yun chutkiyon me bhagakar smile de gayi!

it feels so good, so lucky to have her by my side! how should i tell that how i am feeling! whenever i see her it feels like i am seeing her for the first time!

each time when i look into her eyes heart says to drown in them forever! for me she is the worlds most beautiful girl! how pure how innocent she is!

i don't know what made me fall in love with her because everything related to her is lovable! i just wanna say that i love you aditi! i love you a lot! i loved you, i love you n i will always love you!

guys i have a surprise for her! a cute teddy bear! she just loves teddies! when she will get well i will give it to her! it looks like this-


please comment guys! your comments are precious! and agar accha laga ho to like bhi kar dena! n guys please tell how is the gift? she will like it na?

awesome dude just very moved n overwhelmed by ur poem its awesome😊😭
Edited by siddhilovesamar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rakhiankita

WOWWW What a gift i love you jiju for this and wanna hug you bada wala tight wala hug sachi mein itni pyaari poem i started crying yaar sachi mein you made emotional...this what comes from straight away from the heart ...what a poem jiju superb awwsome jo bolun cum hai sachi mein and i assure u di ko jarur pasand aagyegi dekh lena aap becoz ye aapne dil se likhi hai and ab chup ho jaati hoon warna mera bhaahan endless hoga and dont worry she'l be fine soon😊

hope use gift pasand aaye! waise i am glad that you loved it! n maine kaha tha na ki nahi rona! ok chalo tumhe maaf! ya she have to be fine! n she will be!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...a vry cute teddy yaaar...damn sure dat she'll like it.
. n hope she gets well soon😊
Edited by tareyfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: siddhilovesamar

😊😊😊 awesome dude just very moved n overwhelmed by ur poem its awesome😊😭

hey thanks! actually this account is of my gf but she is not well now so i am here chatting with my sis and posting poems!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shanae_Diamonds

RES!! Unres!

😭 jiju!! Apne bola ki apki bhene nahi roo sakti... But mein toh roo sakti hoona!! I don't know what had happened then jiju... And y my pyare jiju was feeling alone?? But i just wish ki esa phase apki life mein phir kabhi na aayi!! 😭 and i wish u and adi di stay together forever!! As ap dono ka pyar is like!!... Is like wat i look upto!! Ur love makes me believe ki iss duniya mein aise bhi koi log hai jo ek dusre se itna pyaar kar sakte hain!!

And when u said all u needed was a bowl of love and someone who cares... I immediately thought of adi di!!! I'm sure ki bhagwan ne apki hi sune!!

And the teddy bear!! Awww jiju!! I'm sure she'll luv it!! Bohot cute hai jiju!! And adi di 100% roone wali he isse pardke!! And 110% percent iss teady ko dhek kar smile karne wali hain!! Ur the best jiju!!!

Hope di gets better soon!! Wishing u both all the love!! Health!! Care!! Wealth!! And most importantly... all the HAPPINESS in the world!! All the best for future!! Because ap dono ke liye ek dusre se better koi nahi ho sakta jiju!!

Luv u both!!! ❤️

aww! thanks shanu for such a big comment! i am sure aisa phase meri life me dobara kabhi nahi aayega because when your di will be at my side i can't feel alone! she will never let me feel alone! oh thank god tum keh rahi ho to zaroor pasand aayega! love you too!
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