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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm... So I don't hate you, but I'm feel displeasure towards you for ending at "Arnav's Khushi."


What about Arnav's Khushi? Huhhh? Will have to wait for the next update now... Hmph!


Lol, just kidding.


Anyways, I have one request. I know Khushi has a forgiven nature and that she loves the guy, but please don't let her forgiven him right away. Also Shyam anger would be something to see. NK punch still makes me happy! Hehe.


I mean, whatever happened between Shyam and Anjali was in no way Khushi's fault, and knowing Arnav he probably hurt her to get back at Shyam. :/


Now to my quotes! :)


For Payal and the sister will always be.
"Sister. She is your mirror, shining back at you with a world of possibilities. She is your witness, who sees you at your worst and best, and loves you anyway. She is your partner in crime, your midnight companion, someone who knows when you are smiling, even in the dark. She is your teacher, your defense attorney, your personal press agent, even your shrink. Some days, she's the reason you wish you were an only child." - Barbara Alpert.

"You can kid the world, but not your sister." - Charolette Gray.


For Shyam and the caring yet helpless brother he is.
"I have given my word that only death will take me from you." - Philippa Gregory.

"Because you're worried, Bear. And it makes me nervous. You know when you worry, I worry. It's just something we do." - Who We Are.


For Khushi and what she felt when Arnav asked her to leave and she did.
"There ain't no way you can hold onto something that wants to go, you understand? You can only love what you got while you got it." - Because of Winn-Dixie.

"There is love in holding and there is love in letting go." - The Year of Pleasure.


For all the sepreration.
"Absence is to love what wind is to fire; it extinguishes the small, it inflames the great." - Roger de Bussy-Rabutin.
Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME...and whats with this arnie...confused soul...he better ask for apology and woo her ..lol...my heart went for my girl...aww baby!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thank you for pm...i am going to start reading this story today
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE ENDING!!! "Toh matt manaao na"<--- i loved this line sooo much, totes pulled on my heart strings >.< great update overall yet again, cant wait for the next one :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Toh matt manaao na,<---- this line totally pulled on my heart stings, absolutely loved it, sachi, dil se!!! update soon, i'm dying to have some meeti meeti talks >.<
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Posted: 12 years ago

Here's wishing you a happy, though belated Holi!

Shyam is a very understanding brother… he is concerned about Khushi but gives her the space to deal with her emotional turmoil, patiently awaiting the time when she will unburden herself to him… one can be sure he'll be there for her! It is painful to witness Khushi's confused thoughts, though love your use of the sayings to portray the conflict raging in her heart… Khushi imagining Arnav's presence in her room — apologizing and hoping to be forgiven — followed by her realisation that it was only a figment of her imagination, was really heart-breaking… He hadn't come after all… such a world of pain conveyed by that one simple statement! Khushi reminiscing about her first kiss and Arnav's promise is a bittersweet moment.

"I wish you considered me worthy enough to share your troubles with"… truly poignant words that reflect a brother's love and sense of helplessness when faced with his sister's tears and pain… Whatever was troubling his sister, he would make sure that he would end it! Someone dumped his sister, HIS sister, HIS CHUTKI. I won't leave that person alive… If he only knew the name of the person behind this, he would skin him alive before feeding him to the dogs for putting his sister through so much pain… Shyam's protectiveness and anger are heart-warming… just love this strong and caring character you've created, who has wiped out the ever-present image of the smarmy jerk we were used to seeing in the show… kudos to you for that!

Shyam has made the right choice in asking Payal to help… she seems like a 'take charge' kind of gal: "No time to ask questions. Get up and get ready NOW!" … so now we know who's the boss in that relationship!

The Raizada siblings are the ones responsible for breaking the hearts of the Jha-Gupta ones… coincidence much?! Shyam steeling himself to confront Anjali is, hopefully, an indication that the reason for their break-up and Shyam's resulting feelings of anger and betrayal will be revealed soon! Khushi catching glimpses of Arnav, yet believing him to be a hallucination is a clear reflection of the depth of her hurt… "You know, I see you everywhere and for the first time I am seeing you in the same dress twice!" a sense of wonderment and childlike innocence permeates these words… "And you decided to leave India and come all the way to London?" his voice giving away his rising temper... he ignored Khushi, then went so far as to call her pushy and demanding, even implying that she was clingy, and now has the temerity to be angry at her, what cheek! "I have to. Because you are not real" …"Why are you looking at me like that? Why haven't you disappeared yet?" …"No. Don't touch me. You have stayed so long for the first time. I don't want you to disappear again…" Arnav must have thought that Khushi had returned to her Sanka Devi avatar… he deserves a bit of uncertainty and confusion for the heartache he put Khushi through! The Raizada siblings owe the Jha-Gupta combo, and us, an explanation… eagerly awaiting it!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional update...I was crying while reading about khushi's pain and even shyams who was suffering seeing khushi in pain...Payal is a sweetheart...arnav has come to London...khushi and arnav's conversation was very touching...anjali has also come to London...I feel she knows the truth about arnav and khushi...eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional update Zehra...
Again...U made me cry yaar... Poor Khushi...
Felt bad 4 her...
Shyam believs that Anjali dumbd him...!!!
Aargh...So it cnfirmd that there s a big MU b/w them...
Bt wats that??
Nd Anjali nd Arnav s there in London !!!
Cnt wait 4 d nxt part... Plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Great update!!

Poor Khushi..seeing him everywhere, then disappears..so heartbreaking.
I was almost in tears myself when I read that part..

The conversation that happened at Starbucks was cute..Khushi was being so adamant in believing that it was an illusion again..glad that it wasn't.

I'm curious to know what more Payal did other than cheering up Khushi..plus what's going to happen between Anjali-Shyam now that she's also in London..hopefully, things are finally going to fall in place 😳

Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional...awesome update
poor khushi...feel bad 4 her
continue soon
Edited by sweet-fairy - 12 years ago

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