SS :For the wrong,and for the right COMPLETE,PG89*

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Wow,,, i did not see this coming !

But then this story has been unpredictable from the very start !

Loved the beginning right through the end !

Thank you 😊

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#642

masam honey u know...u have a perfect sense of ending ur stories totally different way...

as a reader i've read so so many stories ... still reading but the way u end ur story really its beyond my imagine n yes always surprise...i love this way of ur...❤️ u...👏 for ur efforts...

khushi's character was most difficult character in this ss...

it was shade of fun,pain,mock,wish & struggle...

the khushi before 2 years had lost about wrong ...

but after 2 years she is thinking about right...

always past n present not priority...future have also same priority in life...

khushi confess everything to the doctor...

she really changed...

after 2 years again arnav meet her by play of destiny...

arnav divorced to la...

which relation have no trust...dependency...feelings...honesty...that relation...

die on course of time...

really loved this ss short journey...

wonderful ending...

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cloverleaf

@cloverleaf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Terrific writing Masam!

I had actually typed out a long drawn comment, but realized that it was sounding a bit too idealistic. I read this story because it really piqued my interest an not because I necessarily wanted it to reach a happy ending. I had a lovely time reading and commenting. I hope you continue to write.

Edited by cloverleaf - 12 years ago

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

I'm really sad that this story ended as I thought ti was such a good one, and it was written so well...

I really liked how you wrote the scene between the doctor and Khushi. Throughout the story, we only got snippets from their convo's, but it was nice to show the whole thing.

Also, I liked how you showed the character growth in Khushi...from a broken young girl to a "polished" woman. She still has her sarcastic remarks and is still vulnerable, it seems, but it seems like she has matured now, and can see the right and the wrong.

What a coincidence at the end, for them to be neighbors again...and hopefully for the right this time!!

I really enjoyed this story and hope you will be sharing more of your work in the future as you are seriously very talented.

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barunxoxo

@barunxoxo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

It eventually turned out for the right! Nicee. :D

Khushi is a woman with strong will power! I really like how you ended it but this ended so quickly. :(

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#646

so d wrong never really turned into d right afterall...nd it took its own sweet tym...nd dat too unintenional...

so ultimately all d previous updates were K's flashbck...tellin a phyciatrist bout her life two yrs ago...dose two years wich were heavy in emotions nd all other feeling...

so basicly dey didnt turn up together immediately...infact he left her...nd just like dat two years...widout ny hope to rekindle u're feelings...:'(

nd NK...his fate was saddenin...his death was unexpeccted...but dats wat u're stries r made up off...d reality in wich everythin is not perfct...not right...:)

but khushi moved on...:) wid V...its a gud thing afterall...:):):)

nd den arnav...reenterns as a divorcee..meanin now things can get better nd positive opening...dis tym for THE RIGHTER AFTERALL!!!!!

i lyked d unconventional endin...the not so perfct endin actually had a perfct way.of.ending...

glad i cud follow atleast one of u're offering from d strt till d end...

will look forwrd to u're.other works...do post d link of any.new stry by u on dis thread..:)

lookin forwd to more of u..:)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

I just loved the ending. It was perfect. They are neighbours again, they are unattached and can take it any which way they want.

Loved this story . Hope you will write something new soon.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#648

😃 ...

Finally Khushi managed to pull herself out of this hell-hole that she had fallen into ...

and now knew the difference between right and wrong ...

Meeting Arnav again as a neighbour ... but this time as a survivor ...

"Anything could go right at some point of the life. It just required will power and control..."

Thanks Masam ... loved reading your work ... will miss it ...

Please continue writing ... K

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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Shaaz.gul

@Shaaz.gul

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#649

res

awww
So all ss was a counsling sessiom thats y doc was mentioned in every update
Masam that was a masterpiece
and nk died i feared m so sad
Lavanya and aenav got divorced
And khushi changed again i loved the end
Superb

Edited by Shaaz.gul - 12 years ago