SS :For the wrong,and for the right COMPLETE,PG89*

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

another story yaay obv everyone thought it would be like stb and so did I but nope...she's a hacker she khushi reminds me of the lady from girl with the dragon tattoo

arnav and lavanya whaaat

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Thats quite a start!
A marriage trying to stand together but failing, a sexy, tattooed, pierced, apparently seeking a doc, hacker, saying fu*k on a roll neighbour and i love her!

Stupid,stupid boss!

A lovely friend!

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

wanna read more comment for chapter 2

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golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Waw! This is so different! I could never think of a khushi of this kind. She has got all the things I personally dislike, piercings, tattoos, slangs... all these spoiled signs (of course, in my view).. but what is strange is, I find her extremely adorable! She has something ...'
her first introduction with arnav couldn't be worse. I would eagerly wait to see,in which direction their encounter proceeds, and how!

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Nice!So they meet ,and Khushi already looses her job.Arnav :/

The story is so good.Love Khushi's avatar.
Different and cool!

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-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Hello, just read both the chapters & you got a new reader onboard.. I remember reading an OS of yours some time ago and am glad to come across your work again! :)

The concept sure is different with Arnav & Lavanya as a couple working on their broken marriage.

& my oh my, of all the characterizations of Khushi's in IF, never have I come across one who is a piercing & dreadlock-clad hacker with a violent attitude. The SS certainly looks promising and I can't wait to see how the tale unfolds.

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

I am left a little dazed by all that transpired between Arnav and Lavanya in this chapter. I am intrigued, and well mystified by that small exchange between Arnav and Khushi. There are these undercurrents and layers to this story, and I'm thinking we are in for one hell of a ride.