SS :For the wrong,and for the right COMPLETE,PG89* - Page 15

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

Therapist? Anger issues?

Hasty marriage? Trust issues?

Interesting. As ever. Waiting to see what that magnetic pull does.;)

P.S. How does the title figure in the story.. I mean, "If Only" - got that. "Spilling the beans" - you made it clear, even the chapter titles. But this?

Originally posted by: Shrutee7

Okay I couldn't help myself to read this. No more coming on to IF after today until the weekend. If only I could write this much for my paper due tomorrow *bangs head against wall*
You know those types of people you envy sometimes(me being the envy-ER)-the ones who are talented in 100 things at once. I forget how the saying goes but something along the lines of detective by day...mother by night? I know bad example but you get the point. Well for you doctor by (anytime of day actually) and writer by night (early am etc). So yeah, I envy your talents; and if we ever got in a fight and you asked me "do you want me to give you a piece of my mind?" I'd be wagging my human tail saying "yes".
Anyways-Khushi sweets, here is a pack of Nicorette for you, Vaseline petroleum gel [everytime the piercing descriptions come up I have get a cringing feeling (nothing against the piercings) but with the rest of your descriptions of being anorexic and you chewing on your piercings I can't help but feel you getting red marks everywhere and V-line is soothing.


For some reason I can only help feeling bad for her. Arnav-don't know his deal yet but he seems like the rude "I walk over people" type. For now-once the story unfolds I'm sure we'll find out why he is like this. Except when he said in the second chapter that he'll help Khushi find a job. Hmmm. Lavanya-I can't tell yet either. She's feeling guilty? She's trying very hard to make this second time around work, but I don't know if I should feel better for her since she may have done wrong, or to feel sorry for her. The fact though when Arnav was sticking up for Lavanya when Khushi was talking about her, was he "obliged to duty" towards sticking up for her because he feels like he owes her/their relationship that or did he really mean it? All three of these people are about to have some major angsty stuff coming their way *braces heart*. Although Khushi seems alone, I'm glad she "physically" has a friend out there in V. I was hoping V would say "I quit" too! That stupid Rowdy Rathore song got stuck in my head when I was reading the utility store scene. Khushi was being rowdy and then Rathore's name popped up. *Row row row row Rowdy Rathode* urghh dislike that song. I'm kind of glad I haven't read the STB epilogues yet because I feel that sad lonesome feeling right now after reading these two chapters right now. That's a huge compliment to your writing ;). Oh and that intimate scene was very depressing too. (In terms of relating to the characters). They both were trying to reach something during their lovemaking. That was the feeling I got. Arnav was trying to find meaning/connect to something and Lavanya-I'm not too sure. I didn't understand the "are you with me" part. I thought she was referring to "are you with me" as in you know...*turns red*, but when he got up and left I was like...or not.
Arnav- a stress ball for you
Lavanya -a perfect spine for you (my guess I don't know anything yet)
V- Tylenol and lemon water
Masam- - Zucchinni Pasta

🤗Back to studying 🤢
-Edit; So besides the pasta pic, nothing got pasted -_-
-Edit part 2: I forgot to mention I love the italics thoughts (is she seeing someone about her problems). This reminds me of 50 shades of grey where CG is described as 50 shades of "effed up". V is silver. I'd say all three characters(A, L, K) are very very grey right now. As long as you don't have a "laters baby" in there since we don't want to make it 51, it's all good!

Originally posted by: CoolGal101

ppl like this have no lives commenting all this nonsense. who cares? it's a story calm down no one cares.

good update masam-link me plz for if only and spill the beans I never got links

Originally posted by: masam

^ In Italic- I'M SORRY, WHAT?
I really don't get what her comment has to do with YOU or YOUR opinion. 'No Lives' and 'No One cares', what kind of nonsense is that? It's not your thread nor your story, you don't want to read it, don't want to CARE, then I don't see the meaning of your drop in here and would ask you to leave and LIVE what you care about.

No need to be rude here on my thread with readers whom you even don't know.

Originally posted by: CoolGal101

I was only saying tht this person wrote all that nonsense..wht she mean by giving those items to ppl..why even write all that stuff out..waste of your radingt m too worth nothing u kno? no hard feelings but she a do better