Arhi FF - Running From The Truth#2 Link for THREAD 3 pg. 148

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anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Wow loved the update!!! Please update soon😊

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cutiepie_sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

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there are so many lines I want to quote here, especially arnav's. but i'm on the mobile so i will come back to it :(

how beautiful was this part emma! finally truly moving forward. they are sooo sweet together, and arnav is just😳

I really like Diya! she seems like a bubbly confident girl...will she stay? maybe for our adorable sid??? 😃

the way u describe khushi's affection for her father is so real. I wonder if there is any of the personal side of u in those parts😊 She really loved both her parents, and definitely a daddy's girl.

but arnav doing all those things that her dad used to do in the car was the cherry on top for me. they are so meant to be😃

WELL DONE, as always Em. This story is rlly beautiful. ur writing is beautiful. and this part was too👏

P.S I will ignore the last part of ur authors note...😭😭😭

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A_R_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

It's been long time since I last commented on this FF. In that comment I asked you to not seperate Arnav and Khushi after NK's and La's wedding.

But you did it and I didn't like it, but now you brought them together and it is written so beautifully by you, how both felt, specially Khushi and also her memories regarding Lucknow and her parents.

And the part where both get together, I loved it to read it and not only once. 😃

Haha poor Diya Sen, what she was expecting and what she got to experience regarding the ASR. 😆

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Simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Awesome chapter!!

Really liked the Arnav-Khushi moments and Khushi/Sid moments!

Thank you for the pm!

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tikarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

Awesome update
Waiting for another update

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hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

Nice to see Arnav and Khushi at ease and enjoying each others company!

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vandana.sagar

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Just caught up and loved each chapter. Right from NK getting married and his shades of grey, I understand him he was in love or thought himself to be and loved how you have shown everyone 's feelings and their state of mind and their thoughts.

I am happy to get an insight into La and NK through the flash back and loved the scene at the doctors. He is talking small steps but they will make a large difference in his future and his life with La and the baby. Loved how he introduced himself to the doctor. Husband and father of the child.

Loved his apology to Arnav.

Thank God Arnav was ok, you had me scared. Loved his flashbacks and Introspection...felt his pain and anger waking up after the accident to find out what happened... When just before that all he could think of was coming home to Khushi and talking to her...

Poor Khushi, all alone to handle that barrage of questions am glad she was honest...my heart broke for her but can understand buaji not wanting to let her suffer almost expected Arnav to walk in and stop her from going but your version was affective.

Thankfully Anjali and Shyam stand by him and Anjali agrees with his plans for going to get her back from Lucknow.

Loved all the flashbacks blended so well with the present...

I like that they talk and clear out everything ...and love him owing her...dinner a perfect start...

Ms Sen, seems interesting looking forward to seeing what plans you have for her...

Oh I like Sid too...what a great brother ...cannot wait for the next part...

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badfaith4u

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Well that was nice

Nice drive and dinner
How cute

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henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#789

happy writing. this is the current ternd of IF these days. all writers going AWOL. this is a magical tale u have going here. pls dont abandon it

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#790

they are so sweet together

He remembers all the little things that make her happy

Hope things remain good for them they really deserve some
happiness

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