Arhi FF - Running From The Truth#2 Link for THREAD 3 pg. 148

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

I'm a new and very impressed reader! I read your other story, 'Who Knew' and just had to come over here to check this story out. There is so much to comment on that I don't know where to start! The characters are so real...their flaws are real world flaws and the solutions are real world ones too...there's no magic happy endings...just the reality of situations and each persons ways of dealing with them.

Brilliant story development too...can't wait to see what happens with Payal and Akaash.

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Labelle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Res. Will update with a proper comment later but for now all I will say is that ur writing is beautiful!!!!!

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Where do I begin? The passion between both is outstanding. Love what you've done there with the characterization and feelings. That's something I love, you give everyone their due. Brilliant! La and nk as friends...hmm I like that. I really hope they go in the right direction. Buaji knows? Now what? And Sid is adorable, his concern is sweet. I like Payal here. Your characters are so imperfect that they're perfect.

-meena

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toblerone

@toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

i just caught up with the last few updates, loved them all!! i'm glad that khushi gave in and is letting arnav and herself have this great chance of happiness..it's so cute that they know each other from such a young age 😊 i love these flashbacks!!

hope lavanya and nk get happy together, they should definitely start their relationship by becoming friends!!

thanks for the pm!!

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Sweta...

@Sweta...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Lovely Uodate happy you finally updated :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :) loved how lavanya asked to be friends and arnav and khushi scenes were amazing like always :)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Wow that was an amazing and fantastic update, written perfectly.

Loved the passionate encounter between Arnav and Khushi, it was so beautiful and written brilliantly.

Awww loved the cute flashback and Arnav telling khushi not to cry, that was so adorable.

Khushi still worrying about what to tell the family, but Arnav told her to trust him.

I'm glad Lavanya told NK that they can at least become friends, which NK agreed to.

Loved the brotherly concern Sid showed whilst talking to Payal, I'm glad Payal did give him some advice, even though she has always been jealous of khushi.

Can't wait to read to see what buaji does to make things right for khushi.

Also Hun don't worry your studies should always come first and the updates can wait.

Good luck for getting into Med school, hope all your hard work pays off.

Thanks for the PM xx