Swaron OS: Saajna (song link added)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys. I know we don't want the asthma track anymore but couldn't help as the following song just fit the entire Swaron story perfectly. Hope you all like it and do both comment and like please.

The story starts after Gang and Swayam pacified Taani and Taarey had patched up. It's Friday and the entire gang is sitting in the cafeteria. Taarey, Swaron and all guys were sitting with their respective girls.

Nil: It's Friday guys. Let's do something this weekend.

Rey: You are right Nil. This weekend we should chill as after that we have to start rehearsals for the competition and it will not going to be easy guys.

Vicky: Yes, let's go to club tonight. What say?

Sharon noticed that Taayam were feeling uncomfortable after hearing the name 'club'. She signaled Rey and then continued: No guys I think we should go for a picnic.

Rey: Right Sharon. Let's go to my farm house and we will leave in the early morning tomorrow and come back on Sunday evening. Is that okay with all? He said while looking at Taayam and they both smiled and nodded a 'Yes'.

Soon entire gang said yes and left for their respective houses to pack and get ready. All boys spent the night at Rey's house and girls spent their night at Sharon's. They all met at Rey's house and drove off in a 12 seated Van. They reached there at 11:00a.m. They had breakfast there and went in the swimming pool. They played volley ball in the pool and the boys let the girls win as they didn't wanted their respective girls to get upset.

All this time, Taarey were having their short LLHH moments. Swayam was keeping a close look at Sharon as he wanted to be there for her when she needed the inhaler as he was carrying an extra inhaler for his love.

Soon time flew, they had their dinner and now it was time to do bonfire. They circled around but were getting bored so the gang planned to play something so they played passing the pillow. Whoever had the pillow was asked either to chose a dare or truth (just like truth and dare, the difference was that they were using a pillow and not a bottle because of the bonfire).

First, it was Taani who had the pillow when the music stopped. She chose truth as she knew she wouldn't be able to do any of the dares the gang would choose for her. Nil took the opportunity and asked about her first meeting with Rey and winked at Vicky.

Taani: As for all of you my first meeting with Rey was in the locker room but that's not the truth (all were shocked including Reyaam and Sharon. She paused looking at each and every faces carefully. Her eyes stopped at Rey and then she blushed and continued). Bhai sent me the pictures of all the gang dancing and hanging out in Goa which was your first trip together as Dazzlers and Weaklings. That was when I first saw Rey and fell for him and made him by Prince Charming.

All were shocked to hear what Taani just said. Rey remembered her proposing him and realized why she proposed him as soon as she came to Mumbai. His eyes went on Swayam who was shocked and had made the weirdest face ever so to change the topic he played the music so he can distract everyone specially Swayam. Now the turn was of Swayam and he chose dare. It was quite shocking for others.

Now Rey as usual asked Sharon to give Swayam the dare. She thought for a long time and finally spoke: We all know you are one of the great dancers and basketball player (everyone's mouth was wide open and their eyes were popping out from their sockets as Sharon was praising Swayam in front of all for the first time) so now it's time to explore another side of yours. So, Mr. Swayam Shikhawat sing a song for us.

Swayam was shocked but then he composed himself and Rey gave him a guitar. He stood up and started playing the guitar and soon he started singing. (All were shocked to see him playing guitar as smoothly as it was a piece of cake)

Ek Tujh Ko Hi Bas Dekh Kar
Bholi Mujhko Hi Meri Nazar
He remembers how he was staring at Sharon in the dance auditorium like a big time Majnu.

Tujhko Shaayad Nahi Hai Khabar
Tujhko Jeete Hain Hum Kis Kadar

He remembers how she made a loser sign with her hand and slapped him while dancing with her for the first time ever, but he still smiled as she danced with him for the first time.

Jude Jo Tere Khwab Se..
Toh Toote Hum Neend Se..
Yeh Kaisa Tera Ishq Hai..
Saajna..
He recalls how he joined dancing team as Sharon's passion was dance and he faced all her anger with no complain at all.

Tu Haathon Mein Toh Hain Mere..
Hai Kyun Nahi Lakeeron Mein..
Yeh Kaisa Tera Ishq Hai..
Saajna..
He then thinks of their moments when they were drunk in RDX party.

Tere Bina Kabhi
Raatein Na Ho Meri
Tere Kareeb Hoon..
Mere Yeh Din Sabhi

He remembers how he spend his nights talking with her on phone during their trial relationship and woke up early every morning excited to see his Siren Sharon.

Tere Bina Kabhi..
Raatein Na Ho Meri
Tere Kareeb Hoon..
Mere Yeh Din Sabhi..
He then remembers how he spent night in her room when she had a fever and was so happy to see her sleeping peacefully when he woke up that morning.

Jude Jo Tere Khwab Se..
Toh Toote Hum Neend Se..
Yeh Kaisa Tera Ishq Hai..
Saajna..

He then recalls her using the inhaler for the first time and felt guilty again for all the harsh words he said to her and didn't understood her. By this time he had tears in his eyes and seeing him crying all were sad and could feel his pain. Even Sharon had tears in her eyes as could feel his pain which was not different from hers.

Tu Haathon Mein Toh Hain Mere..
Hai Kyun Nahi Lakeeron Mein..
Yeh Kaisa Tera Ishq Hai..
Saajna..
He remembers their dance performance on Haye Rame in rehearsal room and Chura Liya hai tumne in the projector room and all other dances.

Tu Saath Hai Agar
Tanha Kyun Hai Safar

Itna Bata Mujhe..
Kyun Hai Mujhse Bekhabar..
He again recalls the time when she was leaving to go meet her dad and she gave him a flying kiss and they kept in touch through phone calls. The suddenly she stopped contacting him and kept in touch with the girls.

Tu Saath Hai Agar
Tanha Kyun Hai Safar
Itna Bata Mujhe..
Kyun Hai Mujhse Bekhabar..
He then remembers both sitting and having a great time together after their first professional performance. He smiled through his tears.

Jude Jo Tere Khwab Se..
Toh Toote Hum Neend Se..
Yeh Kaisa Tera Ishq Hai..
Saajna..

He then recalls when he advices her to join dance even after knowing the truth of her asthma as he knows that dance can only bring happiness to her life apart from him of course.
Tu Haathon Mein Toh Hain Mere..
Hai Kyun Nahi Lakeeron Mein..
Yeh Kaisa Tera Ishq Hai..
Saajna..

He remembers all their handshakes and the last one when he refused to shake hands with her after releasing her from their trial relationship. He ended the song and realized that he had made the entire environment sad and he had not enough strength to face all of them. So he excuses everyone and took few steps when he heard his name.

"Swayam" Sharon called his name and stood up while wiping her tears. He turned around and his entire body froze by what happened next. He saw her running towards him and she hugged him in front of everyone. He was shocked and so the others.

Sharon kept sobbing in his arms and said "I am sorry Swayam for everything I did to you that brought sadness in your life. I thought I would become burden for you but today I realized that in my efforts to give you happiness, I am only giving you pain and sadness. Please forgive me and accept me as your official girlfriend. She broke the hug in order to see his reaction.

Swayam was smiling no he was grinning through his tears. He couldn't believe what was happening, he just wanted to live the moment. So he took her again in his arms this time with the feeling of never letting her go.

*The end*

Hope you guys liked it. 😊 This was my first OS. So, please let me know through your likes and comments if you guys liked it 😃 or not 😔.

The link for the song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6bH2TrKj8f8


Edited by TaareynSwaron - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Super cute os..
Well written ..
Do write more..
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It was well written! Do write more! :)
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amazing OS...loved it =)
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nice. Liked it very much. The final confession was awesome.
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Cute OS..:)

Nicely written..Do write more..:)
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cute os.. 😊

very nicely written 👏

loved it.. 😳

plz do write more...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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good dear...i liked it...and unlike some others, you actually took the trouble to articulate it into a story; some people just write in the sms way...you know in shortcuts...thats not literature...nice writing and do write more. thanks for providing the link this time
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar

good dear...i liked it...and unlike some others, you actually took the trouble to articulate it into a story; some people just write in the sms way...you know in shortcuts...thats not literature...nice writing and do write more. thanks for providing the link this time

Thank you for appreciating my writing style, it means a lot. Yes I did sent the link. I remember when I was doing that before I was a newbie so they didn't let me send links. Now they are as I am no more newbie.😆 Thanks once again
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Awesome OS. Loved it. Truly

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