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Posted: 12 years ago
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arey exam they sab k na so is liye ok wait now m updating okay
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good. .m waiting .jaldi de update yaar. . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Good. .m waiting .jaldi de update yaar. . .



okay now m typing to wait kro .but long one nahi doogi short wala doohi manage lar lena 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 1 :

city mumbai ... at night around 12.30 ... silence all around ... but this silence disturbed by heavy rain ... few people running very fast ... few of them badly injured ...if any one ...look at them from far ... that parson surely doubted that they all r playing holi ...these people who r running on road they r some young boys and girls ... and following by some goons ...

"run faster guys other wise they will surely caught us " one boy shout while running fast ..."we all r running like this from last 30 min ...and some of us injured badly now its not possible for us to escape "...one another boy ... let out his felling .."yes he is right ... look at girls ... they r completely exhausted .. "...boys look at girls helplessly ..."i can't guys ...my stomach already paining u guys go ..".she sat on road ...while holding her stomach ..."we r not gonna leave u here ..."..other girl barked ...on that girl ..."we gonna perform together that's it "...another girl make her point ..."but look at my condition '... she said helplessly ..."i'll pic u at my back ...but we gonna perform together .."...and that boy pic girl on his back ..."first we have to escape from these goons .."...and they all again start running ...


other side of the city ...
a competition going on people having fun enjoying ...dancing ... singing ... "ok guys so everyone having fun today right we r really very happy that today lots of teams perform ...now its time for last team which gonna perform please wel come "bezuba team "" ... people cheer from them clap for them ... finally that team enter ...but when people teak glimpse of that team everyone become mum ...
people they all r shocked ... that team gather in group hug and them take there position they performed superbly ... but still people just looking at them ... they all brought back to reality when they all here some sound...on stage "please wake up nothing gonna happen to u"...one boys from that team shout while holding tight a girl in his arm..

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done jaldi mey itna he likha hope u guys like it


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AROMA_RUBHARU😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroma.arsha



okay now m typing to wait kro .but long one nahi doogi short wala doohi manage lar lena 😉


dnt worry. .we wil mange. .tu buss update de.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey update soon! Eagerly waiting for it!!! All the best for this story!!!
P.s. wish me on 29th march its my sweet sixteen!!
Xoxo rutsi!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update toh mast tha ab merko aur padhne ka mann kr rha hai khas kar kriyansh part muma
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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done guys read kar lo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s

Update toh mast tha ab merko aur padhne ka mann kr rha hai khas kar kriyansh part muma

jis hisaab sey tuney comment mara na us hisab sey to main kriyaansh jaldi nahi doogi 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hain? confused hoon jaldi update karna!
sounds interesting kisne kisko back pe uthaya?
update soon am off to read ur other updates 😉

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