Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2) - Page 89

Wonderful!!! I ESP liked the starting few paragraphs which describes arnav really well...well him and his aer caustic tongue.

Brilliant update i must say
Arnav didn't verbialize his thoughts but khushi was able to read him They were both equal in getting back to eachother
Khushi z handicap i hope now arnav will atleast be civil to him

Beautiful and heart touching part
literally i got tears in my eyes while reading this part...continue soon plz...
Thanx for the pm
Twinkle

Awesome upgrade

Loved their convo

Lol. The dining table turned out to be quite a table tennis. :D Khushi did step over the line and then Arnav too churned and grinded the line in a mixer and threw it in her face,hurting her tenfold.

What needs to be done is what khushi was doing,being friendly. But then where would be story then if we dont have the Arnav-ism in it..
And the first conversation hence took the cake. Very interesting.

And i m not that talented to have guessed about the limp., (i can only guess about when would there be a kiss,if you remember. :P and also who would NRI bahu marry ) yeah,so, but i would really like to thank you for depicting a physically imperfect khushi,not that i get very thrilled about such things, but the thing is stories mostly have a beautiful,flawless,curvy and all Khushi who unknowingly ensares Arnav..not that i m against these but right now the Khushi here in Mkm2 seems a real person this way..and this would always be close to my heart coz well,i've a physical deformity,a hump on the right side of my back due to a spinal curvature. In moments of feeling low , m all like no-one-would-love-me..but then i m again back to being me..coz i love myself too much..8-)
And i want an Arnav now! :D

Dat was simply SIXER... The most touchy update of dis fic-drama. You hv really done a gud job!

Originally posted by: maaneet93

loved the update and the new twist.. cant wait to watch the story grow!

nice twist

really wonderful chapter

can't wait to see how these two fall in love

Loved the argument between the two
Poor khushi is limp
It will be interesting to read more and how would story enfold in future
Will arnav love her with all might
Please update soon dear really excited to read more
I just love ur work
Thanks for the pm dear