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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
lachu ka ff aur boring
ho hi nahi sakta!!!
bohot achha hai bt i guess ismein taarey
scenes kam milenge starting ko...
par koi baat nahi sabra ka fal meetha hota
hai...
hehe
loved ur concept a lot
pls do continue soon
waiting for ur pm

stay blessed
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome concept ... Update soon and don't forget to pm me 😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Hmmm interesting, sounds awesome, looking forward to it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome concept di
i m so excited
and very sad ur after goa ff ended😭😭
but anyways
excited for ur new concept
plz post soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Oh wow!! Superb concept!!
Aapka ek aur wonderful creation on its way!! I will be waiting fr ur updates eagerly... To mujhe pm karna mat bhulna... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Hey guys,
Thanks for all d comments...
Hope you all will love this ff..
I know first it will be more suspense,emotional but intezaar karo,mere style main bahut der se aayaega,i dont know ow this story came into my mind,but reaaly hope n wish u all like this ff...
Enjoy reading...

Taarey FF: Mitwa-Part 1


London.
Morning...
Taani dressed in formals wearing specs ad hair tied up in pony with dark circles around her yes,
life seems to stressful for her..

Taani: Aansh now get up,its 7 now i have to drop u at school n get 2 my work...

A cute little obeying his mom's words opened his eyes and smiles..
Ansh:Gud morning ma..
Taani kisses on his cheeks n brushes his hair with her fingers..
Ansh:thank u
Taani:thank u kyun baby..
Ansh:kyunki har morning ki tarah aapko dekha na
to meri day happy happy jayegi isliye ma..n u know i have a test..

Taani:aww mera baccha..pata haina,so u ready for big test big boy

Ansh wearing his spec :ready ma..
Taani:so give me a high five
n
Ansh:within 30 mintues i vl be b4 d dining table..
Taani: k den baby..


Mumbai-
servant knocks rey's room..
Kaka:saab morning ho gaye,late ho jayengi baby firse..
Rey wakes quickly..
Throwing off his blankets n wearing his slippers,
he runs upstairs...
Rey opens the door...

Rey:shanu udo baby,dekho dad aaaya,udo its 8 baby,school 9 baje shuru ho jayenge...
Shanaya:mujhe bhukkar hai dad...
Rey gets tensed...
Rey turns to kaka..
Rey:apne bataya kyun nahi...
Rey touches her forehead...
Rey:kuch bhi to nahi..
Shanaya:ha dad dekho ,mujhe cough bhi n (coughs)
Rey:Accha aur kya kya hai(starts tickling)
Shanaya breaks into laughter..
Rey:mere dramebaaz(hugs her)gud morning aur chalo ready ho jao...
Shanaya:aaj jaana zarrori hai kya...
Rey:ha baby,jaana zarrori hai..
Shanaya:aaj maths test hai
Rey:pata hai baby,aap do baar flunk bhi kya hai,issliye aapka teacher ne mujhe call kiya tha..
Shanaya:(her face fells)
Rey luks at kaka
Kaka was giving helpless expresion
Re:accha mere dramebaaz main teacher se baat karoongi n tum aaj mat jaana,teek hai...nw smile
Shanaya hugs..
Shanaya:aaj shopping chale dad,mere saare clothes outdated hogayi
Rey:last week jo shopping kiya tha na,phir se woh putdated hogayi..
Shanaya:mere class main woh ek gal ke pass same dress dekhi..
Rey:aww dat so complicated,
vl go shopping after dad's meeting k..
Shanaya:jaldi aaoge na
Rey:yup baby..
Shanaya:hugh five
Rey:k(n gets up n turns to leave)

Shanaya stands upon d bed;dad rukho
Rey:kya hua
Shanaya:idar aao(places a kiss on his cheeks)
Shanaya:have a nice day dad
Rey:(kisses back)u too baby...

London-
Taani luking at the sun-
Gud morning

Mumbai
Rey luking at a picture in the drawer.
Gud morning

London-
Office
Taani threw the papers at her junior..
Taani:what the hell this? i gave you this to be done by today..
who will tell dis to the boss that we have failed to achieve the target u idiot..
You are fired n get out...
Junior:but mam
Taani:out

Taani removes the specs n sits n drinks some water..
Taani:stop,its k.go back to ur cabin n estimate d targets n bring me a fresh new report in 2 hours.
Junior:thanks mam
Taani:out for now

Mumbai-
Office
Rey:kya hua itna tensed kyun ho?
Employee:woh sir accounts main kuch problem hain so
Rey:its k ,tum accounts phir se revist karke mujhe de dena
Empoyee:thanks sir,have a nice day sir
Rey:u too


London
Taani luks out of her cabin and sees the bustling city..
She searched for someone among the crowds.
Taani:i still miss you

Mumbai.
Rey opens his laptop.
Enters the password to his personal folder.
Picture opens in d windows photo gallery..
He keeps his fingers on the screen..
Rey:kaha ho tum?

Precap:
Taani:But sir India
Rey:kaun aa rahi hai dad?


Note- i will post this update on all sundays..
But towards love ff will be regularly updated k..
Because i have written more of towards love ff ,updating them is easy for me,
But Mitwa ff has to be written,
n i am free only during weekends..
So i hope you guys will understand me...


Part2
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
well well well i would just say good starting and i loved the ansh-taani and rey-shanaya part very much i was like awww so good job di and ya i completely understand so i would say keep updating its good😊
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
I read it before ur pm!!!
It was suuuppperbb!!
Its so so so different.. Taani and rey are so apart in their nature.. Even ansh and shanaya... I m wondering if the pics were of rey and taani... Precap is so exciting!! Continue sooon!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Wow ur 1st cpter is superb..nxt part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awee, they miss eachother <3
and they are so diff from each other!!
i love it <3
jaldi update karna!!

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