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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

You leave me speechless!! Yes I'm anxiously waiting for the next part, but for me this was such an important chapter.

His concern for her, him willing to let her go so that she can find someone better. Her reassurance that she wants only him, the fact that she actually asked him to make love to her and asked for very little in return. Just brilliant!! To me they both declared there love to each other. Neither can live without the other & it hurts him to see her hurt which is the biggest stepping stone towards love. Putting the other before yourself.

I truly applaud you on this chapter. Interlinking the song and Khushi's emotions was so beautifully done. The transaction from the sangeet to Arnav's bedroom was flawless.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

I am totally humbled to find that I'm among those readers, whom you dedicated Ch 59 of SAY.. Thank You so very much!
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Thanks for the PM.
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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

R.
Edited.

Arnav's hawk eyes specially trained for Khushi can never miss even an iota of change in Khushi..

Arnav thinks so fast.. He figured out that if he would talk to Samiya, only then Khushi will look at him.. and in the meantime, he can also get to know the meaning of the song..
(I really wonder that.. Arnav ka dimag, dimag hai ya Derby ka ghoda?!.. Itna tez jo daudta hai! 😆 )

It was really realistic approach for Samiya to consult google Mamu ..
As I said earlier also, Samiya is a wonderful person.. Her way of making him realize the meaning of the song and subtly hinting at the situation at hand, was fantastic. 👏
Hail Cupid!

Does Arnav have only one way to talk to or meet Khushi - he first remains in ambush and then like a predator, grips Khushi's hand from nowhere ? Too Scary! 😛

Khushi thinks
" Arnav had never, even once, pressurized her to take that one step that had been his primary goal. " . True.
But somehow, I never liked her way of comparing Arnav's love with her love.. She did this comparison before also.. Love has a multitude of dimensions, not necessarily, everyone's way of loving should be similar.

".. Go find someone who can cherish you and honour you as he should. " Arnav's line was so heart-breakingly poignant.
Here Arnav asked Khushi to get a guy who would cherish and honour her as he should. He didn't say "as she deserves. " .. because Arnav perhaps already cherishes and honours her as she deserves.. It is the question of Arnav not offering what he should be giving her. .. According to which, he should be acknowledging their relation socially- in the form of marriage and morally- by terming it as Love.. But perhaps, according to Arnav, Marriage is an Eventuality! 😔

Arnav's effort to save his love from himself.. or rather his inner demons, goes on to say that he has a well-bred conscience.. Moreover, it shows his unbridled love for Khushi which is so intense..

".. The more compulsively she sobbed, the more compulsively and frequently Arnav pressed kisses.. "

and

".. when someone dried all of the tears before they even fell on your cheeks.. "
These two lines made me feel that Arnav was drinking away Khushi's sorrow.. It was so fantastically potrayed.

Khushi's tears make Arnav vulnerable.. It shows how much he is affected by Khushi!

Arnav was caught off-guard by Khushi and her bold action.

Dream. Was Khushi having a wet dream about Arnav and herself? 😉

" Just kill me now. " .. This line for some odd reason made me burst out laughing.

P.s. - Did you just 🤬 the Precap? 😉..

On a serious note, I somehow feel that Arnav's perspective might change after this.. And I also feel that, there might be a crack in his ever steady and strong friendship with Rohan, for apparently messing up with his little sister..

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

wow beautifully written fari...arnav can't see tears in khushi's eyes...sami is doing great job...if there is no seperation then carry on...its high time arnav should release his love for her...thanks for pm

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glimmernglitter

@glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

This one update have changed my perspective towards the need to get married before having a physical relationship. U have so convincingly described the feelings of Arnav and Kushi that made me think that why should they need the conformity of society since their love and trust itself is so strong to face any sort of storm.. Arnav's love is so powerful that he is ready to sacrifice his love and Khushi's love is unconditional.

Part 59 is my favorite so far. Eagerly waiting for next part.. Eager to know whether this relation result in some tiff between Rohan and Arnav..

Thanks for the PM

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

what a power packed emotionaly breath takingly intense update...did Arnav even realise how deep n intense his feeling towards Khushi... Khushi is handling the situation and him too maturely...next hot update please...

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supriya

@Dreamy123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

OMG Awesome update... beautifully written state of there mind,,,Arnav.s concern...khushi,s love for arnav n cant believe u stoped there now plzz give us next update soon cant wait for next chap as its gonna be... 😳

thank u so much for lovely update n update soon :)