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Fari I am super-sleepy. So, a very chota comment. Sorry:

What pushes a girl- who has already lost her heart to a man who doesn't believe in love- to submit herself completely to her beloved?

The uncertainty of tomorrow and the inevitability of death.

hey farah...love...absolutely love ur writing style and ur story! its amazing...started reading the day b4 and just caught up with ur latest update. its such a beautiful story...sweet, romantic, passionate, hot...all that i wanted in the show but never got...especially love ur arnav and khushi...have been missing them a lot! i started reading ff's after the show closed and have read so many wonderful stories and ur story is right there in the top 5 list...here is my reason why...normally when the ff does not go along with the storyline of ipkknd and just has arshi in a diff scenario, the writer tries to retain the characteristics of them both with a few changes so that we the readers can relate to our fave couple for whom we r reading the ff in the first place...and some of them have been successful at it coz i have felt a few times ki kash show mein aisa hua hota! u, my girl, have done better...child hood enemies, secret crush, two loving families, similar tragic past, a heroine who gives back as good as she gets and is true to her passionate self, bold and beautiful, and last but most definitely not the least, a hero who has finally met his match...as some of my fave authors have written, the worst of rakes make the best of husbands once they r tamed! i also love how u have beautifully woven a few of my fave scenes and dialogues from ipkknd into ur story reminding me about all that i love about ipk...infact, inspite of ur khushi being modern i still end up imagining sanaya and barun together while reading ur story and i love it...coz am a big fan of both arshi and sarun. farah...y'day while i was reading sau my 8 yr old came in and asked me why i was smiling and what was i reading that i had such a sweet smile on my face...that is what ur writing + arshi r capable of! U have an amazing talent girl...god bless and keep writing! i don't comment much, this is my first comment and hence so long and u deserve more...will try to comment more...thank u for such a lovely story.

amazing update ...beautifully written :) arshi;s dresses r beautiful...really like the song n the way khushi thinking about arnav :) awesome...thank u so much for on time update...waiting for next chap :)

Res

res She wanted to be his Sahibaan today, even if that meant she had to embrace her death tomorrow.

shami feels numb after reading this 😕and getting emotional 😭 how much she loves him. it cant be counted and measured.

im sure he too aaprt from all this physical attraction.

the song you selected is my favorite too but never had any idea about its meaning but thanks u farah for adding meaing and sucha a meaningful song

I already dedicated this song once for khushi again doing it as I think its too meaningful

Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,

Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,

Soche dil ki aisa kaash ho,

Tujhko ek nazar meri talash ho,

Jaise khwab hai ankhon mein basse meri,

Waise needon pe silvate pade teri,

Bheege bheege armaano ki rahad hai,

Haii

Geeli geeli khwahish bhi to behad hai,

Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,

Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,

res

that heer song you used!!!! what an apt use gal!! i am a punjabi..and i know both love stories by heart, but i could never understand why the gal asked for being sahiba and not heer. u know, unlike all other love stories where gal's name is taken before boy's name, like heer-raanjha,sohni-mahiwaal,laila-majnu... in the sahiba's story her name succeeds that of mirza's, making it mirza-sahiba. its because in other stories, the heroines gave their life, their everything for their love, but in this story, sahiba for a moment became weak against her love for her brothers. she decided to break mirza's bow,coz she knew that he would kill her brothers if they affronted. this in fact resulted in death of mirza and then sahiba killed herself in grief...

i really want to know if you deliberately used sahiba's reference, to indicate towards some future plot of story??

Res

unres..

Such beautifully you put up "HEER",, and xplained it so well as well.. Main te sahibaan hoyi! Such tru for khushi.. Foregetting her insecurities and doubts.. Just believing that some day she'll change his views.. Like his other small things dat she did!

And the haldi part wass so cute..
Both of them were soo good together.. And Arnav being CARTOON! Smeared wid haldi.:)

Fantastic update.

wow that was amazing update...
so kushi is going to take the right step ...hope it wont blow ...

That wan awesome update
Wanted to be the first but people were already here 😡