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Posted: 12 years ago
Even though Khushi was jealous but then yeah she always is lol. Though I,as a reader didn't feel insecure haha. Coz you have made it pretty much clear that once Arnav commits to something, phir woh apne aap ki bhi nahi sunta LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so liking this Sami, whom we need now.

So happy to know what effect the sheetal is giving you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah, please dont be in a rush to wrap up this story...There are some readers here like me too...who are happy to enjoy these little hide&seek romances, the flirtatious Arnav, the Nhok Jhoks and the happy wedding track. So the story is perfectly fine paced for me!

Coming to the update:

So Sami is here for a reason! I never thought from this angle. But although she has been here for just 2 updates now, I feel for this girl! To love and lose...And Arnav that too. I only wish that she atleast tells him that she loves him. For some reason I feel love that has never been told will weigh heavier all your life and the scar will be deeper. And since it is Arnav I am sure he wont act like a jerk and will make her feel better :) I dont think he is still fully aware of Sami's feelings for him or is he?



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Posted: 12 years ago
I Felt bad for sammy :(
for a minute i thought it was Shyam who saw them
but i am glad its all good
though shyam's goodness is not going down well with me hmmm
loved yur quick update
keep updating

congos for new thread

PS : i keep re-reading your OS : nafrat paas ane na dey , Mohabbat door janey na dey '' and i cant help but wish if you can write a second part for it PLEASE !!! ... I hate IPK cvs for letting go of that track like that :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update... Loved sammy and her talk to khushi!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...I Just loved the song u used...its was so apt...I totally agree that the song was never used properly in the show...but I feel so happy that u used it so beautifully ..
Samiya-khushi's Convo was really touching...I feel bad for samiya but she really is a strong girl...samiya's last line was hilarious...arnav is too Much

sometimes ..he thinks only he is bestowed with a functioning brain ...but he is mistaken big time...hehehe
continue soon..and Congrats for the new thread
Edited by luvraj4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Did i ever thank you for using bits n pieces from the show in your story ? If not then please take it now ..🤗 I loved the scenes which were similar to the show but you have penned down in a different way.. You rightly said that the title song was apt for the dancing as i have a=very weak for that song and the only time i was happy in the show where it's used for the hug scene (where Arnav scared Khusi and she came running in to his arms) ...
Loved Samy and Khusi's part... Now i understand why Samy was needed in this story. Khusi has already knew that Arnav feel for her but knowing it from someone else who had Arnav in his Casanova image and in love with him herself , is another thing...
As Saiyuu said Samy worked as Arnav's mom's letter in the show. To tell Khusi never give up on them , fight for both of them even if it's against Arnav himself and most importantly be with him forever in every thick n thin...
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I just hope Khusi never feel guilty about Samy knowing how she felt for Arnav once.
I had a laugh when Arnav without knowing anything what samy and Khusi discussed , promptly apologize to Khusi thinking Samy must have told about some of his past deeds. 😆 ...
I am waiting for Samy and Arnav's part if you are planning that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..really very good going..interesting update...keep it up.. please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
After ur little note m like thank god,Itz nt sheetal like u have sed!
N d note was helpful in understanding a few things. ..

Naughty arnav , making hp/op (dnt remember which brother it was) lie to get khushi alone 😃 n oboy, did I enjoy their intimate moment.. 😉 17 pins??? Ha ha ha. ...no wonder she was drawn to arnav , the magnet!! (Sorry lame joke 😃

M not gonna say poor Sami coz I ddnt wanna pity her. ..I just want her to see wat a great guy NK is!! 😉 ...may she n nk wud have a spin-off story ^_^

uff! Itz irriting to comment using fone so will write more in nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
thanks for the PM...

update soon...

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