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Posted: 10 years ago
part 12 - I liked that all three were walking in sync, very bonding...omg what had naina done...splashed water on pp...poor naina...had to face pp in his cabin...glad that her crush came to rescue her...she took the advantage of distracted pp...
you are making this Library Guy very mysterious...lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 13 - naina knew that she could make geet fool...she caught her with with the last line of the book and why she wnated to change the end...but what naina trying to say geet...little bit scary...was she ready to prefer death over separation...?...oh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 14 - so beautiful part...loved how you described their lonesomeness admist of the cheering crowd and they talked silently with their eyes..
again they met... sameer wanted to meet her once but he reminded his promise to geet...but destiny made them meet again...how much they were trying not to cross each others' path but they are destined to meet...
eager to read more to know what happened bet them...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

"Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn't it? It makes you so vulnerable. It opens your chest and it opens up your heart and it means that someone can get inside you and mess you up."

This is how you did ?Maggie...you ripped my heart..and healed it with pure innocent love!!!👏👏


"There is never a time or place for true love. It happens accidentally, in a heartbeat, in a single flashing, throbbing moment."

To Ms.Weirdo -
"We're all a little weird. And life is a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall into mutually satisfying weirdness"and call it love"true love."

"The very essence of romance is uncertainty."

gal..its too good to put in words... u made my day..and specially a rough wakeful night..as i am going to think about them all night! Thanks!


"A presence so strong with his gaze contrastingly soft" ----- abhaaa..toucheddd... 🤗 come here darling..hugs 🤗


KITTTUUU🤗

First few lines are so true😃 loved reading your comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sameer ❤️
I dont know how do make me fall in love with ur characters? "pouting"

That's bad u know becoz u are becoming Mr. India quite often nowadays.

I want more please.

Gud Luck for ur placement. Get urself placed in "Italy". maybe we will get some added bonus after tat.
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks 4 updating! triple amazing updates! beautifully written! good luck with everything! Y is this in FF n nt in GHSP fprums?? Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 14
awesome...
Sameer to the rescue...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love you!!!
I just simply..madly .. deeply..sadly..badly love you !! 🤗

Loved it!!! 🤗❤️

it reminds me of "Rains"

Rains.

They always came in abundant, and flooded everything in its wake; both the city and my memories.

Growing up in a slum just behind the suburbs of a city which held two contrasting worlds in its womb, rains often reminded me of congested roads, flooding drainages, leaking roofs, and of course my occasional get away to the lake nearby, my hideout.

But rains also reminded me of memories that I locked off in deep contours of my heart, never to visit.

On a rainy day like this I had met him for the first time. On a day like this, he had walked into my life


"You're bleeding" she heard him and looked down to find her knees bloody.

The only response he got was the sound of steps that indicated her departure. He looked back at the slim figure until she entered the administrative block before averting his gaze.


Rains play a vital role in your stories.. its an integral part.. just makes ppl at ease..and ,... *bliss* 😳


My my my!!!! ☺️

"I forgive you for laughing at me when I fell down two days back" she whispered to the poster.

"Maybe you aren't as bad a person as I thought"


Awww she knew all along 😃😆. awww i love naina.. and Sameer !!


is this the same smile Naina fallen for??😆

Meri tho..lat lag gayi!!

You better focus on your readers and their greediness for YOUR stories!!! 😆and give me more and more updates!!

😆



Edited by KittuPratzz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow. words!!
U r amazing u know. I dont know wat to write.


come back soon to write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
What- Sameer is going back. 😲
U r updating back to back 🥳

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