SwaRon Story 'After Break UP' - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS

Intro of os was fab whom u in search one iternal couple
fab yaar

Sharon who was believe in enjoyment n they marry each other while running from home
swayam doubted her as she was a lesbian or not n they divorce from each other just cuz of small misunderstanding

when swayam came bak to india to institute, he meet her
they start as frnds with each other
she also find date for him n force him to go
but to her surprise, his date was not fatso, she is hot n sexy
sharon feeling different when she watchin his date

swayam also feel different when she jealous of his date. So he started to date kriya
kriyaansh reveal that they done all this to lessen distance betweem them

swayam confront her, apologize her n once again confessed his love to her
swayam want run away to get marry with her was fab
sharon also came to know abt what kriyaansh did for them

lovely
Edited by Suni1986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Edited comment on page 2 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
fabulous os👏👏

beautifully written😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spongy

beautifully written👏👏👏

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#ff0000">but isn't it d same story which was in "TERI MERI LOVE STORIES" i remember seeing dis episode...</font>
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Well I haven't seen teri meri love stories so i dont know what was there in the episode you mentioned...coming back to this story well i had read a similar type of story in my college library which written by neil o'brain i guess...but that was not on dance actually in that story both of them were singers and it was high on emotions this lesbo thing was my innovation to that story...so ya this is a story inspired from a book...if it goes simillar with anything then that person must have read that book i guess...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Amazing story :-) its similar to a TMLS story but with a SwaRon twist
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Pratik wow super work
As I said earlier you are a fantastic writer and as usual your work was mind blowing
Swayam ne sharon se bhag k shadi ki n after that he thinks that sharon is lesbian coz of juliet rofl
And most shocking part is juliet is a puppy 🤣
But anth bhala to sab bhala
Lovely os thanx for pm
N now update love struck
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, this one was totally unpredictable. Didn't know what actually was in store until the very end. The story narration was totally new as well. All in all, a nice read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Omg its too long..
Want to say wow for dis long story..
Great job..
Nd d narration style is fab..
Just loved it ..
Swaron fight then patch up ...
Dono tym bhag k shaadi :p :D
they r just cutie pie..
Great story
thnx for pm..
Waiting for ur love struck update..
Edited by d3lover90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
This is very LONg yaar
soo nyc update /os n lovelust update plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved reading it... Beautifully written..
Liked d way of narration..
Dis is defenetly one of fav os on swaron

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