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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! congratulations for the thread!!:) and nice update!:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulatins for new thread 🥳

awesome update
loved the cute bonding b/w
devar bhabhi
jeeju saali
continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww so cute and adorable update 😊
The bhabi devar convo was with full of memories jst made me smile
And the jiju saali convo was jst amazing
Love their parts they are jst so cute ❤️

At the end the hubbies helping their wives was jst so cute 😊

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry I was not able to comment earlier. Your update was nice. Waiting for the weekend. So give us a new update and a long one. 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey it was an awesome update dear 😊
Loved the foursome group a lot 😛
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello my Lovely People!
Thank you so much for congratulations and comments and likes.
Really means a lot!! 😃
Here is an early weekend update... Enjoy!! 😉
Please do comment and let me know what you feel about it...

Part 59:


Viren, Jeevika, Manvi and Virat had their breakfast and are walking again...
Manvi and Virat walking together while Viren and Jeevika walking behind them...

Jeevika: Oh my god
Viren: What happened Jeevika? * looks at her*
Jeevika: My dhruvieee
Viren has a smile on his face when he hears her say this name..
Jeevika: What will he have for Breakfast? Do you think he will be awake? I don't think so... He must be tired. Oh no he will be cranky then... Oh god. Maa will be worried then.
Viren: Jeeevika Jeevikaaa... Stop worrying so much ...
Jeevika: How can I not worry about him? Dhruvieee must be hungry and here I had my breakfast... What kind off a mother am I? * sad face*
Viren: Please don't get sad now * concern* I'll call home... You speak to Maa
Jeevika sighs..
Viren: Hello Maa
Vanshika: Viren beta.. Kya hua?
Viren: Actually Maa... Is Dhruv awake?
Vanshika: Yes Beta...
Jeevika: VirenJiii * extends hand for the phone*
Viren hands the phone to Jeevika..
Jeevika: Maa... Is Dhruvie awake?
Vanshika: Yes Beta... He has had his breakfast and is playing right now... Don't worry.
Jeevika sighs...
Jeevika: Maa can you hand the phone to him?
Vanshika: Just a moment beta...
Vanshika: Dhruviiieee come here...
Dhruv comes running to Vanshika...
Dhruv: Yes Dadi...
Vanshika: Mummaa * hands him the phone*
Dhruv: Good Morning Mumzieee
Jeevika: Good Morning Dhruvieee... Bache did you eat your breakfast properly?
Dhruv: Yes Mummaa.. Where are you?
Jeevika: Mummaa is out for a walk... I will be home very soon.
Dhruv: Okay Mummaa... We are playing blindfold game * excited*
Jeevika: Wooow! Are you having fun?
Dhruv: Yes Mummaa
Jeevika: very good Dhruviee... Mummaa will have to go now... Enjoy your game baby..
Dhruv: Bye Mummaa
Jeevika smiles while ending the call...
Viren: All well? * side hugs her*
Jeevika: Jee * smiling*
Viren: It's all about Dhruviee now.. And after a few months two new members... So I will last in the line.
Jeevika giggles...
Virat turns around..
Virat: Bhai please give a piggyback... So tired...
Jeevika and Manvi giggle at Viren's expression...
Manvi: Virat.. Please pity on Jeeju. He can't carry a fat guy like you...
Virat: Manviii shhh ...Please bhai...
Viren: Hmmm... Virat. I have no problem but what if we both fall down?
Jeevika and Manvi are giggling...
Virat: Bhabhi and Manvi... What is so funny?
Viren: Yes why are you two giggling?
Manvi: Just look at Jeeju's expressions and Virat's expression
* giggles*
Virat: Bhai don't listen to them... Please...
Viren: Hmmm... Okay then but we will go back home...
Manvi: Don't worry Jeeju... We will take you from a long route * hi5's jeevika*
Viren: Jeevika.. Will you do this to your VirenJi? * innocent face*
Jeevika melts at his face..
Jeevika: Nahi VirenJi
Manvi: Oye Hoye Your VirenJi * nudges Jeevika*
Jeevika looks down shyly..
Virat: See Bhabhi... Come in our team.. Manvi is bullying you...
Viren: Yes come in our team * holds her hand*
Jeevika is lost in Viren's eyes...
Manvi: Diii... You can't leave me alone * holds her other hand*
Jeevika looks at Manvi and then at Viren...
Viren: Pleaase.. * smiling*
Manvi: Diii * smiling*
Jeevika: I'm walking home by myself * sad face and starts to walk away*
Viren: Oooh nooo...
Manvi: Crap
Viren: Sorry Sorry Jeevika..
Manvi: Dii really Sorry...
Jeevika turns around and winks at them...
Manvi: Diii * shocked*
Viren is shocked too...
Virat: Good one Bhabhi..
Viren: Bhabhi ke bache * hits him*
Virat: Sorry Sorry...
Manvi starts to walk towards Jeevika... And they both start to walk
Virat: Bhaii Piggyback?
Viren: Viraaat Yaar... What if we fall?
Virat: Bhaii you are really strong... Don't worry...
Virat jumps on Viren and Viren gives him a piggyback..
Viren: It's not that bad. Virat you are not that heavy * smiling*
Virat: Thanks Bhai
They both catch up with Jeevika and Manvi...
Jeevika: Oh my god... VirenJi... Virat
Manvi: Kya Baat hai... Ek hazaron mein meri bhaiya hai * giggles*
Virat: Bhai what a nice slogan for us * smiling*
Viren laughs...
They soon reach home...
Everyone is in the garden...
Vanshika: Viren... Why are you carrying Virat? * rushes to them*
Viren: ViratJi was feeling tired
Virat: Thank you VirenJi * jumps off the piggyback*
They both laugh.
Vanshika: Phewww... You two got me worried..
Dhruv comes running to them... He greats Viren, Virat, Manvi and finally goes to Jeevika...
Jeevika goes on her knees...
Dhruv: My Mummaa * pulls her cheeks*
Jeevika: My Dhruvieee * pulls his cheeks*
Dhruv: Mummaa is it your yoga time?
Jeevika: No bache... Mummaa will do yoga later..
Dhruv smiles..
Jeevika: So what were you doing?
Dhruv: Just talking to Dadi and Beeji
Jeevika: Very good * stands up and holds his hand*
Dhruv: Mummaa..
Jeevika: Hmm...
Dhruv: Will you take me to the river ghat?
Jeevika: Yes Beta.. In the evening. Then we will put diya in the river..
* smiling*
Dhruv: Wow * excited* and meet my shivJi too
Jeevika : Yes beta. * smiling*
Virat: Dhruv...
Dhruv looks at Virat...
Virat: We meet your friend today morning * smiling*
Dhruv is confused...
Viren: Friend? Oye Virat? What are you saying? * confused*
Manvi: Virat don't make him sad...
Virat: I won't...
Dhruv: Who was my friend?
Virat: A little Monkey * winks*
Dhruv laughs...
Jeevika smiles and nodes in disbelieve...
Manvi: And Dhruvieee.. Your friend slapped your Chachu Maasu
* laughs*
Dhruv: Oh no... Are you okay Chachu Maasu?
Virat: I'm fine Dhruv * smiling* Im sorry Dhruv...
Dhruv just hugs Virat...
Viren goes and sits next to Vanshika on charpai and lays his head on her lap. Vanshika smooths his hair and Viren just shuts his eyes...
Jeevika sits on another Charpai and Manvi sits next her.. Virat picks up Dhruv and turns him upside down; Dhruv is laughing.
Manvi: Viraaat! What are you doing?
Jeevika: Don't worry manvi... Dhruvie loves doing this... After all he is a mini monkey at times..
Manvi smiles..
Swamini comes over and gives a Laado to Manvi and Jeevika...
Manvi: I swear Di.. I'm not getting pregnant again * whispers to Jeevika*
Jeevika: That's what I said Mannu but see * whispers back*
Manvi: That also with Twins... Tusse Great Ho * winks*
Jeevika winks back and smiles..
Swamini: BauJi must have had his shower... Who wants to go next?
Vanshika: Di you go * smile*
Swamini: Teek hai * smiles*
Dhruv comes running to Beeji...
Dhruv: Badi Beeji?
Beeji: Yes Bache * smiling*
Dhruv: can me and Chachu Maasu water the garden? * excited*
Beeji: Yes bache * smiles*
Dhruv runs back to Virat..
Dhruv: Let's water the garden..
Virat: Chalo...
Viren is fast asleep in Vanshika's lap...
Manvi: Maa is Jeeju sleeping?
Vanshika: I think so beta..
Manvi: So cute...
Vanshika: When Viren was little he used to sleep just like this
* smooths his hair*
Beeji: We don't even realise when these children grow up..
Vanshika: You are so right Beeji..
Dhruv: Chachu Maasu I will water these plants and you will water these plants..
Virat: Why will you water more plants?
Dhruv: Because I want to * smiles*
Virat: I also want to water the plants..
Dhruv: Pleaseee
Virat: Dhruv this is not fair.. Pleaase
Manvi: The water is getting wasted * shouts*
Virat and Dhruv: Shhh...* say this at the same time*
Manvi: So rude!
Jeevika giggles...
Dhruv: You can water more to the garden..
Virat: That's okay then.. * smiles*
Dhruv: Can we have a water fight in the evening?
Virat: How about now?
Dhruv: let me ask Mummaa.. * starts to walk away*
Virat: Oh crap.. * holds on to him*
Dhruv just looks at Virat...
Virat: Dhruv what sort of a boy are you?
Dhruv: Im a good boy..
Virat: Let's just have a water fight..
Dhruv: But Daddy is sleeping..
Virat: Hmm... That's a good point... Okay then we shall play in the evening...
Virat: Im so excited about Holi Dhruv..
Dhruv: Me too but Holi is far away..
Virat: 7 months.. * sad face*
Dhruv: Chachu Maasu can we get some balloons too?
Virat: Balloons? * confused*
Dhruv: To fill them up and throw them at people...
Virat: Who says you are a good boy? Cheeky Monkey * tickles him*
Dhruv starts to run around the garden and Virat chases him..
Manvi: Oye Viraaat!!! * shouts*
Beeji: Manviii!! he is your husband..
Manvi: Ooops! * embarrassed*
Jeevika giggles at Manvi's expression.
Vanshika: Beeji Manvi and Virat will never change.. Their relationship is just like that * smiles*
Bade Beeji: Oye you should respect Virat now... I didn't even say your Par Dadaji's name.. Shameless girl
Manvi: Kya Baat hai... You will always mention Par Dadaji in your talks.. * winks*
Bade Beeji: Chup Kar Shaitaan
Manvi: Oye Hoye * hugs Bade Beeji*
Everyone is smiling at their conversation..
Jeevika: Viraat * shouts his name*
Virat: Jee Bhabhi * still chasing Dhruv*
Jeevika: Turn off the tap Virat..
Virat: Ooops sorry Bhabhi * shuts the tap*
Dhruv walks to him...
Virat: Caught you * picks him up*
Dhruv laughs...
Beeji: VanshikaJi do you want to go for a shower?
Vanshika: Viren is sleeping... You go first..
Beeji: Teek hai.. * walks inside the house*
Vanshika is smoothing Viren's hair.. Manvi and Jeevika are just looking at their bond...
Manvi: Maa... Do you miss their childhood?
Vanshika: Of course I do beta.. But Dhruv completes that place and now three more are coming so I'm going to be Dadi to four children
* happy*
Manvi: Maa the smile on your face when Jeeju slept on your lap was priceless.. * smiling*
Vanshika: When you experience this in the future.. You will be very very happy..
Jeevika: Maa should we wake up VirenJi?
Vanshika: Let him sleep * smiles*
Virat and Dhruv come where everyone is sitting...
Virat is holding Dhruv upside down and Dhruv is smiling..
Jeevika: My mini monkey * pulls his cheek*
Dhruv: Chachu Maasu put me down please... * smiling*
Virat places him down...
Dhruv: Daddy is still sleeping..
Virat: Dhruv should we make him up?
Dhruv: Yes * smiling*
Virat: let me get my handkerchief out...
Dhruv: Why?
Virat: Wait * twists the handkerchief and moves it around Viren's ear*
Viren moves a little...
Vanshika: Yeh kya.. * smiles*
Jeevika and Manvi are smiling too...
Virat: Dhruv mess bhai's hair and i'll tickle him with this handkerchief.. As soon as Bhai opens his eyes... Run!
Dhruv nodes..
Virat tickles Viren while Dhruv rapidly messes his hair hair; Viren opens his eyes. Dhruv and Virat run away laughing...
Viren: Oh my god... * gets up and runs after them*
He gets hold of Virat..
Viren: You idiot.. * hits him*
Virat: Sorry Bhai disturbed your beautiful dream.. I know you were dreaming about Bhabhi.. * runs away again*
Viren: Tu ruk.. * runs behind him*
Dhruv is hiding behind a tree..
Virat is standing behind Jeevika and Viren in front of her.
Viren: Tu ruk Virat... Wait and watch what I do to you...
Virat: Kya Bhai.. You dream about someone and blame it on me... You were shouting someone's name in your dream... Shameless * winks*
Viren: Viraaat * runs around to catch him*
Vanshika, Manvi and Jeevika are laughing...
Vanshika: Beta... Be careful * laughing* this just reminds me of their childhood.
Jeevika and Manvi laugh..
Vanshika: One of the incidents I remember.. Viren was sleeping and Virat painted his whole face. * laughs* they were running around the whole house..
Jeevika and Manvi laugh at this story..
Virat: Na Na Na Na Na * sticks his tongue out*
Viren jumps on him and they both fall down...
Virat: Ouccch..
Viren: You idiot * hits him*
Virat: Bhai Im not a swimming pool that you can jump in z.
Dhruv comes running from behind the tree and runs to Jeevika...
Dhruv: Mummaaa * while running*
Virat: Oye Partnerrr
Manvi: What Virat?
Virat: Not you... My other partner... Oye Dhruv help me Yaar
Viren: no one is going to help you.. I'm seriously going to take you to the ghat and throw you in the river * smiling*
Virat: Oh god.. My brother wants to throw me in the river... What kind off a brother are you?
Viren: Nautanki... Get up * gets up and extends his hand*
Virat hugs Viren.. And Viren hugs him back...
Virat: Love you a lot Bhaii
Viren: Love you too Nautanki * pats him*
They both walk to where everyone is sitting..
Vanshika: Are you two okay?
Viren and Virat: Jee Maa * smiling*
They both sit beside Vanshika...
Virat: My mini monkey partner... No help for your Chachu Maasu
Dhruv: You were a very bad boy... * smiling*
Virat: Accha.. So who messed up bhai's hair ?
Dhruv looks down quietly...
Virat: Oye Hoye... Look at his expressions.. Seems like a new dulhan
Everyone laughs...
Dhruv gets up from his sit and walks to Virat. He sits on his lap.
Virat: Mini Monkey * hugs him tightly*
Dhruv: what is a dulhan? * confused*
Everyone laughs at this...
Virat: Don't worry beta... You will become one in future * laughs*
Dhruv: Daady... Sorry for messing your hair..
Viren: That's okay Beta * smiles*
Vanshika: Dhruvie wants to go for a shower?
Dhruv: Yes Dadi..* smiles*
Vanshika: Chalo bache * holds his hand and they walk inside the house*

Anika
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
res!

#unres!
Look whose first? Its mee! Party time... 🥳 🥳 🥳
Victory dance!! [:D/] [:D/]
Eee
I always love reading your stories to the core!!! 😃
This is so very adorable!!
Jeevika getting tensed for Dhruv is Awwwiiieee!
Dhruv is super excited to enjoy his trip in rishikesh!!
Viren sleeping on vanshika's lap was the cherry on the top! :)
Loved their bonding,
and when it comes to bonding how can we forget Virat and Dhruviee?
Chachu masu and Dhruvie rock together!
I loved the way they woke up Viren and that tom & Jerry fight b/w VV brothers and how could we forget the way Viren piggy backed Virat!
Adorable!
I loved it!
Jeeman are not ready to get pregnant again bcoz of the laadu's hahahahahah!
Superly superb!

Continue soon!
Victory dance again! [:D/] [:D/]
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a cute update! Loved everything about it!
Firstly,the virika talk! How I love them!
The piggy bank! Omg! Could so imagine this! I love this jodi! 😆
Viren slept on vansjika's lap..aww! I wanna see a similar scene in the show too,it will be so sweet'
Virat and dhruv! God! Their chemistry is out of this world! Love the way virat is always teasing dhruv! They r more like siblings!
But then again,viren is a father figure to virat! I m thinking deep!
Virat and viren fall made a lol hard!
Seriously,loved the update!
I m craving for more!
Plz update soon and if possible then pm me!
Thanks. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww i am so in love with mini monkey
kitna cute hai
the other son bond of viren and vanshkia is so cute
and the brother bond
and the piggy back
aww its so magical
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Love you Anika.
Thanks for the pre weekend update.
Hahaha bechare viren ki kya halat hogayi hogi piggybank ke baad.
Loved the update.
Actually I am going to be a little greedy now.
You have to update this weekend plus can you update your story on 26th. That is Tuesday.
I am asking for a gift as its my birthday. So please will you be able to update.
And don't worry will update my story too on 26th as a treat to all of you guys.😊😊
Anyways loved the update to the core and I love little Dhruvieee😊😊
Edited by Sameeha456 - 12 years ago

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