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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much Guys 😃
I shall be updating the next part tomorrow... Tuesday 26th march 😉
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Originally posted by: -Anika-

Thank you so much Guys 😃
I shall be updating the next part tomorrow... Tuesday 26th march 😉
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time to updateee!!!

Anika where can I go haunt you?

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Ani, its my birthday!! Now be a good girl and give me a treat.
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@ Sameeha456: Give me few minutes Birthday girl 😉
@Kays94: Little spammer I shall update soon... Love 😃
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Originally posted by: -Anika-

@ Sameeha456: Give me few minutes Birthday girl 😉
@Kays94: Little spammer I shall update soon... Love 😃


i keep refreshing your page every 20 minutes 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello My Lovely People
Thank you so much for your lovely comments and likes... They are very encouraging 😃
Hope you like this part too.

Part 60:


Around 11am

Everyone has had shower except Virat and Viren. They both are sitting on the swings in the living room..
Everyone else is busy doing something. They are just looking at the buzz around them..
Viren: Look at everyone on a mission...
Virat: Waise where is Manvi?
Viren: I know... Jeevika is also taking so long..
Virat: I'll check in my room..
Viren: Same..

Viren knocks on the door...
Jeevika: Kaun hai?
Viren: Jeevika? Are you okay?
Jeevika: Have a problem.. hold on a minute..
She opens the door and let's Viren inside the room..
Viren: Kya hua Jeevika?
Jeevika is still in her robe..
Viren: Jeevika you are still not ready..
Jeevika: VirenJii... My clothes are really tight..
Viren: What... all of a sudden?
Jeevika: Jee... Can you please unpick these seam allowance for me to make them a bit loose so I can wear it..
Viren: Basically take these stitches off?
Jeevika: Jee... Or I can wear a saree
Viren: Don't worry...
Jeevika is busy taking stitches off other salwar suits..
Viren: There you go..
Jeevika: Wow VirenJi.. You did it so quickly...
Viren: Do you need any other help...
Jeevika: No thank you VirenJi..
Viren is taking out his towel from the bag when he sees Jeevika looking at herself in the mirror..
She is looking at the size of her stomach and then she sighs..
Viren folds his arms and just looks at her..
Jeevika is trying her best to cover her stomach and isn't able to.
Viren: Just let it be...
Jeevika : Hmmm... * looks at Viren*
Viren: Don't try to cover it up... It won't work * smiles and walks to her*
Jeevika: Last time it wasn't this bad... But now it's just too much
* embarrassed*
Viren: Jeevikaaa * cups her face and kisses her forehead* It is special.. Two little lives inside you.
Jeevika: VirenJii what if I become really fat after the pregnancy?
* sad*
Viren: Heyy... My Jeevika can never be fat.. You will just become health and the glow on your skin will make me blush * pulls her cheek*
Jeevika smiles shyly
Viren: Oye Hoye
Jeevika: VirenJii * hits him on his chest*
Viren: Don't worry... After pregnancy you will put on weight but I know you will lose it very quickly ones these two little ones start to make you run around the house. * smiles*
Jeevika giggles
Jeevika: Waise what do you think they will be?
Viren: Im sure this time.. They are girls.
Jeevika: Accha.. What if they are boys?
Viren: Hmm... Well then next time we will have to hope for a girl
Jeevika: VirenJiii * looks down shyly*
Viren: Im serious Jeevika... I want a girl so if not this time... Then next time * winks*
Jeevika: VirenJi * pushes him*
Viren let's out a laugh and then goes to the bathroom.. Jeevika is just smiling.

Virat knocks on the door..
Manvi: Viraaat!
Virat: Boliye Madam
Manvi: I'll open the door..
Virat: You need help with the pleats of your saree
Manvi: Kya Baat hai ViratJii... Tusse great ho * winks*
Virat: I know ManviJi.. * arranges her pleats*
Manvi: I'll have to buy maternity clothes now..
Virat: You mean maternity saree and salwar suits...
Manvi: there no such things as maternity saree * laughs*
Virat: How am I meant to know these things? * still arranging her pleats*
Manvi is just laughing..
Manvi: Viraaat I don't like the way Im putting on weight.. Look at my stomach, my arms and my face will soon become a Laado
Virat: ManviJii... Having a baby is not that easy...
Manvi: I know but Di didn't put on so much weight when she was pregnant with Dhruv...
Virat: Bhabhi did put on weight... Do you want to see those pictures?
Manvi: No... But I don't want to go fat and then you will tease me..
Virat: Manviii... * cups her face*
Manvi: Viraaat i don't...
Virat: Listen to me... I would never ever tease you with your weight.. I can't even imagine how women carry a baby for nine months. It's truly magical. I'm so happy and lucky that you are going to be the mother of our child. I know he or she will be very lucky to have you and of course me as a dad
Manvi smiles a little...
Virat: See this smile... The baby will smile when you smile. It will be upset when you are upset so just be happy and only happy okay?
Manvi nodes...
Virat: Now smile... A big smile
Manvi just pulls his cheeks...
Manvi: Viraaat..
Virat: Yes...
Manvi: Go for a shower * pushes him*
Virat: Anything for you madam * walks outside with his towel*
Manvi: Thank you * Twirls slowly*

Around 5pm

Everyone is out for a walk..

Swamini, Vanshika, Pinky, Kadambari, Beeji, Bade Beeji, Dadaji, Inder and Madan decide to go for a yoga session for the evening..

Dabbu, Shlok, Dhruv are with Jeevika, Viren, Virat and Manvi..

Jeevika and Manvi are walking in the front with Shlok and Dabbu while Viren, Virat and Dhruv are walking behind them...
Dabbu: Dii can we have some Kulfi? * excited*
Manvi: Dabbeee... We just ate before we left house. You are not eating anything for 1 hour. Then maybe a Kulfi will do...
Dabbu: This is not fair Manvi Dii... Jeevika Diii tell her..
Jeevika: Dabbu... One hour then eat the Kulfi...
Dabbu: Teek hai..
Shlok: The weather is so nice over here... Pleasant and the breeze is so refreshing..

Dhruv is walking in the middle of Viren and Virat; holding their hands.
Dhruv: Daadyy?
Viren: Yes..
Dhruv: can we have a water fight today?
Viren: Today?
Virat: Yes ... Pleaseee Viren daddy * excited*
Viren: Virat beta and Dhruv beta by the time we reach home it will be dark and then playing.. Won't be fun. How about tomorrow morning around 10 before we have our shower?
Virat and Dhruv: Thank you Dadddy
Viren: Viraaat
Dhruv is laughing..
Dhruv nudges Virat's hand and Virat looks at him..
Dhruv: Balloons * mouths*
Virat: Huh? * confused*
Viren looks at them and just smiles..
Dhruv: Balloons * winks*
Virat: Oooh * pulls his cheek*
Viren: What about Balloons?
Virat: Nothing... I just want some Balloons
Viren: You want Balloons? * raises his eye brows*
Virat: Hmm... I mean... Not me... Dhruv. Yes he wants Balloons... Right Dhruv?
Dhruv: Yes * smiles*
Viren: I know you two are up to something.. * suspicious*
Virat: Kya Bhaii... Look at us. We are so innocent
Viren: Hmmm...
They all reach the ghat...
Virat, Viren, Dabbu and Shlok go inside the Shiv Mandir near the ghat while Jeevika, Manvi and Dhruv walk towards the ghat...
They sit on the stairs near the ghat...
Jeevika: Dhruvieee this is the ghat * smiles*
Dhruv is just looking around...
Jeevika: This is Ganga river..
Manvi: Dhruviee when me and your Mummaa were very little we just come here all the time...
Dhruv: Why Maanu Masi?
Manvi: Because our Mummaa and papa live here..
Dhruv: My nana and nani?
Jeevika: Yes Dhruvieee..
Dhruv: But I can't see them...
Manvi: Only me and Di can feel them...
Dhruv: I want to talk to them * sad face*
Jeevika: Dhruviiee they can't talk back to you but they listen to you. They live with BhagvanJi... * smiles*
Dhruv: Hello Nana and Nani * joins his hand and shuts his eyes*
Manvi and Jeevika just look at him with tears in their eyes...
Dhruv: My name is Dhruv. My mumma's name is Mummaa and this is my Mannu Masi...
Jeevika and Manvu giggle at this...
He opens his eyes and smiles at them
Dhruv: Did nana and nani hear me?
Jeevika and Manvi node.
Jeevika: Maanu should we get the diya now?
Manvi: Di.. Let's just wait for everyone else to come from Mandir.
Jeevika nodes..
Dhruv: I want to go to the Mandir...
Jeevika: Dhruvieee we will go there in a few minutes..
Viren, Virat, Dabbu and Shlok come where they are sitting..
Jeevika: VirenJi will you get diyas from that stall?
Viren: How many should I get?
Jeevika: Hmm... Around four.
Viren: Oye Virat... Chal.
Viren and Virat walk to the stall to get Diyas. They return back.
Jeevika and Manvi light the diyas.
Shlok places a diya in the river and does his prayers and then Dabbu places the diya.. They float away.
Dhruv is really excited...
Manvi, Virat and Dhruv place a diya together and Dhruv slaps as he does it.
Viren, Jeevika and Dhruv then place a diya.. Dhruv joins his hand and does his prayer...
Jeevika: Should we go to the Mandir now?
Shlok: Again?
Jeevika: Shlokuuu... Dhruvie, Manuu and me still haven't been there..
Shlok: Ooops..
Dabbu: Di can me and Shlok just sit here...
Jeevika: Teek hai * smiles*
Virat helps Manvi get up...
Viren extends his hand and so does Dhruv...
Jeevika looks at their hands and smiles... She places one hand in Viren's hand and the other in Dhruv's hand and gets up...

They all go inside the mandir. After a few minutes they come out and call for Dabbu and Shlok. They all walk back towards home...

Around 7.00pm

Everyone else is sitting in the garden when they arrive...
Dhruv runs to Vanshika and hugs her...
Vanshika: Mera bacha.. How was the ghat?
Dhruv: Very good Dadi... The diyas were floating in the river...
Vanshika: Woow * grins*
Dhruv: We went to the shiv Mandir too
Vanshika: Accha.. Very good.
Dhruv: Dadii * whispers in her ears*
Vanshika listen to him carefully..
Virat: Oye Mini monkey... She is my Mummaa * hugs Vanshika*
Vanshika laughs..
Dhruv: My Dadi * hugs Vanshika*
Virat: Ssshhh
Dhruv: Shhh * smiling*
Vanshika: Virat why are you bullying my Dhruv?
Virat laughs...
Dhruv: Dadi can you make me chocolate milk * whispers to Vanshika*
Vanshika: Sure bache but Say this to Beeji * whispers back to Dhruv*
Dhruv smiles and goes to Beeji...
Dhruv: Bade Beejii
Beeji: Bol Bache * makes him sit on her lap*
Dhruv: Can you make me chocolate milk? * whispers to Beeji*
Beeji: Sure bache * laughs*
Vanshika laughs with her...
Vanshika: Chaliye Beeji... I'll come with you too.
Beeji, Vanshika and Dhruv go inside..
Viren: Why did they...
Jeevika: Chocolate milk
Viren smiles...
Manvi: Diii *excited*
Jeevika: Kya hua Maanu?
Manvi: Oh my god!!! * happy*
Jeevika: Maaanuuu.. * smiling*
Manvi: Dii... Can we sleep in terrace? * excited*
Jeevika: Oh my god... Yes * hugs Manvi*
They both start to babble things really quickly.
Viren: Only they can understand what they are saying * laughs*
Viren: So exciting Bhai * jumps on Viren*
Viren catches him...
Viren: Viraaat mere Bhai..
Virat: Yo Bhai...
Viren: I won't catch you the next time you jump on me...
Virat: Haiye mein lut Gaya.. My Bhai doesn't love me anymore.. Haaaiyeee * places his hand on his forehead*
Viren: Nautankiii * places him down*
They both start to laugh..
Viren: Madan Chachu.. Can we sleep there?
Madan: of course Viren beta... It should be fun...
Inder: Let's go up and start the arrangements then..
Madan: Who is going to sleep upstairs then?
Dadaji: I think I will stay in the room.. It will get quite cold at night..
Swamini: I'll stay in the room too..
Viren: Dadaji... Badi Maa Pleaase
Dadaji: Sorry beta..
Swamini: Viren you know I catch cold very easily so it's better to stay in the room..
Inder: Chalo MadanJi... Let's go in the kitchen and ask the other ladies..
Madan and Inder go inside..
Jeevika and Manvi are still babbling things..
Dhruv comes out with his chocolate milk and walks to Jeevika...
Virat blocks his way..
Viren: These two will start again... * smiles and sits down*
Dhruv: Chachu Maasuuu * looks up at him*
Virat: Mini Monkey.. Where are you going?
Dhruv: To my Mummaa
Virat: You can't go..
Dhruv: Why? * confused*
Viren: Viraaat Yaar * smiles*
Dhruv sneakily goes around Virat while he is talking to Viren...
Viren points to Dhruv..
Virat: Kyaaa Bhaii.. * sits next to viren*
Viren laughs at his expression...
Dhruv: Mummaaa? * confused*
Jeevika and Manvi stop their babbling and look at Dhruv...
Dhruv: Why are you and Maanu Maasi talking like this?
Virat: Dhruv your Maanu Maasi has lost her screw...
Manvi gives him a evil look and everyone else controls their laughter..
Dhruv: Screw.. But Chachu Maasu no one has a screw in their body... You don't have it.
Manvi laughs...
Virat: Oh god! Help me...
Viren laughs..
Virat: Dhruv I'll explain it to you later..
Jeevika: Guess what Dhruviee?
Dhruv looks at Jeevika and smiles..
Jeevika: We all are sleeping in the terrace * excited*
Dhruv: Yaaay... I'm so happy. * gives the mug to Manvi and jumps*
Manvi: Yummmy chocolate milk... Can I try it..
Dhruv nodes..
Manvi: Wow this so yummy..
Dhruv smiles..
Virat: Dhruv come here..
Dhruv sits on Virat's lap and quietly drinks his milk..
Inder and Madan come outside..
Madan: Beeji has to sleep with Bade Beeji but everyone else is sleeping upstairs..
Everyone smiles..
Viren: Chachu should we take the mattresses and other things upstairs..
Madan: Chaloo..
Virat: Dhruv let me get up..
Dhruv: I want to help too...
Virat carries Dhruv upstairs and Madan, Inder and Viren walk along too.

Anika




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reserved from my chemistry class 😆

Back From the boringest class in the world, and boy did your update make it all better ❤️
Okay well just want to let you, that if you hate spamming well get used to it! Because it is all your fault for making EVERY and I mean EVER UPDATE better and better than the one before! So don't blame me if my friends and I continue spamming your story, which we definitely will (just a heads up) 😆

Okay where to start? 😕
Just the way you firstly showed the two couple's intimate scene was just priceless!
Seriously I can't stop reading that part, it's so cute when I see a hottie like Viren loving and adoring his preggerz wife like that! Just awesomely written 👏
It's so funny how Viren is like Superman!
Instantly fixes her clothes so it's loose and comfy for her to wear
That my Viren for ya ❤️ 🤣

Then comes my favorite ❤️ DHRUVIEEE
Gosh how I adore this kid, he is just the best ❤️
Then the two gentelman help their ladies get up, gosh sooo cute
Then my Dhruvie wants chocolate milk
goodness this boy gets cuter and cuter with every update ❤️
And Virat's screw dialgoue 🤣 Probably one of the highlights of the update ❤️


So I'm like gonna keep dazzing off and imaging and dreaming everything in your story ❤️
Loveddd it to the core, and thank you for continuing so soon
Here's a bug hug for you 🤗
Hope we gets quicker updates, hehehehe
I CAN NEVER BE CONTENT ❤️
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amazing update!! :D loved it!!
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Beautiful updates..😊
Loved all the convos..
Liked both virman and Virika in ur updates...
Dhruv is so cute n he n Virat make a funny team..

Continue soon...

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