Ariya:FF fir mila mujhe saccha pyaar thread 2 link pg-51 8/11 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Nice part dear 👏 riya ki entry kab hogi wait nahi horaha hai pleas cont soon and please ad me in your buddy list please i love it your story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
nice one but short update ,
continue soon with a long part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
This part was nice lv sam n ayesha but plz riya ke entry bhi kerbaooo jaldy..
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Lovely update dear.

Loved it. Specially raisha..
They both are caring for arjun.

N regarding riya's entry,

i wanna say ki,

let her first be in field,
she ws doing her job, n etf was inogrant abt it.
So wen arjun the crime scene, he found a girl observing the body,
n then arjun wll attack on her n she wll do her defence,
n their interaction, eyelocks,
baki ka aap likh lo..
U knw abt it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
nice updates
aww chotu miss riya so much😭
shree knows where she is😲
rayesha cute
arjun trying hard to see her face in his dream😆
eagerly waiting for riya's entry
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Fantastic story
Just finished reading it
Loved Chottu and Riya's bits and flashbacks
Please write about Riya's entry in your next part and lots of Ariya moments 😉
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice update..

jaldi riya ki entry karwavo na!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Please update soon i cant wait dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
CHAPTER SEVEN


Next Morning


Shree and Chotu are in the E.T.F conference room and liza on meeting with forensic team and she comes tomorrow and both were chit-chatting about shree's new gadget.


Shree:chotu yeh dekh mere naya gadget kitna mast hai na.

Chotu:haan ek dum dhassu. Isme hum film bhi dekh sakte hai or khel bhi.

Shree: or haan kisi ki video bana bhi sakte hai or agar koi isme kuch gadbad karne ki koshish kare to yeh alert bhi kar deta hai.

Chotu:mast hai yarr.


Suddenly Aisha, rathore and arjun also enter in the conference room and the both greeted them and wishes them good morning and also shree discuss them about his gadget.


After they were playing with Shree's gadget they all are doing pending paper works almost three hours. All are exhausted.


Soon shree frustatedly asked:


shree:sir hum E.T.F officers hain hamara work hain criminal ko arrest karna or unhe saza dena lekin hum yahan paper work kyun kar rahe hai.

Chotu:haan sir shree is right hume paper work kyun diya gaya hain?

Aisha: or who bhi un cases ke jo hamne solve hi nahi kiye.

Rathore: commissioner sir ko har case ka work dena hota hai taki report banaye jaa sake or koi hum pe objection na kare or fir hamari team itni efficent hai to isliye in cases ki report hame banane ko di hain.


Suddenly rathore phone ring all are excited they think they got a new case.


On the other hand rathore is talking to commissioner sir.


Rathore:jai hind sir.

CS:jai hind or kaise ho rathore.

Rathore:main theek hu or aap kaise hai sir.

CS:main bhi theek hu accha suno maine tumhari team main ek new officer appoint kiya hai to kal 9baje mere office aa jana mujhe uske bare main tumse baat karni hain.

Rathore:sir new member ki kya zaroot hai hum six members hi kafi hain.

CS:janta hu you all are efficient but jo new officer hai vo bhi bahut efficient hai infact tum sab ka or khas taur pe shree par burden kam hoga kyunki vo new officer tumhare yahan as a research analysist or encounter specialist hogi or baaki hum uske bare main kal baat karenge or haan tum chotu ko aaj hi chaar-paanch din ke liye kerala bejh do vaha ke E.T.F ko ek case main commando ki zaroot hai or chotu is a best option to tum usse vaha bejh do.

Rathore: ok sir.

CS:jai hind.

Rathore:jai hind sir.

After cut the call then Rathore goes to conference room and give news to his team.

Arjun: vo new officer kab se join karenge.

Shree:uska naam kya hai?

Chotu:vo ladki hai ya ladka?

Rathore:tum log us officer ke bare main puch rahe ho ya uska biodata le rahe ho.

Aisha:vo hume as kis post pe appoint kar rahe hai.

Rathore:as research analysist and encounter specialist baki kal meeting main pata chale ga uske bare main or chotu tum jane ki tayari karo.

Chotu:ji sir mai abhi tayari karti hu.

Shree:maine tere liye flight ki ticket book kardde hai . Teri flight raat ke 8baje hai.

Rathore called the day off and every body going tere home.

Aisha:hum tumhe airport ke liye lene theek 6:30 baje aayenge.

Chotu: ok.

At night 8pm all are go to airport to drop Chotu and bid bye to him after that they all are headed towards there home and soon they all are retarded to there bed.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Loved it.
Uski entry jaldi karwao..
Can't wait fr her entry..
Update soon..

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