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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
nice update
oops arjun again he didn't see riya's face😆
arjun sam convo nice
hehe choree pillow fighting for bathroom🤣 nice
waiting for riya's entry
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
wow wala update!
loved sam and arjun convo also liked that arjun wants to move on his lifa nad wants to live agin...
pity he again couldnt see the face the gal's face...!!!!😆
loved chotu and shree frnship a lot...the pillow fight was good!
waiting for riya's entry!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
CHAPTER FOUR
After bathed they all are gathered in Rathore and Arjun room to take their breakfast. They were eating and chit-chatting with each other.
Rathore:guyes age ka kya plan hai.

Aisha:kya matlab.

Rathore:matlab yeh ki abh kya karne ka irada hai apne room me chit chat karna hai ya ghumne chalna hai.

Liza:nhi sir hum ghumne bhi jayenge or shopping bhi karenge kyun aisha.

Aisha:shopping to karenge vo bhi bahut sari maine suna hai yaha silk ke dresses badi acche milte hai. Or bags to mashalla or bhi bahut kuch.

Chotu: or yahan ki sweets to or bhi acche hai mai to dus barah dabbe leke jaunga khass tor pe five packets of swandesh ke.

Shree wishper to rathore and arjun sir dekhiyen na liza or aisna ko paagal ho gaye hai dono. Rathore glare to shree for saying paagal to his aisha shree gulped down and say sir mera matlab vo nhi tha main to kehe rha tha k in ko shopping ke seway or kuch nhi sujh rha hai hum yaha ghumne aaye hai or ye shopping ki soch rhi hai.

Arjun:tum sahi kehe rhe ho in ladkiyon ka kuch nhi hota jis jagah ghumne gaye bas shoping hi sujhta hai or paise hume dene padhte hai or saath main inke nakhre or shopping bags hume jahlene or pakad ke rakhne padhte hai.

Rathore:haan tum dono sahi kehe rhe ho or uppar se chotu bhi inke saath mil gaya hai or vo to sweets ki dus baharah boxes le jane ko kehe rha hai.

Shree:vse chotu ek baat to bta tu sweets ke dus baharah dabbe le jane ko kyun keh rha hai i mean main janta hu tera ek se kam nhi hone wala fir bhi dus baharah koi dukan (shop) kholni hain kya?

Shree:main tujhe chodunga nhi tune kya kaha abhi or rhi baat dukan kholne ki to mujhe koi dukan nhi kholni samjha abh.

Shree: samajh gaya.

Rathore:vse chotu shree sahi keh rha hai i mean is tum itne sare boxes ko lejake karo ghe kya

Arjun: or tum swandesh ke paanch (five) boxes lejane ko kyun kehe rhe ho.

Liza: or silk ke dresse bhi jabki vo to ladkiyon ke liye hai.

Aisha:haan chotu bolo na.

Chotu:vo main apni choti ke liye le jaa rha hu.

Shree:chotu teri choti kahi vo teri 11.30 wali to nhi na.

Aisha:haan chotu uske liye leke jaa rhe ho.

Liza:chotu bhaiya aap kitne chupe rustam nikle.

Rathore:kya baat hai.

Arjun:nice chotu.

Chotu nhi uske liye nhi.

All:to fir.

Chotu main to apni chutki apni pyaari pari si behan ke liye leke jayunga.

Except shree all were shocked and saying behen.
Chotu:haan sir apni fool (flower) si sagi (real) behen ke liye leke jaa rha hu.
Arjun:tumhari behen bhi hai.
Rathore:tumne kabhi bataya nhi.
Aisha:haan chotu vo kaha hai tumhare ghar pe nhi dekha.
Chotu:sorry sir maine aap main se kisi ko nhi bataya actually main usse bahut pyaar karta hu jab main pice ki traing center join karne wala tha to maine use india se bahar padhne bejh diya main janta tha iss line main mere kafi sare dushman honge isliye maine use door rakha or kisi ko uske baare main pta nhi chalne diya sirf shree ko ek din pta chal gaya jab vo mere ghar aaya or main chutki ki photo ko dekhkar usse baatein kar rha tha.
Rathore: or vo abh bhi vahi hai.
Chotu:haan.
Aisha:vo itni asani se tumhe chodh ke chali gaye.
Liza:use aapki yaad nhi aati.
Chotu: bahut yaad karti hai hamari kabhi kabhi baath hoti vo bhi two hours maine use mana kiya hai zayada phone karne ko or yahan chutti main ane ko main nhi chahata tha ki uske bare main mere dushman ko pta chale ki vo meri zindagi hai or use nuksan pahuchaye. Or rhi baat uske itni asani se jane ki to vo bahut roi gidh gidhye mujhe yaad hai
~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~
A 16yrs old riya: bhaiya mujhe nhi jana.
Chotu:nhi riya tujhe jana hoga.
Riya:bhaiya mai aapko chodh ke kahi nhi jayungi.plss bhaiya
Chotu:tujhe jana hoga bus.
Riya:main nhi jayungi aapko chodke bus bhaiya aap ka kya hoga or aapka khyal kaun rakhe gha.
Chotu:main koi baccha nhi hu jo apna khyal na rakh sakun bus tumhe jana hoga.
Riya:main aapke haath jodhti hu per bhi pakadh ti hu plss aap mujhe apne se door mat ki jiye main aapke bina nhi reh paayungi.
Chotu:ri main bhi tere bager nhi reh paayunga lekin tu jaa plss main tujhe takleef or khatre main nhi dekh sakta plss.
Riya:bhaiya jab aap mere saath hai to mujhe khatra kis cheez ka maine kaha na main nhi jaaungi.
Chotu:agar tu nhi jaye ghi to main terse sare rishte naate khatam kar dunga or tujhe kabhi mudh ke nhi dekhunga isliye tujhe jana hoga.
Riya:nhi bhaiya ais mat ki jiye mai mar jayungi.
Chotu:chutki tujhe meri kasam.
Riya: theek hai bhaiya main yaha se chali jaayungi or kabhi mudh ke nhi dekhungi i promise jab main iss layak ho jayungi ki ve aap se aakh mila sakoon or nidar hoke aapke samne khadi ho sakoon or aapko meri chinta na ho tab main aapke pass ayungi yah vada hai mera aapki chutki ka.
Chotu and riya both hug each other and they were crying.
FLASHBACK ENDS
chotu:uske baad sir vo nhi kabhi chuttiyon main aaye or nahi kabhi kisi festival mai vo rakhi bhi karear karke bhjvati usne kaha tha ki jab tak vo apne aap ko is layak na bana de ki mai apka dar dur nhi kar deti tab tk nhi aayungi.
All are pity for him.

To be continued...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
loved the update...
SamJun convo and ShreeTu convo were great...
ayesha and Liza out for shopping...
so,Riya is Chotu's sister...
loved the flashback.
it was emotional...
next wala jaldi update karna,ok.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
great update...
their convo regarding shopping was very funny... lol shree bhi na sam ke samne aisha ko pagal bol rha hai... 😆
fb was very emotional... chotu and riya havnt met for so many years... :(
continue soon... eagerly waiting for riya's entry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
awesome story.
Aww...chotu apne behan ko kitna miss kar raha hai
plz make riya's entry soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
sweet, simple n superb updaet.

litte bit emotional too.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
riya is chotu ki choti!!!! wow... hehehe arjun is going to get a "chottu" brother in law!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Waoo dr what a beautiful update..
lv the nok jok n shoping convo bw all..
to riya chotu ke sis hain..
or kise ko es baare main nahi pata..
humm realy impressive...
flash back was nice..
update soonnn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
CHAPTER FIVE


Chotu:uske baad sir vo nahi kabhi chuttiyon main aaye or nahi kabhi kisi festival main vo to rakhi bhi kharidkar bhijvati usne kaha tha ki jab tak vo apne aap ko is layak na bana de ki vo mera dar dur kar sake tab tak nahi aaye ghi.

All are pity for chotu.


*****************************


Suddenly Arjun speaks.

Arjun:chotu tumhe yeh bhi nhi pata ki vo abh dikhti kaise hai?

Chotu: pta hai na sir usne mujhe apni photoes bejhi thi. Bahut sunder hai meri behen ek dum pari ki tarah shayad iss duniya mai koi bhi usse zayada sunder nhi ho ghi kyunki vo bahar se nhi andar se bhi sunder hai.

All are happy that chotu now becomes little happy.

Liza:chotu bhaiya vaise aapki choti behen kitne saal ki hogi abh.

Chotu:21 years.

Aisha:21years wow great.

Rathore:vo padahi kya kar rahi hai?

Chotu: pata nahi sir.

Arjun: pata nahi ka kya matlab?

Chotu:voh sir nahi maine pucha or nahi usne kabhi bataya infact voh to mujhse paise bhi kam leti hai vo part time job karke apni fees bharti hai.

Arjun: part time job magar kyun?

Chotu:sir vo mujhpe bojh nhi banana chahati thi maine usse mana kiya lekin vo nahi mani infact voh to thodi si salary mujhe bejha karti thi.

Arjun was impressed with chotu sister infact rathore also. All are wanted to meet chotu sister.

Rathore:kya voh abh bhi US main hain.

Chotu: pata nahi.

Aisha: pata nhi ka matlab?

Chotu:meri 2years se usse contact nahi hai bus ek do bar usne beech main letters bejhe hai uske baad uska kuch pata nahi or usne ek letter main likha tha ki bhaiya main abh apni manzil ki taraf kadam rakhne jaa rhi hu jahan jab main laut ke aap ke pass ayungi to aap mujh per garv karenge.

All are sad and as well as tensed where is might be chotu sister.

Shree (POV):mujhe maff kar de yarr main janta hu ki teri chuttki kahan hain or kya kar rahi hai lekin nahi bata sakta kyunki maine usse vada kya hai ki main tujhe riya ke bare main naa bataun.

Shree came back to reality when liza spoke.

Liza:dheeraj rakhiye or bhagvan pe bharosa rakhiye vo aapko aapki choti se zaroor milvayenge.

Aisha:haan liza sahi kehe rahi hai tumhe tumhari chutki zaroor mile ghi.

Arjun: or chotu fir hum bhi to teri family hai naa.

Rathore:haan arjun sahi kehe raha hai hum bhi tumhari family hai or dekhna bahut jald tumhari chuttki vapas zaroor aaye ghi.
Chotu: faint smile haan sir meri chuttki ek din zaroor vapas aaye gi or rathore sir or arjun sir aap usse apne damit or samjhe ya samjhun se daraye gha.

All are smiling and giggled what chotu complimented.




*****************************


some other field girl are standing in front of big portrait of her and her elder brother and smile seeing this and told bus bhaiya abh intezaar khatam abh main mumbai aane wali hu abh hum log or nahi rahenge kyunki abh mere vade ka pura hone ka samay aa gaya hai. Or abh aap apni behen pe garv mehsoos karenge.

Back to restraurant


after the finishing of breakfast they all are headed for shopping and roming here and there and enjoying there surroundings.

Soon there shopping was over all are came to there room and packing there bags because tomorrow they were going back to mumbai.


At evening all are playing in the hotel park volleyball suddenly chotu saw two children one is his elder brother and with his younger sister they were playing and also eating with eachother he thinks



~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~


A 13years old chotu:ri chal through that ball.

9years old riya: ok bhaiya.
They were playing when suddenly chotu said riya mujhe bhook lag rahi hai.

Riya:bhook to mujhe bhi lag rahi hai chalo bhaiya hum vaha se kuch khane ko late hai.
They were going to shop and buy chole bhature.

Raste main galti se chotu ki plate gir jati hai

chotu: are meri plate to gir gaye or abh to paise bhi khatam ho gaye.

Riya:koi baat nhi bhaiya hum share kar lete hai.

Chotu: nahi ri tu kha mujhe nahi khana.

Riya:bhaiya agar meri plate girti to aap mere saath share karte na now its my turn chalo hum milke khate hai.

Soon they were eating together.



FLASHBACK ENDS

aisha sees chotu is lost in somewhere she says to him kya hua chotu.

Chotu:kuch nahi undono bhai behen ko dekhkar mujhe apne or apni behen ki bachpan ki yaad aa gayi.

All becomes sad.

After some more time they were playing and soon they go back to there room and around 8 o clock they all gathered to ate dinner.

And all ate dinner silently and after finished they all go back to there room and all went to sleep.

Chotu becomes restless because he thinks for her chuttki. And he miss her very much.

On the other hand arjun again saw the same dream but did not see her face.

Next morning all wakeup early and packing there bags and soon they retarted to go back to Mumbai.


To be continued...

Precap
1. All reach mumbai
2. ETF got new case.
3. Riya's entry


ok guyes plsss comment and tell should i continue or not and plese give me the suggestion how to make riya dhamakedar entry. Please guyes help me and see you soon.

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