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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Sweety1234556


Hey! I m not Aaliyah,m payal!
Aaliyah is little angels!



I am so sorry dear. I am always confused between you and Aaliyah.😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh such a cute update.

Loved vani n jia were really cute especially when they said tat jeevs is showing partiality.

Next would be their picture perfect moment 😊 😛 😃

Oh jeevs fell down I seriously hope she gets well soon. 😭

Update fast Plz, can't wait 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A BEAUTIFUL CONCEPT


BOTH parts were AWESOMELY WRITTEN
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome parts continue soon thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Soo guys I am back with an update. There is an index on the first page and on the very first post. Here you go.

Part 3

Viren ran to to jeevika and took her head in his arms.

Viren- jeevika aakhe kholo please.

Jiya and Vaani had too started crying.

Vaani- Mumma utho na

Jiya- Dadi (grandmother) mumma ko kya ho gaya hain plz inko bolo na hum inhe tang nahi karenge

Vanshika- beta tum dono chup ho jao aur viren tum jeevika ko jaldi se hospital leke jao tab tak mein virat aur manvi ko inform kar deti hu.

Viren took jeevika in his arms.

Viren- Jiya and Vaani tum dono dadi ke saath ghar pe raho.

Jivaan- ok

Viren left for the hospital.

At home.

Jiya and Vaani were continuously crying. Maanvi too entered the house with Nivan and both the children ran to hug their maasi.

Jiya- Maasi mumma gir gayi.

Vaani- Maasi mumma ko sirf hamare wajah se chot aayi hain

Manvi broke the hug and kneeled down.

Manvi- shshhh. Bilkul chhup. Agar mumma ko baad mein pata chala ke unki dono angels ro rahi thi to unhe kaisa lage ga?? aur vaani mera bacha tumhare wajah se thodi na mumma ko chot aayi hai wo to sirf ek accident tha aur mumma bilkul thik hain.

They both stopped crying.

Vanshika- Beta Virat kahan hain?

Manvi- maa wo virat jiju ke paas hospital gaya hai.

Vanshika- Thik hai beta

In hospital

Viren reached the hospital and met Virat on the entrance who helped him in carrying Jeevika to the stroller.

Viren to dr- Doctor please kuch kijiye. Jeevika ki already bahut bleeding ho chuki hai.

Dr- Dont worry Mr Viren hum dekhte hai and please complete the formalities at the reception.

Virat- Bhai aap bhabhi ke saath raho mein formalities complete kar ke aata hu.

Jeevika was in OT.

Viren thought of calling Vanshika to inform about Jeevika's state.

At home

Vaani and Jia had slept after crying non-stop along with Nivaan and Manvi was sitting near the bed stroking their hair and Vanshika was sitting on the sofa. Vanshika's phone rang and she quickly recieved it.

Vanshika- Hello

Viren – Hello Maa (teary voice)

Vanshika- beta bolo na kya hua sab thik hain na jeevika thik haii na??

Viren- Doctors jeevika ko OT mein le gaye aur Virat formalities puri kar raha hai. Acha maa vaani aur Jiya thik hain na? Zyaada ro to nahi ri hain na?

Vanshika- Beta wo dono to rote rote so gaye hain. Tum unki phikar mat karo main aur Manvi hain na yahan unke paas tum bas apna aur Jeevika ka khyal rakho. Thik hain beta.

Viren- Ok maa. Jaise hi wo dono uthe please meri baat kara dijiye ga.

Vanshika- Thik hain mera bacha aur mujhe Jeevika ki khabar dete rehna. Bye.

Viren- OK maa.

Viren disconnected the call and sat on the nearby bench and started weeping. Virat came and saw his brother in that condition.

Virat- Bhai, Bhabhi thik ho jayegi Dont worry.

Viren- Nahi Virat. Sab meri galti hain na mein Jeevika se help maangta, na wo mere paas aa rahi hoti aur na yeh accident hota. Sab meri galti hain.

Virat- Bhai aapki galti bilkul nahi hain.

Just then the doctor came out from the OT.

Viren stood up and asked him about Jeevika.

Doctor- Mr viren, patient bilkul thik hain. Bas sar mein ek major chot hain aur Right ankle mein sprain ho gaya hai. But there is nothing serious now. She is fine aur unhe hosh bhi aa gaya hain. She is being shifted to Special ward 2. You can go and meet her.

Viren- Thankyou doctor.

Dr- Your welcome Mr viren.

The doctor went and Viren and Virat ran to Special ward 2.

As soon as they entered the room. Jeevika smiled on seing both. Viren ran to her and hugged her tightly.

Viren- Kya zarurat thi staircase pe itna tez daurne ki.

Jeevika- kya virenji. Na hii na bye kuch nahi seedha datna shuru??

Virat- aaplog dono apni sweet si ladai continue karo mein ghar par sabko inform kar deta hu.

Viren- virat sun to infact ghar hi chala ja aur please sabko keh dena ki woh pareshan na ho aur especially Manvi aur bacho ko please.

Virat- thik hain bhai. Par apna aur bhabhi ka khyaal rakhna aur kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to let me know.

Viren smiled at Virat and he left leaving the two of them alone.

Viren again hugged her.

Viren- Jeevika I am sorry. Sab meri galti hain na mein tumse se help maangta, na tum mere paas aa rahi hoti aur na yeh accident hota. Sab meri galti hain.

Jeevika- ab aap ek aur bar boliye phir mein aapse baat bhi nahi karungi.

Viren- acha thik hain baba sorry.



Will post the next part soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
An update...
yeayi yeayi yeayi!!!
Me First...
Yeayi Yeayi Yeayi!!!
🥳

It was awesome one dear!!
Everyone crying😭!! me crying!! 😭

But thn... Jeevs Fine..!! :D Me fine to 😃😆

Loved Virika conversation! 😳

they too cute!!

Please update soon..!! n pm me!! :D😃

Edited by KtYammie13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Res
Unres
Ossm update
Thank god jeevika is fine
Viren was so tensed to sea jeevika in dat condition
Loved d talk at d end
Plz update soon


Edited by mgera3024 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
U took my position...i wanted to b d first one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awesome update dear!!
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awesome update...
loved it...
continue soon n thanks for pm...

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