So here is the next update guys and I am really happy after seing the response. I know its not that good but as it is my first try so its nice and I want atleast 30 likes and 3 pages of long comments. The next part is ready so comment fast if you want an update soon. So here you go.
Part 2
Jeevika was hell irritated with her dear ones (viren, vaani and jiya). She was in the kitchen when Vanshika entered.
Vanshika- Goodmorning beta.
Jeevika- Goodmorning maa.
Vanshika- Beta subah mein bachon ke kamre mein se chillane ki awaaz aa rahi thi??
Jeevika- Kuch nahi maa subah ka jagdha aur virenji ke saath milkar bache mujhe tang kar rahe the.
Vanshika- ye viren bhi na bacho ke saath rahkar bilkul bacha ban jaata hai.
Jeevika smiled at her MIL (mother in law)
Jeevika- acha maa wo virenji keh rahe the ki wo hame kisi surprise ke liye le ja rahe hai to unhone hame ready hone ke liye kaha hain. main bas breakfast bana ke jaa rahi hu tab tak aap bhi ready ho jaiye.
Vanshika- Thik hai beta.
As vanshika left, Viren entered the kitchen and hugged Jeevika frm back.
Jeevika got scared at the sudden movement and broke the hug.
Viren- Jeevika sorry na
She didn't reply.
Viren- acha kan pakad ke sorry.
Jeevika was not at all angry on her husband now but she thought to annoy him a little bit.
She took the breakfast and left the kitchen and Viren followed her to the dining area.
Viren- Apne iss pyaare se pati se baat bhi nahi karogi.
She stared at him and then continued to arrange the table.
Viren sat on his knees, holded his ears and said sorry to her once again.
Jeevika smiled at this and viren stood up and thought-
"at last maan gayi. MISSION ACCOMPLISHED."
He hugged her.
Viren- I LOVE YOU
Jeevika- I LOVE YOU TOO
Vaani and Jia were hiding under the table and they came out and said- " mumma hame itna jaldi to kabhi maaf nahi kiya aur dad ko kardiya aur saath mein huggie bhi di. Very bad. Ye to partiality hain.
As soon as they heard there angels voice they broke the hug.
Viren and Jeevika laughed at their cutiepies.
Viren-he again kneeled down and said to their angels- "wo kya hain na beta mumma mujhse zyaada pyaar karti hain"
JIVAAN (vaani+jia)= MUMMA and they ran to hug their mommie.
Jeevika- Main aap sabse bahut pyaar karti hu.
Viren joined the hug too.
Vanshika entered the scene too and praised it
Vanshika- A PICTURE PERFECT MOMENT
Viren- nahi ma and he pulled her mother in the hug too and said- ab hua ye A PICTURE PERFECT MOMENT.
Jeevika- chalo ab sab nashta karlo.
They all sat down on their respective seats.
While eating Jia asked viren- " Dad what is the surprise??"
Viren-aga...
Vaani stopped her dad from answering the question and said- "oye mumma ki ladli urf meri kam akal wali behen agar dad ne surprise bata diya to surprise kya rahega?"
Viren- I agree with you beta but Vaani meri Jia kam akal wali nahi hai.
Jia- Thankyou dad for the support.
They finished eating and Jeevika was cleaning the table while the others were in their rooms, getting ready to leave for Viren's surprise.
In the mean time Viren shouted from his room- "Jeevika mera walet kahan hain?"
Jeevika- aayi virenji
Jia- "mumma mere pink shoes kahan hain"
Vaani-" mumma mere clips"
Jeevika-" aa rahi ho baba"
Vanshika- "Jeevika bete meri dawaayian"
Jeevika- aayi maa
Jeevika ran to her room to help her better half. She was climbing up the staircase when she slipped and shouted- VIRENJI aaah
They all ran for jeevikas resque but it was too late.
Their life was lying in the pool of blood and she was unconsious.
Viren was dumbstruck. Jia and Vaani were shocked seeing their mother in this state and Vanshika was on the verge of crying.
Pheww it was a long one. Please don't throw chappals at me for changing this happy wala story to a sad one. Mind you all next update after 30 likes and 3 pages of long comments and KARINA UPDATE HEARTBEAT and Sajanfan001 UPDATE YOUR STORY A FAMILY HOLIDAY please. Its a request and hammii I am leaving you this time as your exams are near. But after your exams meri spamming ka pitara phir khul jayega.
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