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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful TS. Love and Friendship at equal making betrayal downing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The story is so nice! Every emotion of each and everyone in the story is so beautifully written...
Why did you stop posting? Please the next part soon, PLEASE! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all i muust say u r an amazing story teller...well ur story was mentoined in sumone post of best written fic so far n iam glad i read it d thought to read ird first...it was so beautifuul craved dt speechless and emotional very touched by it...intially i did confused bt at d same tym it didn't leave its essence...alesha was so cute n adorable ders...two scenes which was both heart warming n wrenchong its arshi's last one in d hospital n well d other z lavanya's letter to khush with arnav's mom letter... dey were indeed best frnd n heartly sisters for each other...so la didn't say dt she zjas got cancer n arnav well would hv liked to hear his thoughts also...well thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ashley

So Wonderfully written !
You have penned down the emotions so prefectly ! You made me cry ..
This is so touching , I read it one go ..
Please continue soon ..



Thank you! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Coming Soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixTears

All the best for your exams! We will wait for the updates very (im)patiently 😉



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Waitin for ya long due updt


On the way! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manikka

waiting for the next part dear...


More than half way through! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bewuster

i can understand in someway that khushi just went away from them
and for the sake of child told them to marry
but can khushi trust him anymore
even if it's been 5 years can she trust him?
maybe i would also go away from lav and arnav
but i would not comeback never
even if lav is dead
bcz i can never trust the sameperson again
and the person u love the most who betray u with ur best friend

it would be beautiful if you write the new epilogue with
khushi already married to (mohit) other guy
and having her own life
and going away from arnavs life and he deseve that
she can come and see the little girl of arnav and la
but never coming back to him
that would bring the story as beautiful ending
bcz happy ever after is to boring



I understand what you trying to tell me here. But then you got to know that they (ASR and La) didn't betray her knowingly. It was mistake and I am sure many would agree that everyone needs a second chance. Likewise, Arnav do deserves a chance too. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_aashi

First of all i muust say u r an amazing story teller...well ur story was mentoined in sumone post of best written fic so far n iam glad i read it d thought to read ird first...it was so beautifuul craved dt speechless and emotional very touched by it...intially i did confused bt at d same tym it didn't leave its essence...alesha was so cute n adorable ders...two scenes which was both heart warming n wrenchong its arshi's last one in d hospital n well d other z lavanya's letter to khush with arnav's mom letter... dey were indeed best frnd n heartly sisters for each other...so la didn't say dt she zjas got cancer n arnav well would hv liked to hear his thoughts also...well thanks


Thank you so much for the lovely comment dear. I hope I can deliver Arnav's as well as Khushi's thought in my last and final update of this story. :)

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