T.S ArHi: T3SHIH: Completed - Page 54

excellent superb just loved the way you portrayed the characters really a gripping story

Originally posted by: Swaran13

waiting

Originally posted by: hydsri

They deserve their happiness now. Waiting eagerly.

A cute and emotional update.. Uff... happy that Arshi are together and "living happily ever after". Loved Arnav's expression after reading La's letter. His fear, insecurities and his doubt were reasonable.. Khushi too cleared it well. What i liked most in that scene was that Khushi spoke less but with such an force and attitude that ASR just mellowed down... Loved the jealousy fight btwn gupta and raizada 😆... Indeed a great story and enjoyed it every bit. Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: radhika007

Waiting for the update

Originally posted by: pooja102

awesum

Originally posted by: beenish248

aww this Ts make me cry yet make me happy , i don't know what should i comment but one thing is crystal Clear, i loved they you had described their pain their love aww so beautifuly that i am spellbound to read this work of yours , Simply Marvelous dear 👏

Originally posted by: rulama

That was lovely!

The link in the index is not working though!😉

Loved the way you brought out Arnav's insecurity even after 10 yrs of marriage...

It was never addressed and thats why it lingered!

Originally posted by: Rohinid

Superb ending

Originally posted by: bewuster

humm i expected it to be more painful story
arnav betray khushi and lav got pregnet
but then khushi moved out of picture to give the baby and lav a chance with arnav
(more rational nobody does that in real life)
but then khushi came back only bcz lav ask her in her letter'
and arnav betray not only khushi by sleeping with lav he also betray khushi by never looking after lavarnya
he didnt knew that lav was sick
and then khushi came back i know life is short but still i think first khushi would have fought with arnav and then would have found someone else
bcz life goes on and we cant just stay with someone whom betray us
and then would have had her own famly
whats the chance that arnav wouldnot sleep again with someone els
hun
love it