MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome uupdates. ..
Maaneet spent a family time together..
it was wonderful.. :-)
Someone is blackmailing geet n tats y she was away from maan for soo long..
N y do I feel ki it's natasha..???
N also ki maan heard geets convo too..
curious to know abt the twist in the engagement ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
manav going to KM to spend time with maan and muskan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Short but lovely update dear :)
thanks fr updating :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...
awesome update...
maan is upto something!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update waiting 4 next part update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 38
Armaan drives to khurana mansion. As they reach manav jumps out of the car & runs but armaan very instantly catch hold of him.
"Kya hai chuchu"
"Oyeee chuchu nii chachu"
"Haaan wahi boli naa meyyy"
Armaan smiles & just think ignoring would be great as he can never teach manav good hindi
"Aacha suun...iss ghar mey u hv daadi ur daddy muskan & a aunty too...u can talk to them bt u can't call ur daddy daddy in front of them & nor can u talk about your mommy"
Manav gets shocked with all this & confused too that why he can't call his daddy daddy in front of daadi
"Paaalll kyuuu why I can't call daddy"
"It's because your daddy will introduce your mommy first & than you"
"Ohhh...bt can I call him daddy when no one is listening to us"
"You are very smart aren't you...well yes u can call him daddy when on one is near u"
Manav gives a huge smile to armaan & armaan picks him up in arms & goes inside
There maan just finished his gym & was going upstairs.
daadi & natasha were sitting on sofa in living room. Manav & Armaan enter the house. Daadi saw both coming she smiles at manav but wasn't aware of who he is.
"Jiii aapko kissey milna hai?"
"Jii wo meyy..."
Maan was on stairs & hearing daadi he turns...he saw manav with Armaan he immediately comes down.
"Hey armaan"
"Hello Mr khurana"
"Aap yaha...?"
Maan gets confused that why is armaan here & that to with manav...& what if manav calls him daddy in front of daadi & natasha...he was so much tensed.
"Muskan had called manav's mom & she said that she want manav to come at her place so that they can eat dinner together which is made by manav's mom"
"Ohh muskan...anyways you are welcome to my house"
Maan gives a wide smile to manav
"Hello da...maan uncle"
Manav winks to maan & maan understand that geet have explained manav everything.
"Hello manav beta"
"Aaammm...jii I think I should leave you guys have fun & manav don't trouble Mr khurana much"
"Yes chuchuu byeee"
Maan takes mana from armaan in his hands & leaves armaan till door.they did bye byee to chuchu I mean chachu.
maan was very happy seeing manav here...they both were so much into themselves that didn't bother that daadi & natasha are watching them.
"Aaj kitne dino baad hum maan ko itna khush dekh rahe hai...shayad ye aapki wajesey hai natasha"
"Ye kya bol rahi hai aap daadi maa ye tua aapka badpan hai"
"Hum tua bas aap dono ko khush dekhna chahtey hai..."
Natasha hugs daadi maa
Upstairs muskan was sitting in maans room with a story book on her lap & was very busy with it.
maan & manav enter the room & saw muskan so much busy.
manav laughed loud seeing muskan & muskan got conscious about there presence.
As muskan saw manav in daddy's arms she jumped from bed & shouts for manav.
he got very excited seeing muskan & so was manav.
maan took both of them to the bed & locked the door of the room so that no one disturbs them.
"So kids kya plan hai"
Both of them look at eachother & say together"pyjama party" "pyjama party"
"Hmmm...par ye pyjama party hota kya hai"
Both manav & muskan slap their hand on forehead
muskan gets up from bed & goes to maans wardrobe. She removes his very funky night pant & vest to wear & comes to maan & gives it to him.

PAST

Maan & geet were shopping at mall for maan.
geet come taking a funky night pant & give it to him.
"Geet ye kya hai...na na...I don't wear such stuffs arey mey baacha hu kya"
"Ohh hello baachi tua mey bhi nii hu fir bhi aaj taak mickey mouse ki nighty phenti hu"
"Arey geet it goes with you par mey...no no"
"Oh please now stut up & try it"
Maan making faces goes to trail room. He wears it & make crappy faces as he was looking a small chotu sa cute sa baacha in it.
"Geet I am not taking this"
"Arey it will look good"
"Nii it's horrible"
"Will you open the door so I can see it"
"Hmmm...yay"
Maan opens the door & geet enters.geet was so shocked seeing him like this in such trendy look & out of his black & white world.
"Wow...its looking.."
"Horrible I know"
"No no...it's looking soo sooo cuteee"
"What I and cute yuckss..."
"Daddy...daddy...where have you lost"
Maan comes back to his sense & smiles.
he takes that pyjama & goes to washroom to change.
By the time daddy comes out from washroom our two little masters got ready in there night dresses.
Muskan wore a barbie pink frok & manav wore spiderman shirt & pant.
maan comes out wearing spongboob yellow pants & black vest.
"Wowooo daddy you looking handsome just like brad Pitt"
"Nooo he is looking cute just like angelina Jolie"
"Nooo he is looking like Johnny depp"
"She you are changing he is just like angelina Jolie"
"Noo" "yess" "nooo" "yesss" "noo"
Maan was messed up with his two kids horrible thinking skills.
But he goes between them & stops there fighting & accepted that he is looking like angelina Jolie & brad Pitt & even jonny depp

Later they watches movie which was decided by maan as both of them again started fighting. They even did pillow fighting in which both manav & muskan won & maan lost all the matches or we can say maan was happy losing as he won his kids heart.
he made them sleep next to him & he was in between them as muskan wants daddy & even manav wants daddy. Both went to sleep soon & maan was busy watching them.

After a while his silent watching was disturbed by a call...it was from geet to ask if manav went to sleep & both the kids had there dinner.
They didn't talk much just talked about kids & did good night to each other.
maan was for the first time so so happy...it wasn't that he wasn't happy before but as geet & manav entered his life...his life took a turn which was 360 & all his life was changed...tomorrow was a big day, a day which would change everything in his life in his kids life & even geets life...he was upset for some reason but that reason was not much bigger than the coming happiness...no one knows whats going to happen tomorrow nor geet nor daadi nor natasha...the only person behind tomorrow will be MAAN he knows whats coming to his path & how he would handle it...

"We don't know whats our future nor we know whats in our destiny but the thing which we know is that good deeds give good results & bad gets bad...but its always upto you which you want...so be very careful while choosing it"


Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
armaan told manav not to call maan daddy in front of daadi so manav call him uncle
maan have so much with kids
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow manav good going...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome cuteee update
Yaar ye brad Pitt n Johnny dep to thik hai but Angelina joly!!!
Seriously :P rofl
Loved the kids very much
Maan n kids pyjama party :D
Past part was also cuteee :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 39
It was the day when things where going to happen which no one expected.
All were busy preparing for the engagement function.
Maan makes both the kids ready for breakfast.
All were sitting on there respective chairs in dinning room. Manav was sitting just beside maan & muskan on the other side beside maan...
Natasha comes down & was about to say to manav that its here seat & not his so get up but watching maan & even daadi maa she just goes & sit beside daadi maa.
Natasha wanted to show maan that even she cares about kids & love them. So she serves muskan tomato sandwiches in her plate & was going to serve manav the same but manav stopped her.
"Aunty I don't like tomatoes nor I like sandwiches"
"Natasha aunty even I don't like tomato"
Natasha's looks at manav with angry eyes.she just takes the sandwiches back.
manav's driver ramu kaka comes inside the house.
"Manav baba...manav baba aap kaha ho?"
Manav was sitting on chair & as he hear the voice his eyes get big & there was a huge smile on his face he gets down 4m chair very fast.
"Sambhal kar manav"
"Ramuuu..."
"Arey baba sambhal kar"
"Tumne laya??"
"Haan laya manav baba kaha raku?"
"Manav koan hai?"
Maan comes out. Seeing maan ramu join his hands & did namaste. Maan gives him smile.
"Daddy ye mera allo ka paratha hai"
"Kya???"
"Sahab inka matlab hai ki mene inka aalo ka paratha laya hai"
"Wo kya hai na manav baba subhey sirf paratha khate hai aur muskan baby ko bhi chahiye tha tua madam ne hamey wo lekar bheja hai"
"Hmmm..."
Maan in his mind"geet merey bete ko bhi uski tarah bana diya itna oily khata hai subhey subhey"
"Daady you said something?"
"Nooo nooo...lets do breakfast"
They both got back to the table had there breakfast & maan was suppose to take them out to mall.
maan takes both the kids to mall.
They reach mall.mavan was very happy that he is with his daddy & his daddy won't leave his hand ever.

Maan enters kids shop. He want to take some nice cloths for maanav & muskan for evening event.


Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago

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Posted by: zajedno

1 months ago

Marry me, please.

How do you react when a man asks you if you want to marry him?

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