SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt

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Sharmila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Wonderful update priya...loved it 🤗

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

😃

A beautiful update ... sitting on the river bank ... with the temple bells tolling ...

with the evening Aarti in progress ... gave a real feeling of peace ...

cleansing and forgiveness ...

Arnav confesses the reason behind him marrying her ...

For his own sake only ...

blaming himself for the loss of their baby ...

Thanks Priya ... love the depth in your writing ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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kristin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

A very subtle chapter but it was great?

The picture is starting to get a little clearer :)
I look forward to your next chapter!

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

wow wow. what a thing to read first thing in the morning. and lovely selection of poems and that poem about arnav and clay.. reminds me of the glass house crooner. there is so much unsaid between them and so many wounds to heal.

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RajPreet_Preeto

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Amazing description of their pain and suffering and the deep love they share for each other. Loved every word of your updated Priya. Thank you and can not wait to read the next update. Please update soon.

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Wow Priya. Your writing always leaves me speechless. This update was well worth the wait. There is so much pain and love between them. Liked how he finally acknowledged that he married her because he loved her and not for his di. Glad that he s opening up to her and letting her see how much pain he is feeling and what is in his heart and hopefully khushi will also open up to him. Thanks for sharing with us.

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EnVee

@EnVee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Nice Priya. I agree with what G says. That gnawing sense of something missing, a longing that we did not see closed with IPK, you are showing it here.

I like the riverside setting. As if they are waiting for the river to wash away their pain. 👍🏼

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: honeypriya
thanks Farha...🤗

I thought I have already touched on why Khushi left initially only -- there are some gaps which next chapters will fill but the base reason I already touched 😕

Yeah! The reason you touched .. but there must be more emotional turmoil attached to that?

With Arnav initiating the conversation on this chapter, I felt, there wre more to hear from Khushi. 😳

And oh yes .. this is my most favourite chapter so far. 😳

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago