The unexpected connection-Ch 16,17 in Pg 120 - Page 46

Originally posted by: sooryalekshmi

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You always manage to bring a smile on my face, after reading the updates..
It was really really lovely...
Enjoyed it a lot...
I am sure mohit will be caught soon..
That too arjan& siddu together or may be even arnav with them...
And will beat him black & blue...
Pls I wanna see that soon...

So arjun and raizadas are connected...
I guessed it before...
But am not sure about it...
Loved how khushi said about their hospital hug and her conclusion regarding sishu's matter...
Loved the cat-fight between arnav and aishu..
I felt like a bro-sis fight...(or is it so???)
Love the connection between arjun and aishu..
They dont even have to speak with each other...
Something more than arnav-anjali bond...
You potrayed it very well yaar...

The precap is a bit scary...
I dont want an outburst...
I hate that arnav...and scared too

Originally posted by: ayaanshi

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THE CHAPTER WAS FANTASTIC... MOST LOVED PART WAS ARNAV'S MISCHIEF... BUT I AM SORRY... I AM ACTUALLY QUITE CONFUSED SO I GUESS U'LL GET MY LOOONG COMMENTS ON WHAT'S INSIDE MY MIND AFTER I CLEAR ALL THE CONFUSIONS... NO OFFENCE... IT'S ME HAVING THE PROBLEM... WILL GET IT RESOLVED WITHIN FEW UPDATES TILL THEN ENJOY N YEAH

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Originally posted by: rulama

Wow!

Wondering what youhave in store next.

How are they related to Arnav?

Are they Anjali and Arnav's siblings, half brother and sister?

Coming to think about it in your prologue you have told Aishwarya chooses Arnav over Arjun to save. I think she will have one brother either way. But if she chooses Arjun over Arnav, Khushi will not have her husband! Am I right??? or way off the mark!

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so they do know the raizadas
why do i think they are all connected due to maliks only
meaning his father or uncle could be the connection
and khurana really well this is interesting
am glad that the storm you are talking about will bring them closer
i should hope so
i rather not see any of them hurt
and this mohit character whats his story
what does he have against the raizadas and why is he after aishu
thank god for arnie though he came in time right
yes aishu he can be a sadu but he is not that bad
so they find out that arjun was the donor
this is good right
ahhh so thats why she wasnt picking up
sometimes you do admire the shaatir dimag of his
hmmm so many mysteries remain huh
and hope arnie dont repeat the past again
with him one never knows
jun working for that company why does it sound fishy to me
but then i find anything fishy man
well cant wait for more now

Originally posted by: arshi_sush

awsum updt..
loved it..
mohit is such a jerk..who paid him 4 aishu??
thank god arnav come in time nd save her..
love da way u potray da bonding of aishu with raizada..specially love da arnav nd aishu sweet cat fight..lovely..
bt why arjun tell ashisu 2 stay away from raizada??
its become mysterious day by day..
waiting 4 nxt..
continue soon:)

Originally posted by: amri123

hey

those were lovely updates

totally enjoyed them

thank God Arnav saved Aishu

and i love all the teasing and the water fight between them

it was fun to read

oh and Khushi now has a partner in crime

i almost feel sorry for Arnav😆

and i'm glad that Arnav found out about the whole blood donor thing

and that he told the family about it

but how are the Raizada's and Arjun and Aishu connected????????????

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: IPKKNDbigfan

ok that was a very interesting update
y is khushi so silent and was really not there u know what i mean?
y is khushi not jealous of arnav and ashu ?
y r they so close? y did khushi tell arnav to hug her no afence i loved the update so mysterious it was amazing but just wondering y doesnt khushi care that arnav is a little to close with ashu? thanks so much for the amazing update i loved it!

Originally posted by: dia.forever

hey

just came across ur ff...read the previous one too...will comment on that later, but here I wanted to talk about this one first.

first of all, lovely and very interesting. I must say, you can weave a maze in the story very artfully...loved ur way of potraying characters...n specially I LOVE aishu...she seems the loveliest of all...no offence to main lead...AK rocks👍🏼

but after reading the last few chapters I felt that by fate or by 'writer's' intervention...aishu and arjun r actually the real lost rizada kids...may be I m being stupid or may be correct, but this thought is very much making me restless...u showed some preoblems with aishu's health which I don't know why reminds me of arnav's diabetes problems...the dizziness n all...she is so much similar to arnav like a real sister...all protective and strong outside with a molten wax like heart inside...😳

just lovedthe way khushi suggested arnav to b patient with aishu...but the precap seems to tell a different story...anyways lets see how things shape up

love each n every one here...I m still waiting how u will introduce prithvi from aishu's side

love ur writing...plzz do continue soon

dia

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

RES... AFTER 2 MONTHS. Its good to be bk to older ways. 😊

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First of all...loads and loads of apologies for being late dear! I really m sorry for failing u yet agn! 😭 U see... there are few other unexpected responsibilities tht r holding me bk these days. I amhardly able to make it If for like 20-30 minutes a day. anyways...i will just move on to comments now.

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Prithvi??!?? Arnav met Prithvi...😲😲 ! Arnav met Prithvi...and the moment passed just like tht? 😲

I know u must be like...why is my mouth hung open? well...if all of above questions are rgt...then...I m surprised at how u brought in the element of normalcy. Its just this...Had Arnav been visiting hotel Elegance under some other circumstances i m sure he would have made sure tht he met the owner of this elegant property and see to it how he can strike a DEAL with him. but...all tht didn't happen..why? because he was too eager to meet Khushi. Asimple act to reflect his Strong Love for her. Good work there!

and If i m right...isn't Prithvi the same person...who had sent sheetal? isn't he same one who sent mohit against Aishu? isn't he the one...who's gonna be or rather who's the person targeting Arnav as well as Arjun in the prologue?

I likeed how u made khushi say tht "lets have the day to ourselves..especially tht whole sheetal thing had got u exhausted."

Love elements as usual were shining bright. the Dress...dinner...dessert and care for each other. 😊 and not to forget tis one...😉

"Because I knew you would wear a suit and I just wanted an excuse to wear your coat.

oh and offcourse...cricket team plannings! 😆

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truly, madly deeply...wow! i love tht song! Ahh...only if there would have been day i had actually met ASR...let alone watch him sing this song... *drooling* 😆

The Rahul Singhania part was good too. A reminder of how every Big man deserves a quiet, silent life too. 👏

and then WHO in hell is this MOHIT??? what does he have to do with Aishu? how does he already know her? 😕 ahh...Mystries! always gets the curious cat out of bag...*sigh*!

Anyways...u r going good...! keep up!

Originally posted by: monasha

Amazing Update...

Mohit targeted Aishu, but Arnav came on time to save her... I just wanted Arnav beat Mohit to pulp... Anyways someone some other time will get the chance...

Arnav helped to reach his home and Khushi to supported Aishu in this situation...

Khushi remembered the hug in the hospital and related it to Aishu saying they'll become best friends...

NK was calling her with different names, and he's too protective of her...

Khushi also termed them as siblings...

And the gay wala part was superb and Arnav was just like a kid with her running round the table and her emptying the jug over his head...

Btw why was that Mohit after Aishu even before he was paid by the men on phone..??

Aishu seems really friendly with everyone and Arnav could notice the emotions in her eyes...

Finally Arnav came to know that Arjun was the one to donate blood to Khushi...

Aishu is good designer may she can be permanent in the company...

Arjun was to the point and really didn't make any attempt to talk about his parents...

Are they really Khurana???

How are they connected??

Arnav is really looking forward to call as Brother by Aishu I guess...

Precap seems bad... Arnav control your Temper man...

I don't think Arnav will behave same way as he behaved with Khushi few years before...

And even Khushi had spoken to him regarding this...

Btw when will Prithvi and Aishu meet??

Update soon dear... looking forward to next chapter...