Smitar's OS 2:Finding Khushi#2Part13(1)Pg132(23/3)

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GunM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

super duper update

new form of bathing...Atta bathing😆

also very nice that Khushi let out her frustration

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shubhadask

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Beautiful update.. I am really waiting for Khushi 's reply to Arnav's question

"Do you really want to be free of me, Khushi?. Waiting for next update..

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PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Beautiful updates by Smita and awesome interpretations by rashmi. You guys are two rock solid writers, absolutely love all your work. Great work & very well done 👏

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Visitor123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Smita- Thank you so much for taking time out of your busy schedule to write this wonderful FF and allowing readers like me to still enjoy the magical world of Arnav & Khushi. 100 stars for updating it daily. Rashmi- Thank you for posting these on IF for us.

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

amazing update

they had an atta bath but lucky it wasnt on the heads

his last line loved it, wonder what she will say and will he abide by it

and is part 2 not up yet? i saw a link before but it didnt come up

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Simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Did not realize there was a new thread already! Congratulations!
All of the updates were fabulous! I am really looking forward to what Khushi says to Arnav's question!
Awesome as always, Smita!