Behind the Mask - ManVeer FF [Ch. 23, P. 36]

SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

SIMI...I THOUGHT THAT AGAIN U DISAPPEARED.UPDATE WAS REALLY A SURPRISE SIM.

I REALLY FELT BAD FOR UDAY.OMG HE IS DRINKING ALCOHOL N HURTING HIMSELF.I THOUGHT MANYATA WILL COME HEARING D NOISE OF BREAKING THINGS.BUT IT WAS J.

LOVED DAT J VEER CONVO.TODAY J MADE REALISE VEER DAT HE IS IN LUV WID MANYATA.I WISH MANVEER SOON REALISE THEIR LUV FOR EACH OTHER.

NICE UPDATE SIMI.ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF D CHAPPY.BUT TODAY THERE WAS NO MANVEER SCENES.PLZ INCLUDE IN NEXT ONE.LUKING FORWARD FOR NEXT CHAPPY.CONTINUE SOON DEAR.DANXS FOR PM.

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

wow awesome simi!!
it was interesting!!!!
Uday and Jai's conversation for first time I liked it
update soon

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pia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

it wass lovelyyy!!!!!! will be waitng for manveerr!!!!! bt sacchi mein aj jai aur uday ka scene dkhke bohut azhha lgaa,infct i jst love ddatt last 2 dialogss!!!!!!! it was aweomsseee!!!!!!!!😊😊

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Moni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

I WANT LONGER PARTS!!!

It was short again :( But if you give me frequent updates like before I will be happy :P

Coming to the part I loved the Uday-Jay convo. I absolutely love how Jay is in ur SS. She is flawed and yet so likable. I m glad Uday finally realized that she isn't as bad as he imagined her to be. I can't wait for ManVeer you give us the most amazingly sexy sword fight between Manveer in one part and then no ManVeer for another 2-3 parts :(

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aathiraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

LOVELY.AWESOME.
BUT NO MANVEER.
NEXT TIME GIVE LONG UPDATE.
CONTINUE SOON.

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

totally superb...amazing...luv it...

really beautifully written...

thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...

please continue soon n do pm me...

Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago

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saakhi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Hey simi my like button nt working. ... Sorry
coming to d update it was vry nice, first time saw a mature n sensible J... Hopefully manyata also realises her feelings n manveer come together, wanna just get rid of akash...
Hey dear pls update a lil frequently, was waiting frm such a long tym...
Update next one vry soon... N a big one 😆

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

hye!
read all the updates in one go, its superb
loved uday's & jays conversation
do continue soon
waiting to read more
do pm me if possible

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

lovely amazing update soonn
u rock thank u 4 pm
loved ur updates so much
plss update sooon
sorry 4 late comment dear
loved it manveer very nice
i m waiting 4 nect update
plss pm me 4 sure

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simisworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Author's Note:

Hey guys, I am working on the next update for BTM and I promise it will be a long one. In the meantime, I wrote an OS on Ayaan and Humeira from Qubool Hai and wanted to share it with those that are interested. Please check out the link below and comment.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3685174

Thanks!

Simran

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