Behind the Mask - ManVeer FF [Ch. 23, P. 36] - Page 17

Supafantabolous sim👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -Moni-

Hey Simi :)

I m Moni I was a active member of this forum till last year...Haven't been around much after that...But I do miss ManVeer a lot and that is what forces me sometimes to come to this forum...mostly in search on FFs and OSs and I mostly end up reading the old FFs and OSs...I will be brutally honest none of the new FFs suit my taste... until I came across urs!

I LOVE ur FF will be an understatement...I stayed up almost the entire night reading it LOL...I just couldn't go to sleep without completing all the parts...The FF is everything the show could have been :(...I love the way you have build every character...right from the conflicting dual personality Uday...to the ever confused Manyata...to the mature and sensible Unnati...to (for a change) a vulnerable and likable Jay lol...

The most fav parts have been the confrontation between Jay and Manyata...trust me it brought tears to my eyes!...specially when she tells Manyata how Uday used to always carry something which belonged to her as reminder of M...I m so glad you didn't make Jay a typical vamp :D...ManVeer's sword fighting scene was OMG!! SO HOT!! *Goosebumps* hehehe...

I can just go on and on but I won't bore you more...I will post my expectations from the FF only after you post the next part :P...You haven't updated for a while now...and I hope you are not planning on discontinuing it :(((...I have always had a very bad luck with the FFs I love...most of them are discontinued :(...PLEASE PROVE ME WRONG THIS TIME!!

Btw I just wrote my longest post on I-F after almost a year's sabbatical LOL...

Love Moni

PS: Can't wait for the next part!!

Originally posted by: simisworld

Hi Moni,

Thanks so much for your wonderful post. I always love to read feedback from the readers. When I thought About writing this FF, I had this random scene of Uday and Manyata in my head (which I haven't written yet) and the ideas just kept flowing from there. I too was very disappointed with the turn the show took and instead of just writing an OS, I decided to write a full fledged FF the way I wish the show had been. (I am working up to that scene and will likely include it in the upcoming chapters.)

I assure you, I am definitely not discontinuing this FF lol. I usually update once or twice a week but have been traveling the last week so have not had a chance to update. I'm working on the next chapter right now and will hopefully post in the next day or two.

Thank you so much for commenting and I look forward to hearing your thoughts in the future.

Best,

Simi