FF: D for Desire #3 (Ch 22-25)

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Please mat jao Khushi...
Stay with him...make him realize he loves you...
Nice update.
Hope we will get the next update soon.

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Anxious of not finding her dn felt relieved n mesmerized to hv her making their brkfst dt was so naturally domestic n lovable bt later deir see-off to eachother was heart aching Really both r stubborn n way right also in not giving up to their values i liked d way u hv wrote their inner turmoil thoughts n emotion d loved tie act thx

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#773

God ! When is this Aranv going to realise that he needs to hold her back ??

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

Cant side with any of the two here. But yes, Khushi is right to take that decision. Even if there is no name for their relationship from Arnav yet an assurance of love could have changed the whole scene. Heartbreaking,the last part. Awesome narration, Farha!

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

Patha nahi wen will these two stubborn heads will be togthr...badi der lagaa di yaar..

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Beautiful, beautiful story... Especially the last few chapters. Some scenes were just so touching and goose-bumpy.

And this last one - it brought tears to my eyes, honestly. It was like, I was screaming in my head, "No! Don't leave! Make the plane crash! Or something!!"

God, I felt so so bad for both of them!

Incredible story. Incredible.

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Loved da update... Arnav's tension at not finding her his restlessness at da thought dat she might have left n peace he felt on hearing her voice... Such a family like scene it was oh she used the coupan in dat way sad... Eagerly waiting for next update