FF: D for Desire #3 (Ch 22-25)

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brinny

@brinny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

awesome update👏

Beautifully written

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Natalia

@Natalia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Maat jao... Khushi Maat jao...

Wish we could all say that on Arnav's behalf!!

Every gesture was soo sweet, but filled with the pain of impending separation...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

wow!!!!

awesome chapter

I was so touched... everything reached my heart their love, their desire, restlessness and their pain... I can feel these emotions in me too.. very beautifully written

oh no arnav don't change yourself again.. god they both are so stubborn and they knew it too

so now their separation...

oh that 'mat jao' always do something to me.. and by seeing that pic.. my heart cried for him

continue soon

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

I loved the ending sooo much..!!! I feel sad for them..I wish they meet soon..!!

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

'Maat Jao' these two words, just made me cry! Really!

How hard can it be to confess wat u vfeel.., why call it as love, just say na, dat i love it when i find you close to me in morning, i get freaked up on not finding you close, dat ur presence in kitchen makes me hold u close and nvr let go, wid you this place feels home, feels complete, i feel my heart goes big when i see u smile, dat when u come close i feel my heart racing.. I love to see u blush and all flustered.. And even seeing u go, kills somethng inside me..! This there 'love' here? Probably, but just these words wud make up for even more!

And khushi, she's already realised, she's doing wat all she cud do, to bring a li'll relief to her siling heart, to gain memories and lessen the pain.. To maintain her stand and to get a life..

But i guess. This is wat they need, li'll time for their own, to understand the depth of their feelings..
Cuz Arnav might hav guarded himself again, yet the strom is brewing inside him. It won't take him ong to realise the direction of winds inside him;)

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Loved the story so far. I have been meaning to read this for a while and finally I caught up! I hope Arnav realises soon how much he needs her and changes his mind. Khushi needs to be strong, she has his family as support now! More heartbreak I suppose? Please update soon.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

beautiful juncture. very nicely brought about. the desolate eyes. funnily, it's all always in his eyes, isn't it? have been doing some writing... i too keep coming back to those eyes. lovely chapter. i look forward to the next. thanks, farha, always a pleasure to read.

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TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

ur baacck!!
after soo long!
missed u and the updates :P
well he cud get used to the domesticity but separation was necessary!
one of them has to change their views!

khushis right in her stand and so is arnav!
they have grown up with that views!

amazing chp
the goodbye was too heart wrenching to read!
but it had to come