Farah - I read yesterday night but was so sleepy so I didn't post my comments. I had to re-read it today to actually enjoy the beautiful writing that you have written in this chapter. So here are my comments.
- I can't say I am angry with either Arnav or Khushi. Both are right in their own way. Khushi is a traditional girl and she can't just have an fling with Arnav and not be committed to him in all the ways possible. Her upbringing is not that. If Arnav had at least indicated that he was willing to give her, the rightful place of his wife, Khushi would have never let him go. All she needed was some support/some hope and she got none from Arnav. So I am actually happy that Khushi called the relationship quits and is trying to move on. Like they say rolling stones gather no moss - there is no point in trying to hold on to a person who is not going to be committed and who himself is fighting his demons.
- Arnav - I am actually disappointed in Arnav. He knows that Khushi is the girl who completes him but he is just not willing to hold on to her. One day he is going to regret letting her go. He would regret not holding on to her with whatever force he could do and keep her with him. Let few days go by and then we will see how this guy would fare without Khushi by his side. Tab aayega truck pull ke neeche. Can't wait to see Arnav fighting his feelings for Khushi. I know you would ace that one too.
And the ending and the photo - sigh. It was so beautiful - Both expecting the other to stop them and both expecting the other to tell them not to leave and go. Hayyee. First love can truly be painful and these two idiots are on their way to know it first hand.
Loved the update - Awesome writing and the emotions and the dialogues - Fantabulous. Good job. Now update L&L.
Edited by psarada - 12 years ago
