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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am here atlast...dont even ask me why now...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bs_deeps

I am here atlast...dont even ask me why now...😳

LOL .. because the BBs kept you busy 😉
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#53

Originally posted by: fire_whisky

Now let me really give it to you woman, you made me swoon with your story. It was something worth a treat to my senses [I swear]

I started with this story yesterday and would have completed in a go, if only my mind would have allowed it, but yes I did winded up in two days and 'm proud, I could 😛

This is one of the rare fiction about Arnav & Khushi, I could almost feel butterflies fluttering in my heart, I was nothing but drooling over the fact- "Mohabbat Door Jaane Na De", for there's nothing like Nafrat in here, so I happily settled with the latter half of the Liner 😊

No matter I read it in a go, but I could totally take in the time you took to develop the story, you started it on June 21st after all. I must say you justified with every chapter so well, I'm in awe for your writing. Never once did the 'Need' of being physically close to each other felt overdone.
[Believe me when I say that, I have read fictions, that were nothing, but complete disaster 🤢]

I really loved the part where he tags her along to his own place of Solace and her being feisty for the White Koi Fish! It spoke volumes of 'Innocence'!
Again the conversation with her parents, who apparently are the stars was so moving, I was touched and smiled all through, as Arnav was all so engrossed, he never once thought it stupid to be explaining their action to something that would be believed only in theories!


And of course where he tags her along to her own place, it was downright shocking. You would laugh at me, but can you believe I was actually imagining something of that sort happening to me one day, did I just say that out loud 😲
I cannot explain, it was all so attaching and emotional in a go!

It is so perfect and amazingly happening! You really did create an alternate universe for this story. Hats Off girl.

P.S- I would like to add, it is in long time that I'm typing in so much for a fiction on IF. And Let me tell you, Ritz wasn't wrong when she decided to be there forever with you and this FF.

Keep Posted Woman
Love & Hug
Radhika


*takes a deeep breath*
You made me blush, sweetie. Big time. All I can say is ... I am flattered.
This is my first piece. And I am very well aware of my misakes. And when you still say you have loved my story so much .. all I can do is .. thank you from the bottom of my heart. 😊
Hope you will be around till we reach the end.
Thanks for coming onboard. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
I'd be there until the very end
[I just love quoting Harry Potter on such occasions! ]
You're worth it woman, believe me. 🤗

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

*takes a deeep breath*
You made me blush, sweetie. Big time. All I can say is ... I am flattered.
This is my first piece. And I am very well aware of my misakes. And when you still say you have loved my story so much .. all I can do is .. thank you from the bottom of my heart. 😊
Hope you will be around till we reach the end.
Thanks for coming onboard. 🤗

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Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Is that your biggest comment ever, Preet? 😃 At least in my threads? 😃
I simply loved reading the comment .. and you made me relive my own story!
Thanks for being there since the beginning! 🤗


Your are welcome😊 I really loved chapter 23 it was mind blowing outstanding now pathak se update kardo 😃
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22

Devyani Singh Raizada was highly irritated. She hated it when her things were not in the right place. In fact, not only her things, anything out of order always pissed her off. She knew she was a bit too particular about things. What was the disease Arnav mentioned once? OCD? Whatever! Why could not the people in the house just respect her need to have things in the right order? Just a bit symmetric. Just a bit aligned.

She took all her irritation out on Hari Prakash as she walked into the dining hall. "I never want to see the candles anywhere else," she finished blasting the poor man and pulled the chair for herself not letting him do it for her unlike other times. Only after she sat down & turned her plate, did she notice the new member at the table whose face pretty much gave away that she had managed to scare the girl to death. She was not sure why her heart jumped like that as her eyes rested on her face. She was beautiful. But more than that what affected her was the sense of familiarity the girl was instigating. Who was she?

Khushi tried to gulp down the nervousness that the scrutinizing eyes of the old lady was causing her. She seemed like Arnav's Naani by all means. Neither Anjali ji nor Maami ji showed any resemblance to Arnav in nature but this old lady could very well be the person from whom Arnav had got certain parts of his genes. She quickly put together her sweaty hands and tried to smile, "Namaste."

"Namaste," Naani nodded as her eyes inspected her face and accessories. She decided on her initial impression of the girl being a decent one, with decent clothes and with at least minimal etiquette. Girls have forgotten to pay respect to the elders properly these days. Since when "Namaste" had been reduced to "hello, hi, bye, bye," she always wondered.

"I don't think I have met you before," she enquired cautiously.

"Nani," Arnav volunteered, "Ye Khu .."

"Maine aap se poocha," Naani asked in a tone that shut Arnav up completely. She very well hid her surprise at her Grandson's unlikely behavior. Why was he introducing the girl? She could not recall seeing this new girl in the gossip columns or the business pages. And even the women who were seen with him never stepped into this house. Not that she liked any of the women he was involved with but she always demanded to meet them. He had to get married someday. Even if the girl was not a Raizada Bahu type – it was still better in her eyes to get them married than reading about their "love life" in the media. He needed to settle and she was highly worried about that. She already liked this girl better than those she had seen practically glued to her grandson. Why the girls were so besharam these days?

"I am Devyani," she introduced herself, "Aap?"

"Ji," Khushi could not hide her nervousness at all, "Main Khushi. Khushi Kumari Gupta. My company is doing a project with AR Industries. That is what has brought me to Delhi."

"Accha," questions did not leave Nani's eyes, "So you two are working today?"

Nani's eyes quickly searched Arnav's face and then shifted back to Khushi. Why Arnav brought her to work at home? She knew her grandson very well. She had seen him growing up, she had seen him change. The subtle softness in his countenance as he stared at the girl, did not escape her eyes.

"Nahi, Naniji," Khushi smiled at her, "I was missing home and Arnav said you too miss Lucknow. So I just kind of invited myself."

Arnav felt like thanking her for coming up with the best possible answer. She had hit the bull's eye just right. He relaxed in his seat as he noticed the face of her Nani suddenly brighten up. Lucknow. That was all Khushi really needed to say.

"Lucknow," Naani exclaimed, "Aap Lucknow se hain?"

"Ji, Naniji," Khushi smiled back, "Is it ok if I call you, Naniji?"

"Of course, bitiya. That's why I was wondering why you seemed so familiar. I smell Lucknow already. Anjali .. Manorama .. you knew she was from Lucknow?"

"Ji, Nani," Anjali relaxed in her seat too, "In fact, Khushi ji and I have talked for hours already. And we have prepared lunch for you. Special treat from the Lucknawi chefs."

Khushi's smile broadened as Anjali winked at her.

"Lucknow," it was time for Mami ji to exclaim too as she mentally ticked another box in her massive criteria list, "Why didn't you tell me earlier, Anjali Bitiya? Khushi Bitiya, have you ever won Miss Lucknow pageant?"

"Ji," Khushi was quite taken aback by Maami's question, "Nahi, Mami ji .."

"Manorama," Nani interrupted, "What kind of question is that?"

"Maa ji," Manorama could not hide her excitement, "I am only a few questions away from calling Akash Bitwa home."

"Manorama," Naani scolded her lightly as finally she understood why her daughter-in-law was over-hyper, "We are keeping a guest hungry at the table. Let's eat first."

Arnav and Khushi sat confused as they tried to understand what made Anjali giggle so much. Half of the words said by Nani and Mami went above their head already. Why everyone started speaking gibberish all on a sudden? Arnav frowned at Khushi and all she could do was shrug.

The lunch at the Raizada Mansion went smoothly as everyone relished the food prepared by Anjali and Khushi. The ladies chatted incessantly about everything and nothing while Arnav ate silently enjoying the liveliness around the dining table after a long time. He was waiting for lunch to be over and have Khushi all to himself in the pretense of work. To his utter dismay, Arnav watched the ladies hijacking Khushi and taking her to the living room for … well .. furthermore, chats.

"What the ..," Arnav grumbled as he munched on his customized sugar-free jalebis made by Khushi, "How could they talk so much?"

Arnav went back to his room determined to not care a bit about Khushi's continued lack of attention. She did not even look at him! And why was he so bothered?

"Minus 10, Khushi Kumari Gupta," Arnav muttered as he opened his laptop.

Not all resolution was meant to be a success.

After half an hour of forced concentration on the confidential facts and figures, Arnav finally decided to check on what the ladies were doing. After all, he could not take any chance of having the ladies bring down the house, he convinced himself. He went downstairs only to be back in his room in minutes all frustrated and grumpy.

Women!

Had Khushi totally forgotten about him? She seemed so happy with the ladies – laughing and talking. Was that why she had come to Raizada Mansion? Was that why he had brought her home?

Arnav kept punching the keys of his laptop furiously. If she could be so nonchalant, so could he. He wanted to do something special for her and he had done it. Enough.

After another thirty minutes, Arnav was seen walking into the living room in his ASR-ish demeanor.

"Khushi," he ordered her without any pretense, "Come with me. I have something important to discuss with you."

Khushi was having a good time with the Raizada ladies. Each of the three women was completely different from the other but each had something in common, something that made Khushi love them even within such a short period of time. Despite all limitations, each of them was pure at heart. Growing up under the care of these ladies, could Arnav be anymore different, Khushi kept wondering all the time.

Arnav's body language alarmed Khushi since she could feel the rigidity in him. Was he angry? But why?

"Ok, I am coming," she replied instantly and turned to the ladies, "I will be back."

"Sure, Khushi Bitiya," Nani already knew Arnav was disturbed, "Arnav, do you have to discuss work even today? I thought you brought her home for us."

Arnav shrugged.

Nani opened her mouth to question more but halted as Anjali gestured with a suppressed laugh. As soon as they left, Nani enquired Anjali.

"Is something cooking," she asked proving rightly she indeed was Anjali's Nani. She had not forgotten neither the changes she had noticed in his grandson nor his unusual gestures.

"I have a feeling, Nani," Anjali could not control a full-blown smile, "That he has brought her home with no apparent reason, is reason enough. But you know, Chotey!"

"Haan," Nani smiled slightly concluding in her head that both of them could not be wrong, "Let us give them some time. When the time is right, we can talk to Arnav."

Manorama was trying to make some sense out from this conversation but failed miserably since she still was stuck in her dreamland where Khushi was pouring her water and calling her "Maa ji" while passing shy glances at her Akash Bitwa. The obviousness of the situation totally skipped her happy brains. Was Arnav planning to get Khushi married to Akash? This day could not get any better, she decided, as she sniggered in glee.

When the ladies were happy in their own world, Khushi followed Arnav silently into his room. Arnav shut the door with a bang and turned to her.

"What," Khushi asked in surprise.

Arnav opened his mouth to give her a piece of his mind and found no word. What was he supposed to say to her? Why did she choose to chat with the ladies instead of spending "quality" time with him? He could never sound so desperate. He feared if he had already given her the "wrong" impression. Of course, he was not desperate. Arnav Singh Raizada was desperate only when it came to work. Women were not in his priority list. Nope.

"Nothing," he finally managed to grumble and walked towards his recliner in long strides. He unlocked the screen of his laptop and started going through some files.

"I think it is a good time we discuss about how to take the project forward," he said without looking at her.

"You really asked me to join you to discuss work," Khushi asked incredulously.

"Yes, of course," Arnav could not control looking up at her as his tone hinted the mockery of the statement slightly, "What else did you think?"

Arnav forgot everything else as he watched, all mesmerized, her mouth shaping into a perfect "O" – the one expression that had never left his mind since the day he had met her.

"You are unbelievable, you know that," Khushi asked, still not trying to hide her irritation and shock at Arnav's behavior.

"Aur ye tum keh rahi ho!" Arnav asked.

"Haan," Khushi replied mockingly, "So you asked me to stay back for a day to discuss work?"

"No," Arnav had already started to enjoy Khushi's frustration, "I asked you to stay back so that I could score you and make you fail … like you wanted me to fail."

"Haww," Khushi's eyes widened along with her perfectly rounded mouth. Laad Governor was trying to revenge!

Payback never tasted sweeter. Arnav smirked. How he loved when she rounded her mouth like that! And those beautiful eyes .. He forgot he was supposed to be angry. Who wanted to be angry anyway when there were better things to do.

Arnav suddenly stood up and in an instant, he was only inches away from Khushi. And before she could make out what suddenly changed Arnav's mood, she felt his thumb touching the corner of her mouth. Her eyes shot up to meet his and only to be drowned in the dark whirlpool of desire. His eyes always spoke more than his words. And what those eyes were telling her now, gave her goosebumps all over.

Arnav slowly circled around the outline of her mouth with his thumb. He made sure he was slow enough .. to make her breathing hitched .. to make her shudder .. to have the effect on her he intended to. By the time he finished circling, he knew her knees were on the verge of melting.

Arnav smirked again.

"I love it when you open your mouth like that," his voice came out huskier in desire than he was planning to. Damn this girl! She affected him more than he wanted to.

Khushi immediately shut her mouth and gulped. She knew too well what that predatory hint in his voice and eyes meant. She stepped backward instinctively only to have the distance covered again by Arnav stepping forward. In a while, she was standing with her back hitting the wall - caged between Arnav's hands on both sides of her on the wall.

"Arnav ..." her voice exposed every bit of her anticipation.

"Shhh ..," Arnav hushed her not trying at all to hide his intentions. He lowered his face with his eyes completely focused on the luscious lips – everything else forgotten. The slightly parted shivering lips made the blood rush through his veins faster and he did not want to wait anymore. He landed his lips on hers and all he got to do after that was shut his eyes in frustration.

"Arnav Baba," Hari Prakash's voice, accompanied by the heavy knocks on the door, broke through the trance, "Nani ji was asking if you would come down for tea."

"Unbelievable," Arnav muttered and slowly moved his face away from her, frustration completely evident in his face.

"We will be downstairs in minutes," he managed to reply calmly with great effort.

As the intruder left, Arnav turned to face Khushi who was standing with her lips pressed, amusement evident in her face. What was so funny about that??

"Argh," Arnav could not hide his frustration, "This house is jinxed. Two times. Can you believe it? Twice in the same day."

Khushi could not control laughing out loud. She completely adored the pouty Arnav. Who could imagine that "the" Arnav Singh Raizada could pout like a kid & whine .. and that too because he missed a kiss? She felt a kind of affection for him that she had not felt till date. It was not only attraction. There was more.

She did not realize when the words left her mouth. But it happened. Right there, right then. She said it aloud on his face as she kept laughing and admiring his babyish face.

"I love you, Arnav!"

Part of this chapter is highly influenced by the following pic. I am sure you will easily identify which part. 😆
Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

finnaly editing
i read almost all of this chapter a month ago and i have also the comment half writed but nope someone have to tell me something a ruing my mood and this happened sorry, sorry, i'm really sorry for being late, first to res and last to unres what a achivement I don't even feel to celebraite it

I simply loved this update it was adorable i can say that they are in love with each other but they don't know about it yet, maybe they started felt this new feelings but they don't know how to mane it, till now for them it's just a game especially for Arvan, while Khushi i think i attached to him a lot and now to his family to.
Some parts that i really liked about this updates:
"Namaste," Naani nodded as her eyes inspected her face and accessories. She decided on her initial impression of the girl being a decent one, with decent clothes and with at least minimal etiquette. Girls have forgotten to pay respect to the elders properly these days. Since when "Namaste" has been reduced to "hello, hi, bye, bye," she always wondered. Well Naniji now be happy Khushi i here nah and she is going to talk wiht you in shood Hindi 😃

Why the girls were so besharam these days? because we are in the 21st century and plus because they think this way they will impress ASR, but they didn't know that to impress him they need to be different, just like Khushi 😉


"Lucknow," it was time for Mami ji to exclaim too as she ticked another box in her massive criteria, "Why didn't you tell me earlier, Anjali Bitiya? Khushi Bitiya, have you ever won Miss Lucknow pageant?" 🤣 😕 😕now this what as to do with Khushi, mamiji sometimes are really funny 😆 😆

"Maa ji," Manorama could not hide her excitement, "I am only a few questions away from calling Akash Bitwa home." Omg Khushi Mamiji Khushi is for Arnav not your Aakash bitwa and have you asked to your bitwa maybe he already found someone else so stop being the haddi between this to lovers

"What the ..," Arnav grumbled as he munched on his customized sugar-free jalebis made by Khushi, "How could they talk so much?" Arnav you don't know but we girls can talk for hours and that too without any break and without any rational topic.

He was waiting for lunch to be over and have Khushi all to himself in the pretense of work. What you had her for so many days our should i say night that you can't even left her with your family even for few hours, impatient we are, naughty too.

Has Khushi totally forgotten about him? She seemed so happy with the ladies – laughing and talking. Was that why she came to Raizada Mansion? Was that why he brought her home? Yeah why you brought her Arnav??? Even i want to know that

Arnav's body language alarmed Khushi since she could feel the rigidity in him. Was he angry? But why? Question of the year, but i will answer for you, because he want you only for him and you are too busy in chatting

Manorama was trying to make some sense out from this conversation but failed miserably since she still was stuck in her dreamland where Khushi was pouring her water and calling her "Maa ji" while passing shy glances at her Akash Bitwa. The obviousness of the situation totally skipped her happy brains. hahaha but her dreams are going to shattered, poor mamiji 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Why Arnav take so much time to kiss, i mean i know that the kissing processe it's important but in a home like his where all have a special degree in ruining romantic moments he should skip that and just kiss 😳

Omg she said I love you 😲 😲 now what will happen well i'm going to read the next chapter 😆
Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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omg me first going to faint







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I am posting the comment now itself...bcoz I realize that with three BBs around, one to make me crazy, one to keep me bzy and the other to make me tensed, I am never going to update if its not now...

I miss writing my comments to each of your lines...
For me it was a good update till I reached last stages...then the magic happened...from the time they entered his bed room...tell me one thing...ASR takes a girl to his bed room to discuss work? 😕 (LOL..you didnt mention bed room, you only said his room, and I am assuming the rest)...
One thing this guy need to learn is...kiss quickly dammit..why do you want to take all the time in the world to make circles and then get frustrated for interruption? 😉
Pouty Arnav..LOL..they should release one pic per day so that you get inspired and give faster updates...
Last para...🤗for that...I am glad she just said it without thinking about it...thank you :)
We saw directors crying saying that audience always want to see Arnav & Khushi for all 22 mins...its true...but you just showed how to keep the audience happy at the end of the episode even though they are not together for most part of the episode...😊 I liked it..its a happy feeling at the end...
But...😉..she said "I love you"..I dont know if that is creating a storm in his heart..he is crazy..and it will be interesting to see how you take it forward...
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Are wah kya connection hai I just asked and you did it
Love you for this 🤗

still can't believe what a luck I got



p.s sorry for taking the first and second plance I feel evil 😈


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