FF: D for Desire #3 (Ch 22-25)

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lika63

@lika63

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

hey today i jst found it thought to give a trail.and i read al d parts.

its interesting.

eagerly waiting for d family drama.

thanq

update soon

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Jay

@Sharaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

congrts for new thread ...

Cant wait for update...
It has been really a month dear...

pls pls pls update soon...

Edited by Sharaa - 12 years ago

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

congrats on the new thread:)

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Now let me really give it to you woman, you made me swoon with your story. It was something worth a treat to my senses [I swear]

I started with this story yesterday and would have completed in a go, if only my mind would have allowed it, but yes I did winded up in two days and 'm proud, I could 😛

This is one of the rare fiction about Arnav & Khushi, I could almost feel butterflies fluttering in my heart, I was nothing but drooling over the fact- "Mohabbat Door Jaane Na De", for there's nothing like Nafrat in here, so I happily settled with the latter half of the Liner 😊

No matter I read it in a go, but I could totally take in the time you took to develop the story, you started it on June 21st after all. I must say you justified with every chapter so well, I'm in awe for your writing. Never once did the 'Need' of being physically close to each other felt overdone.
[Believe me when I say that, I have read fictions, that were nothing, but complete disaster 🤢]

I really loved the part where he tags her along to his own place of Solace and her being feisty for the White Koi Fish! It spoke volumes of 'Innocence'!
Again the conversation with her parents, who apparently are the stars was so moving, I was touched and smiled all through, as Arnav was all so engrossed, he never once thought it stupid to be explaining their action to something that would be believed only in theories!

And of course where he tags her along to her own place, it was downright shocking. You would laugh at me, but can you believe I was actually imagining something of that sort happening to me one day, did I just say that out loud 😲
I cannot explain, it was all so attaching and emotional in a go!

It is so perfect and amazingly happening! You really did create an alternate universe for this story. Hats Off girl.

P.S- I would like to add, it is in long time that I'm typing in so much for a fiction on IF. And Let me tell you, Ritz wasn't wrong when she decided to be there forever with you and this FF.

Keep Posted Woman
Love & Hug
Radhika

Edited by fire_whisky - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Please update soon ..it's nearly one month gone since last update...want to see nani's reaction ...congrats for the new thread

Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I just caught up with thread two, and brilliant job! Now it's Nani's entrance...can't wait!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Thx for this story...will read it soon!

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iritz

@iritz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Welcome to thread 3 of D for Desire. 😊

A special shout out to Ritz (iritz)

Ritz .. Thank you for giving me the first dose of confidence I needed to continue this story and for all the valuable feedback.. and definitely for volunteering to review my chapters.

This FF will run for at least another 10 chapters. Hope to see you all there when we say adieu to this version of Arnav-Khushi love story.

Hey Farha, 🤗

I've been so busy lately... didn't realize thread was open !!! You are most welcome sweetheart ! D4D has always had a special place in my heart... and you know the reason !!!! I just seriously hope that you post updates sooner !!!