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Posted: 19 years ago
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g8 proomo soundd good post the fisrt part soon 😃 😃 😃
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nice promo...cant wait 4 the first part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

thanks iqra didi! and happy birthday!
- Nisha and Mauli😊

hey....awww Thanx a bunch mauli u r so sweet

Iqra😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol!!

fab promo!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 1

you see a flat and you go inside you see two bedrooms one is pink and one is purple in the pink bedroom you see a figure of a girl covered in the blanket then you see another girls mouth face eyes... etc then you see the girl is nimmo she is standing by the bed and tries to wake up the other girl

n- come on get up well be late for college

g- come on nimmo let me sleep

n- ok but its 12 pm

g (shocked)- what

the girl gets up and you see it is kripa nimmo is laughing at kripa for falling for the joke

k- come on nimmo that was not fair

n- ok ok sorry i am going to make breakfast you go take a shower

kripa takes a shower and comes out in a salwaar with silver bangles on

meanwhile nimmo is making breakfast she was making toast and eggs
they would always make coffee because they would go crazy over it.
kripa came down she saw Nimmo making breakfast

k- need any help

n- no why dont you just sit its almost done

kripa goes to the table and sits down. she turns on the tv and see 'Kavyaanjali' on. that was kripas and nimmos fav show.

k (shouts)- nimmo.. kavyaanjali is on!!

n- coming

Nimmo comes out of the kitchen with the food and both of them watch the show. soon they are done and they turn off the tv and put the dishes in the sink. they go outside and call for a taxi. After 15 minutes later the taxi comes and kripa and nimmo were talking and laughing etc. finally they reached college

meanwhile

you see a huge flat. it almost looks like a mansion. then inside you see 23 rooms. all of them are white except two. one is black and one is red. you go into the red room and you see pics of model girls. then you see a muscular figure sleeping on the bed. all of a sudden his alarm goes off. he tries to find it with his hand and his eyes closed but cant. so he gets up. you see his face and it is angad! looks at the clock

a- omg! you look so beautiful

he runs to the pic of a model then a guy comes in. you see his mouth, eyes, nose, etc... then you see it is none other than kunal.

ku- dude what are you doing?

a- nothing... lets go..

ku- at least get dresses..

a (embarasseed)- yeah... ok..you go...

angad goes and takes a shower

downstairs kunal orders the servent to make breakfast.

ku- go make breakfast

s- yes sir

ku- what are you looking at my face for? go! (points to the kitchen)

kunal turns on the tv and swithches the channel to boxing soon angad comes down and sits by kunal and watches then the servent comes he is scared now that both angad and kunal are here.

a (yells)- wheres our breakfast?

s- coming...

the servent takes the breakfast to them when he is giving it he blocks the tv and they cant see

ku+a- MOVE!!

the servent moves they watch and stare at the servent

ku+a- youre fired!! you made us miss the best part!!

s- but...

a (points to the door)- GO!

the servent packs up and leaves in a good mood.

Now Angad And Kunal now what they were thinking of getting new servent but this time it should be a girl maid so they can flirt with her.
servant= Tina

T-hello mr.Seghal and Mr.Khanna

a-hello gorgeous

ku(whispering) she is mine

a-(whispering) no she is mine

ku- mine

a- fine ill ask her

a (to tina and kisses her hand and caresses it)- would you go out with me?

t (happy but hesitant)- umm... i have a boyfriend already... sorry...

angad lets go of her hand. angad and kunal get mad and head towards the door

a (yells before going out)- clean the whole house... there shouldnt be any mess....

angad drives away in his red beauty while kunal drives away in his black beauty

Here is the first part credit goes to Mauli for most of the writing thanks and enjoy it


love Mauli And Nisha😳😊


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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thats a nice part......continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool intro....cont sooon.. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww... thanks jaanu... awesome part!! 😳 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWSOME PLZZ CONTINUE SOON ITS BEEN ALMOST MONTHS PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great part! Can't wait for the next one! cont. soon!

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