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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

I'm plain speechless everytime I read your story. You write every emotion so poignantly, that I find myself lost in the beauty of your narration.

It was unexpected to read that Arnav would go to Akash's house. But the moment I came across the word "Varanasi " , I figured out that Arnav has planned to visit Akash's house.

I really feel bad when Arnav tries to forget Khushi and.. think about Lavanya. I somehow understand that this particular thought has stemmed from various reasons like- seven years of bottled up hurt, Lavanya's one-sided love and devotion and his state of being clueless..
But he is probably consciously not aware of the fact that he and Khushi have become One Single entity in their mutual unbridled Love.. There is no room for the concept of being recognised as two different individuals.
The fact that both Arnav and Khushi said the same thing after looking at Akash's home, proves that they are just.. one inseparable entity.
I just love this unique aspect of their Love.

Arnav shares a great professional camaraderie with Suman. 6 hours!

The way you described Arnav's pain, hurt and a simple wish to wake up from the nightmare was so, so Poignant. It is really touching.

.. I'm lost for words to describe how much your intricate description made me Awestruck.

Thanks for the PM.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Welcome back. Was missing this story.

Poor Arnav. So shattered and hurt. Never thought that he will seek refuge at Akash's place and what pain he must have gone through after seeing her picture.

It's true that ''No matter where we go, we'll take ourselves, and our damage with us.'' As much as he would like to change things, they remain the same. Time will heal.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Of course missed u! And welcome back, loved every bit of it. Feels really sorry for arnav! Great update. Pls pm me when u post the new story and when u update we the people. Thnks for the pm.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

So glad you are back, was missing this story and your awesome updates.

Wow the update was mind blowing, yet so emotional and heart breaking. I'm quite shocked Arnav turned up at Akash's, I just hope he finds some answers or at least the truth from Akash. I think Arnav was already heart broken and devastated, but seeing khushi's portrait just completely broke him down, awww I am feeling so sorry for the Arnav I actually cried. Poor Arnav at the end is wishing for so much stuff for the people in his life, so Anjali has told him about Aarav and the sad thing is he is actually wishing for not to go back. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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45678

@45678

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

missed u and ur updates.

it was amazing

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

missed your updates a lot..

thanks for coming back soon :)

can understand how arnav is feeling.. the days we get caught up in "what-if" are the worst ones because we feel so helpless.

although we crave for extraordinary.. sometimes i just wish life was simple, boring with fixable problems rather than accepting, hoping and wishing..

where should arnav go back from here. khushi had seven years to come to terms with what happened to her.. what did arnav have? and now what?

sometimes in relationships there is no clear demarcation of right and wrong because there is so much love and emotion involved. Anjali betrayed his trust, Khushi betrayed his trust.. But then that doesn't change the fact that they love him. Does that make their betrayal less wrong?

Why is to so important to protect whom we love from the truth that hurts?

I think my pensive mood is clear in the comment...

Once again - lovely update..

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

A heart wrenching update, I cried with and for Arnav... the damage from life be it caused by yourself or others becomes excess luggage for life sometimes.. turning up at Akash's place was a surprise and I hope he gains some kind of understanding and peace. Seeing her portrait obviously wounded him but he should keep an open mind about why Akash has it. The what ifs can haunt us and I hope soon he will lay those to rest .

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Welcome back 😊
Missed this story..
Feel sorry for Arnav and khushi..
Cant wait to know what Anjali told to Arnav and other hidden truths..

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

welcome back RockBarbie!!! we missed your updates!

For anyone who experiences the most fulfilling emotions that life can throw in, there is always the possibility that they will have to endure angst and suffering atleast once because it wouldnt be complete without that. Do not let the agony pull you down. Feel it completely and soak yourself in the feeling but come out of it and see the brighter side of life.

If he doesnt recover from this, Arnav is never going to be happy with Khushi. It would be better he moves on with Lavanya because although life may be bleak as a moonless night, it wont scorch him down. But if he can let go of this and understand why she chose to not share it with him and probably also realise that people act very weirdly when life throws agony in their way, then Arnav and Khushi can make a life together.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

God, I just want to hold him and soothe his pain. It was so vivid in the way you wrote that I was feeling his anguish and almost see how his mind was working. Glad he realized that Lavanya could have been a safe bet but t hat is not what he is looking for or what she deserves. I hope he does not blame Kushi solely as it was hard for her at that age to confront such a hard situation. I hope he realizes her love for him and the need to protect him was the factor in her making the decision that she did. She is paying for her mistakes and I am sure they can heal together.

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