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Originally posted by: Fiza28

i mean mature scenes like kissing nothing more then taht lol im not that great at that hehe

so it not that mayure too get closed or reported 😳

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

I'm no expert either. But there are certainly factors that you should include while writing a kiss scene.

Like...

The setting and mood. A kiss in a dark alley had a different feel from one under the mistletoe.

Distance. To kiss two people must be close. You can write how they come together to build the passionate tension. A conflict or heightened awareness is nice.

Our senses. Touch, Taste, Sight, Smell and Sound all okay into a kiss. Touch and Taste being most important. Smell, like the aroma of the other person, can also be nice.

What comes after is also important. Keep the tension going to keep your readers hooked for them to keep reading and see if they'll ever kiss again. Some conflict like some mixed emotions or someone walking in on them are also good ways to add to the tension and add some mystery factor as to what will happen next. :)


Hope that was helpful!

-Anjani.

Originally posted by: Fiza28

thank u thank u thank u this what i needed lol finally thanks 😳

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

^^^^

Also check this out - http://writeanything.wordpress.com/2010/02/10/how-to-write-a-kissing-scene/

Originally posted by: Fiza28

thanks dear really helped but 1 more q the stiry revoles around a bet n revange n how they r falling 4 each other unknowly how should the kiss me ?

Originally posted by: V323

Well, you stated earlier that your story is one where they are sexually attracted to each other. In which case, they would have already fantasized about each other, right? So you can use a tone of surprise in your writing, about how they thought the actual kiss would be like and how different it actually was. since this a story of revenge, you might wanna add a touch of fierceness to the kiss, making it almost primal.

Originally posted by: V323

Well, you stated earlier that your story is one where they are sexually attracted to each other. In which case, they would have already fantasized about each other, right? So you can use a tone of surprise in your writing, about how they thought the actual kiss would be like and how different it actually was. since this a story of revenge, you might wanna add a touch of fierceness to the kiss, making it almost primal.

Originally posted by: V323

The kiss, starting off as slow and sensual slowly increased its tandem as their tongues battled for supremacy. Her hand clutching at the back of his neck, she moulded herself into him. He, in turn, pulled her against him, as to negate the space between them. It was strange and beautiful, what happened then.

Originally posted by: arnkhunostalgic

If you do find any story do please let me know, read and re-read -khushi- a million times