New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Do I look like a Naxalite to you?--- that cracked me up!😆

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

so today kashi express has a stop here???

r v getting update???

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varshamaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

hahaha kushi makes me laugh!!!lol😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆fantastic writing yaar..i just sooo love kushi character lol...true sanki devi lol...😆and arnav is to hot with his what the..and expressions i can just imagine while reading ur work lol..absloutely amazing..totally enjoyed every bit of it...cant wait for part 3...

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

a helluva beginning! Shit, three men with expressions of hangmen, one with the additional qualification of being the long lost royal son of Queen Elizabeth and she was actually supposed to sleep the night amidst them?that desription just slew me 🤣! nice gesture on arnav's part to get his bodyguards to exchange berths with the old couple so as to put khushi at ease... arnav's utterly frustrated and sleep deprived convo with himself was the tops... and khushi's words to the old lady "Nothing aunty, he's travelling for the first time in a train this way na, so he's just a little nervous" had me grinning ear to ear! loved the calm and collected manner in which she advises arnav not to disembark from the train: "I said you can't. This is not some big station we're stuck at. It's a very remote one. The weather here is better but you don't have any airports in here. The only alternate must be public buses and with these roads, keeping in mind you called this train last night a 'bloody rocking chair',it's going to be close to adventure sports for you" and arnav's reaction to this was just awesome: Arnav Singh Raizada despised it when someone other than himself made a valid point,against his own, so of course all that came out was- Damn it. poor dear didn't like being put in the wrong by that crazy slip of a girl... khushi's near- hysterics on learning of the naxalites blowing up the tracks and later telling her jiji how she told people to calm down and think rationally was sheer genius! what a crazy girl... at least she looed abashed when arnav caught her out in her fibbing!

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Nilmi

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+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

I missed this somehow...Interesting story...loved it...😊

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mbbsrocks

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

awesome...awesome..awesome...

khushi is such a drama queen...

and arnav is a damn it king LOL

she said she was making people relax...lol such a blabering girl LOL

still the journey is left..poor arnav.has to ear this ROCKING CHAIR for more time...😆

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Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Awesome update. Omg khushi! She is unbelievable. Loved it

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please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

love it lol i laughed at the end super khushi

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sdfghjkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Yay! An Update! And Arnav's nice side. *swoon*

"That was very nice of you to ask strangers to sleep with you." Indeed, it was mighty nice of him. The whole story is great so far, and I am absolutely certain that the rest of it is going to be just as good, if not better. I can't wait for them to have to spend more time together. The end with Khushi pretending to be the hero was hilarious. Well, everything was funny. It was so weird reading about her eating dairy milk on the train because I've actually done that. On my first (and last) train ride ever, I ate dairy milk at 4 am because I didn't wanna share it with my sister. Yeah, I was a selfish, evil child. Well anyways, I'm really looking forward to reading more :)