New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

Awesm update...
So Arnav noticd her discomfrt...
Lovd d way f ur writtng... Beautifully writtn...
Cntinue soon...

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Needless to say enjoyed and loved the update!

Poor Arnav's noble gesture "Washte" ho gaya in Rocky's language!
Khushi discussing pickles and other stuff was hilarious! She can speak on any topic at any hour for any amount of time Isn't it?

Now looking forward eagerly to their crazy journey together!

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Priya

@LoveYouChutki..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

As usual awesome update dear.. :)
Thanx for the PM.. :)

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

I am totally loving this story!! The way you have written khushi cracks me up!!

I am glad you are writting again!! Your humor and wittiness have been sorely missed!!

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

heya sweety...

thanksss a tonnn for pm...

awsmmm ff.. loved ittt to core...

description ws fab...hat's off...

continue soon...

mwaah..loads of hugs

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@-ARSHI_LOVE-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

awesome... loved it... nxt plz ASAP...

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@sherlockthor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

dude you write so well!!
i am your big big pankhi man!!

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

dis z soo amazin..:)

khuhi Anav travllin 4m d same train..
same compart..
lol

she eats soo much..
she speaks sooo much..
poor rnav ...due 2 d bad weather he has 2 travl thru train.n dt 2 wid dis chattrbox..

his gesture of bringin d old couple was amzin.:)

btt dt wrkd agnst him..
d mustard oil..pickles n daughter n law n ol..
shes so crazy.
lol
d naxalit part..!!

wndr wts d hurry 4 arnav 2 reach lko.
wndr hw wu dey meet nxt..
wndr how wud dey fall in lov..n sooo much..
lol

w8in 2 read frthr..

loved it.:)

thnx..;)

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Awesome!!!

How much Khushi eats... Iam just surprised that he has yet to comment on it.

Edited by shreyasonia - 12 years ago

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

arnav is never gonna forget this journey especially with khushi
good boy arnav .He made khushi comfortable but poor guy he didnt know that he had to lose his peaceful sleep
khushi seriously asked his opinion abt that grandma's daughter in law
omg only she is capable of doing such things
seriously waiting for the blast from arnav
he is controlling his level best from not shout
awesome update
waitng to know how he is going to suvive the remaining journey