New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

I really like how real you have this experience seem between Arnav and Khushi. I can totally imagine it happening.

Your description of the train makes me miss India so bad. Haven't been on an Indian train in three years😭

Hope you update soon. I really want to know how you will move their story forward.

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rusticreet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

i must say u again are beginning to spoil me...i will only want you to keep updating more frequently 😃

the certain update was so vivid i could literally feel i was there listening to mad khushi and super-pissed arnav

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sias2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

m in love with this story!
lovely update!

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IPKKNDbigfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

awesome amazing please do continue soon👏😳👏👏😊😊

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

omg
this was an awsum update.
loved it
d pissed off arnav n an overly enthusiastic khushi
it was nyc on arnavs parts to bring in d elderly couples...
let d train journey to go on n on...
on d way dey vl eventually fell in love...

plsss update regularly...n plsss dont discontinue or stop writting dis story..
i hav already fallen in love wid it

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Zarahatke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

I just love this love in train story

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sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Nice part
Loved it
Update soon

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Seethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Fabulous update !!

The whole train sequence was just awesome !!! Loved lively Khushi and arrogant yet thoughtful Arnav.

I can't list out the actual lines but there are many which brought a wide smile while reading the entire update :) Thanks for the PM ..

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Wow u updated but am late...u explained train journey brilliantly...poor arnav...khushi is refering arnav as Prince William awww...train took a alternate route to lucknow...thanks for pm

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ENLIGHTENED1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

wow sabi what can i say ... u r just too good ...i felt like i am also travelling ...it was so easy to imagine the whole thing ...now they r struck ,...giggles