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iwkknd12

@iwkknd12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

How the hell did that man barge in? Ugh. I hate Khushi's vulnerable situation. And I hate the fact that Shyam got involved in this mess. As if it wasn't bad enough. But, I am glad that Buaji accepted Arnav's proposal! Although, Khushi still has to agree.

I am not a fan of how you take your time developing your chapters, but I know that's my impatience speaking. When this fic is complete, I'll love the pacing.

Hope this muse keeps up with you, and you update more regularly.

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I dont find "Caught" cliche'd. I agree to the fact that Arnav is Khushi's knight in shining armor and she is the damsel in distrust, who cries big fat tears and protects herself from the lusty eyes of the corrupt police officer... But... it is not cliched for me because it is not overly complex just because it has to be..

It is dramatic and I like reading it.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

The best part was Shyam getting the hammering from Buaji !!🤣

And the worst part poor Khushi getting abused over and over again,,,, high time Officer Raizada steps up and takes full charge!!

Loving this story with every update !!⭐️

PS: PLAGIARISTS GO ROT IN HELL !!😡

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Denaid

@Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Ok K, I've already showed my total support in the act of JOIN AGAINST PLAGIARISM. I've already posted my views there...

Now for the update... I was hoping you'd do so soon... I really love this particular story... It's different.

I have this feeling that it was shyam who had attacked Khushi, and that's why he was sounding guilty and anxious when he asked whether they had seen the attacker... And BITE MARKS on her neck!!!!!!! How sick can he get... Despo!!!! Poor Arnav has to tolerate that lecher with him all the time... And I can't understand one thing... How can the commissioner even believe that Shyam would be serving the country when his brother Dasya, is a criminal!!!! Or doesn't he know yet that they r brothers????? It's but obvious to me that Shyam is only dishing out these bits of information to the commissioner, (which r totally valueless and insignificant) just to have a favorable impression on him...

Buaji... U r an absolute darling here... Take that Shyam... Hope the scars of those sharp broom sticks never heal, and become septic and u die of septicemia... Amen...

Thank God Buaji agreed for Khushi to stay with Arnav... All the while the commissioner was assigning Arnav and Shyam their task of protection, my heart was very painfully lodged in my throat, thinking about all the things Shyam can do to Khushi in the name of protection... After reading the last sentence, I could actually swallow it to it's original place..;)

Abhi jaldi jaldi update karna, ok!!!!

Loved it as usual... Ur an outstanding writer!!!!!

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

what the hell buaji!! i hate you!! ew

omg don't leave her arnav!! marry her

please

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Music_Junkie

@Music_Junkie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Yikes!! Shyam got his well deserved pasting from buaji.
Am liking how the story is shaping up, now khushi is heading to Arnav's place.. Can't wait for the next update.

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Will Arnav be taking Khushi to his home and how will Shyam react to this?

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

These plagiarizers can't take the hint can they? It's so easy to figure out if people are stealing stuff, sad sad people

Thanks so much for the quick update!

I know it was Shyam who attacked her! That leech! Ugh I wanna kill the head officer at the police station. Men who force themselves on women just get demoted? This guy is just dangling Khushi infront of a molester! How Arnav doesn't want to beat his face in everyday is a miracle. So finally Khushi and Arnav will be together, I wish the circumstances were better but it's a relief. Shyam will obviously now know where Khushi is which still scares me!

Cant wait for the next update! It sucked when this story was on hiatus, I missed it so much! Thanks for coming back!

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penguin143

@penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Finally Buaji agreed..!
Khushi going with Arnav means more Arhi scenes..! 😃

Shyam beaten up by Buaji..😆
Hope Arnav soon finds out the truth behind Shash's death..

Awesome update Krani..
Continue soon..:-)

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

I came across this story when it was on a hiatus after chapter 14.had commented on the last thread.i missed this thread and hence 15,16..just read all 3 recent ones.
its one of a kind..and i guess it could'nt have been better. Your both stories are gradual ones that slowly lead towards love and i like it.
Coming onto the present chapter..
So arnav s fear did come true but relieving to know that they have agreed for the help from arnav. Shyam is disturbing but right now m concerned about khushi. I am apprehensive about the further plot of the story,about arnav khushi but m trusting you with them.

Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago

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