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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,
Thanks for the comments guys,
It means alot to me..
Here s the update..
Enjoy reading...

Taarey ff:Towards Love-part2



Swayam calls taani..
Taani:abhi ek gante pehle aapne call kiya tha na bhaai,main aajoonga jaldi..
Swayam:tumhe aaj hi aana padega aur meri ek baat maanegi..
Taani:aap bholo na,
aapka koi baat main daaltha hoon kya...
Swayam:to sun,
aaj rey delhi aa raha hai ek performance keliye aur usse koi raasta nahi pata hai whan ka,so i need u to pick him from d airport and return back to mumbai with him..
Taani:kya bhaai,kahan fassa diya,woh bhi uss khadoos ke saath,aur main unko pick kyun karroon?
Swayam:woh maine rey ko bholatha,uska secretary na hone ke wajas se uska performance main affct nahi hoga..
Taani:pehli waali bhaag gayi kya phir se..
Swayam:ha,aur kab tak main koi aur na doondloon,uska zimedaari meri hai,aur tum meri pyaar behen ho na
Taani:kya bhaai,koi aur punishment nahi mila kya mujhe dene ko,aaj wapas nahi aane ka..
Swayam:tum rey ko kadoos kyun bolthe ho,na tum usse mile ho,to problem kya hai..
Taani:aapse to sunahai na,woh kafi hiai ussko kadoos bolne main..
aur main unhe pehchanoonga kaise...
Swayam:main pic bejdoonga whtsaap par,ab mujhe jaana hai aur tum airport pahunchthe hi mujhe cal karna..

Just then rey enters..
Shouting..
Rey:Swayam
Swayam's phone fell again..
Swayam:are yaar yeh bhi gira dhiya,aab meri aadi salry tumhare wajas se phne buy karne main jaatha hai..
Rey:tum apna phne sambal nahi saktha kya..
Swayam:acha ab yeh bhi meri problem hai..
Rey:nahi to ,mera hai kya phne?
Swayam:woh chod tum chilaa kyun raha ta,ab kya hua..
Rey:tumhe pata hai na,woh delhi main pehle perform karne jaa raha hoon,wahan ka koi raastha nahi pata..
Swayam smiles..
Rey:tum smile kar rahe ho kya...main itna pareshaan hai aur tum hoke smile kar rahe ho..
Swayam:calm down rey..
maine sab sambal liya hai aur tum tension lena bandh kar k..
Rey:kaise ..
Swayam:woh meri behen taani woh tumhe airport se pick karega aur tumhe drop kar dega so,n tum usse lekar wapas mumbai aaj na evening flyt se k..
Rey:taani,no no
uska dusra naam musibat hai aur tum keh rahe ho,no yaar,
Swayam:tum donon ke beech main problem kya hai,na tum pehle usse mila hai na baat ki hai,to
Rey:tumse bahut suna hai na ,isliye
Swayam:woh meri behen,koi problem nahi hogi,bas tum usse wapas aathe waqth le aana..
Rey gets n leaves but turns back
Rey:uska hi to dar hai mujhe
Swayam:ape rukh..

Rey reaches delhi n comes out of the airport calls swayam.
Swayam:ha tu pahunch gaya ,rukh main yeh call confernce main daal detha hoon,
swayam calls taani:
Taani:pahunch gaya kya woh kadoos
swayam:shh,confernce call main hai taani
rey:kya bholi woh swayam
Taani:maine uhe dekh liya ,bhol deejiye jahan khada wahan khade rahne ko..
Taani stops her scooty infront of her..
Rey stares at the scooty
Taani removes her helmet
Rey:plse dont tell me ki tum taani ho
Swayam plse yeh kehdo yeh tumahri behen nahi
Taani:aise kaise keh doon,mera bhaai ka ek lauta behen hoon main..
Swayam:woh meri hi behen yaar,ab main rakh tha hoon,shyaam ko usse lekhar hi aana
cuts d call
Taani:ab chaliye
Rey:main iss scooty pe nahi bhaitne nahi waala k..
Taani:aapke ke paas doosra option bhi nahi hai k..
Rey:main kaise bhaitoonga ismain...
Taani:pehle kabhi ghode par bhaita hai
Rey:kya
Taani:bhaitna hai to bhaita,warna jo karna hai karo..
Rey tries harder but somehow get on d scooty..
Rey:mera bag
Taani:dedo,main yahan raktha hoon n keeps in d front..
Taani:pakdar bhaitna..
Rey:kyun,isse gira to mera suit ko bhi raashes nahi aayega..
Taani in her mind:accha bachchu,ab mazza chakkatha hoon
Taani increases d speed..
Rey:tum mujhe marvana chahthe ho kya...
Taani:abhii thodi der kya hol rahe the,mere suit ko kya tha woh
Rey:ab dheere chalavo..
Taani:k kadooss
Rey:kya bholi tum?

Rey n taani reaches d venue.
Taani:ab main chaltha hoon..
Rey:kahan tumhe mere saath performance ke baad mumbai aana hai..
taani:main aajooongi
Rey:1 gante main sharp k..
Taani rides off:sochthi hoon
Rey:kaise ladki hai yaar...

Rey was in his green rom..
Taani comes n strongly pushes the door n it shook the table which made the cofee spill on his shirt..
Rey:yeh kiya tumne
Taani:sorry
Rey:tumhare sorry bolne se kuch hone nahi wala k..
Taani:ab chilaana bandh karo,maine sorry kaha na
Rey:err swayam
Taani:mere bhaai ko kyun bhulaa rahe ho,woh mumbai main bhaitkar aaapka awwaaz nahi sunne nahi wala hai k..
Rey:oh god..
kitni bholthi ho tum..
Taani:aapko kya problem main kam bholoon yah aur zyaada bholoon,ap shirt change karo,aur woh log aapko bhularaha k..
Rey:tum jaao pehle k..
Taani:ek dum kadoos hai..pata nahi karela khatha hai kya har waqth..
Rey:tumne kuch kaha..
Taani:nahi to(n leaves)

Rey finishes d performance..
Taani:yeh kaddos to kamaal ka dancer nikla
Rey n taani leaves for the airport..
Rey:thank god tumhari scooty main nahi aana pada..
Taani:meri scooty ko kuch mat bholna huh
Rey:oh
Taani keeps her headphones on n walks thru by making action thru her hands n murmurring d wordings of d song through the airport checking,ppl around her..
Rey notices d weirdness n ppl starring her
Rey:kya kar rahe ho tum
Log dekh raha hai
Taani:dekhne do,unke bhi aankhein hai,unlogon ko dekhne do
Rey:tum har waqth aise rahthe ho ya koi problem hai tumhe..
Taani:Aapko paagal lagtha hoon
Rey:woh to nahi
Taani:isse jeena kehthe hai ,aap nahi samjhenge,ap to 24/7 aise moof phhoolkar khoom sakthe honge ,par main nahi..
Rey:whatevr..
They boards d flyt n reach mumbai..
swayam come to pick them...
Taani runs nhugs swayam.
Swayam picks her up..
Swayam:finally tum aagayi
to kaise tha rey performance
Rey was about to tell ,taani intrupts..
Taani:chodo na bhaai,aab yeh batao humara naya ghar kahan hai..
Rey:yeh ladki itni annoying kyun hai..


Precap:swayam:taani tum mere academy main intership karna kal se shuru karogi..
taani:wow bhaai dats cool..
swayam:par tumhe ek contract sign karna padega k..
Taani:iss main kya problem,aap ab dedo main kar doonga
Sharon:dont you think tumhe usse batana chahiye..
swayam:shh,

Taani:kadoos tum ho mere boss..hai bhagwaan..
Rey:please not again,dont tell me tum mere secretary ho..

So guys,
i hope you loved the update..
So if u guys loved it, please give comments ,it only takes 1 minute or so..
so please please tell whther i should write the next part...
Silent readers comment please...

I hope you all loved d character of taani in my ff,
her character i am potraying in my ff is exactly like me but the only difference is i am not anybody's secretary...And aab itna hi baacki aage aage baatathi hoon...
So thats a piece of sharing from me..
Have a nice day ahead guys...



Part3
Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Nice nick name: Khadoos. LOL
& Taani is so funny. Yehi Rey ko sidhaa karegi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
super update pls jald? Next part post karo.
Anju
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Awesome udate...precap is also superb...waitng 4 nxt update...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Hahaha khadoos lol so funny pls continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
I love this side of Taani she is so funny and bubbly and not afraid to speak her mind wow I just love her. Taarey little nok jok was hilarious love how Taani make.him sit on her scooty lol. Love the chapter plz continue soon and u did a superb job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Hehehe swayam part and taareyam part was too funny new phone daily.. lol..

Awesome update nxt part plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
once again an aweosme one
kya likhti hai yaar tu
gr8 yaar
loved it very much taarey first meeting
hehe...khadoos...rey n irritating taani
wat a combo pack.!!!
i cant even imagine dem as frnz ...
tere dimag mein aise hatke ideas aate kaha se hai haan???
pls update soon
eager to c wats next!!!
do pm!!!

stay blessed!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update... i love the character of taani... and khadoos... hahahaha... luvd it... thanks for the pm and plzzz update soon...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks fr d pm n m lukng frwd for the excitng taarey nok jhok... n keep writing😆

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