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thank you for keeping armaan safe :)

Thanks 4 keeping armaan safe..i thought it's a sad one..u r a wonderfull writer...really like ur way of writing...and love this OS a lot...it's superb..thanks 4 the P.M

Originally posted by: -PinkShadows-

Me first!😎 Okay so I just finished reading your OS. Actually I read it as soon as you posted I just got lazy but but I'm undoing my res. So where do I begin. Aditi this was amazing. I have seen stories on t.v where an army wife talks about how she feels about her husband being in a war and it really can freak you out. I mean it's not easy for anyone to be away from a loved one who is fighting a war and not think about if they're safe and alive or not. And yet again you wrote about something different and difficult and for that I just want to not only say thank you but for writing it so beautifully. You wrote it so maturely and with respect. I loved how you described Riddhima's feelings when she heard the news on t.v. I can only image how that must affect anyone when they hear news like that. I mean the first thing you think of is your loved ones. Anyways hun keep it up. you're a fantastic writer and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

-Tashu Di-

Your comment seriously makes my day. I was just not that sure about this one cause there's not much to it. No romance or any such thing. Just a simple army guy's story. Thanks a lott Tashu Di. I feel much more confident now that I can write stuff like this. Cause I don't write all the romantic stuff that good . I can just write stuff like this jaha pe there's all sadness 😆 And I always get scared cause no one likes these kinda stories. I'm really really glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin

I m really impressed with your writing. You wrote with such emotions. It reality. When a man is working in an army, the wife and children have no clue whether he is alive or dead. It like keeping a stone on your heart and sending your husband miles away from yourself. When we listen about deaths, lying bodies in a war it just freaks us out. The family is just shattered. I really admire you for writing it so maturely and taking up this issue. You described Riddhima's emotions really well. We cannot even think how a wife feels when she sees her Husband's name flashing on TV and headline says that he is not to be found. This touched me " Riddhima.. Baby I have to serve my country. And you should support me for what I do. Not because you're my wife but because you are my best friend and you need to understand me. I promise I'll take care of myself and won't come home dead " Keep up the good work dear^^

Thanks Salwa. It means a lot to me. Dekh tere liye I write sad stories 😆 😆 Thank you once again.

Originally posted by: Accio_kajen

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Hello I am back🥳

Firstly the banner is just justt...so PERFECT👏 But why no KaJen in it:(

Okay this was such a sadish cute OS!

It was always hard for people who have their husbands,brothers,fathers as army officers!They are always living in fear but then somebody has to do it right,go ahead and fight for the country instead of living a safe secure life:) And you explained it exactly in Armaan's words in the last line:D

Riddhima's anguish was perfectly portrayed.I think she was more scared was because she had a daughter to look down to.

I love the Armaan consoling Riddhima scene!It was oh-so-adorable😆

I'll stop before you go high on my tareef about you:P

PS-I unreserved even though I had an exam!I want YOU to get started on the next OS as soon as possible-__-

I'm not that good in making siggies.. Isliye jo hua wo kar diya 😆 You are one big kameeni you know that.. ? Kabhi tareef nahi karegi meri :| :| But acha hai.. You don't let me climb the channa ka jhaad 😆 😆 Thank you so much for editing 😆 Next OS 11th April ko. Pakka 😆 😆 Tab tak ke liye I guess there won't be anything on this thread. Deserted island ban jayega 😆 Thanks a ton for the comment 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

thank you for keeping armaan safe :)

Your most welcome 😆 😆 Thank you very much for commenting :)