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Dekho kaun aaya 😎

MAN YOU ARE TOO GOOOD! I i did not expect such mature writing from you. You are in 9 uhmm 0r 10 🤔 but its brilliant. I really appreciate the issue you took up. Its has become a normal thing. Girls get raped and they cant open their mouth. At the end, they commit suicide. AND YESS I have a syapa for sad sceness😆 but blahh it was like really very sad and i always feel really asdfghjkl when i read about such issues. Next time write a happy one^^KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITE MORE^^

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

hey Aditi'

long time no see'

congo on the gallery

who told you your work is not worth reading..I like to read what you write'and I am looking forward to read lots of stuff by you here'

love

Nandi

Thanks a lot yaar.. I'm guessing you're from blog.. ? I'm really sorry my memory is real bad. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a ton.

Originally posted by: Accio_kajen

Reserve:)

Edited🥳

Altlast I am unreserving:P

Aditii pehle one big hug to you🤗

Finally after lots of pestering,you finally decided to post something on IF! This was the first work I read and instantly told you that however immature you behave🤣,your writing is really mature for you age:)

I know you wrote this after Delhi gang-rape case and that thing you felt, you portrayed beautifully in this FF...

Armaan' anguish & Riddhima's frustration was portrayed perfectly and you can feel their sadness:(

This OS is something really sad and though I do not like sad things,I really like it since you decided to not give it an ending...It is better this way! What happened to Riddhima is better left unsaid😔

Anyways I'll stop since you're not used to listening so much tareef from my mouth😎

And now since I have FINALLY edited,I want YOU to update the next OS fastt!

LOl.. I'm really grateful ke you unreserved 😆 .. A big hug to you too 🤗 Tere bina this was not possible 😳 I AM MATURE :@ Haayyee.. Itti tareef .. Me teh hawa vich udne lag gayi ☺️ And there comes the normal Shikha 😵 Tareef ke do shabd bole nahi ke band kar diya bolna.. Anyways.. you giving me itna sa tareef is a HUGGE achievement for me 😆 I will remember this forever 🤣 Yes.. I am updating 😆

Originally posted by: rockstar_kajen

res
:O
i m editing the comment here...like now...reserving it so that someone else doesnot comment =))
*edited
Kiddo u wrote this????? whwn, where and how???
i didnot know u write this good baccha 😳...
firstly the way u expresed everything was BRILLIANT...i cannot express in words
i could litterally feel the pain...
And armaan...can any fiction HERO be better than him??? NO WAYSSS
he is THE BEST
i have never been so PROUD of u kiddo...
I LOVEEE UUU SOOO MUCHHH BACCHA
keep writing more and more 😳
and make me more proud

Daadddiii.. I love you sooo much for this.. I just wrote it.. 😆 A am not good.. just still trying to be somewhere near good 😳 I thought I did not do justice to Armaan cause there wasn't much of him in the OS but reading your comment is making me feel better ke maybe I did make Armaan a hero 😆 😆 Thank you sooo much daadi 😳 Pakka.. Will make you more proud 😃

Originally posted by: yappingduck

that so painful...beautifully written

Thank you so much.. It means a lot to me :)

Originally posted by: -PinkShadows-

Aditi! omg! that was so well done. I can't even tell you and that to on such a difficult topic. I mean these kinds of things happen everyday and there are very few ppl who are aware of these kinds of things so I just want to say thank you for writing about it. Keep it up and do write more your really good at it!

Thanks a ton Tashu Di.. You are one of the writers I look upto.. I love your writing and you telling me something I wrote is good is like an achievement I guess. I was actually kinda hesitant cause I've never seen much people write on topics like this but then I wanted to write it so badly that I couldn't stop myself. Thank you again Di 🤗

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

This is awesome. You've gotta write more! :)

Thank you so much .. Sure thing :)

Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin

Hey dont continue the OS. Its better when some things are unsaid. It gives out a powerful impact^^Write something else:-)

I wasn't gonna continue.. That was the end :) I didn't want a happy ending and I couldn't write a sad one so I thought to leave it right there.. Don't worry 😆

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

Aditi, OMG this is so beautifully written! Really really well written! I hope there is a continuation to this? There is na :D
can't wait to read more of your work :)

Thanks a lott Anamika.. Sorry.. This was the end of it.. I couldn't write anymore cause I didn't want it to end happily.. If it would have then my real reason for writing something like this would've been wasted. I want people to know the real bitter end of girls who suffer like this. Anyways.. Thank you so much for commenting. It really means a lot. :)