Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Gosh! I miss these rabba ve's and tum theek ho's.. :(

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kiran94

@kiran94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

nice update...i really liked all ur stories.why dont u start a new ff like based on dadi's track and also sheetal track...sorry for saying this..it just i love the way u write it...so i think u can make use of these two tracks and write a beautiful ff...

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adventure_roks

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

that was nice...
what is gonna happen next...?
u have me running around on my toes...

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Barkah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

Wow...Awesome update 😊
Wonderful, love it 😊
U r so sweet 😉
Thanks for updating
Continues soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

well that was interesting
could we not have waited till morning to find the address for the pawn broker dude
but of course we couldnt
what is he playing at
dude make up your mind please and dont play with her like this
why is doing this to her
either he accept his love for her and then go about bringing her to him permanently in the sacred bond of marriage
or let her go and not torture both himself and her in this what ever this is
dont leave her hanging please
its not fair to her and it certainly aint fair on her
well he got it back
not only the payal but the bangle too
funny how khushi was being so sarcastic to arnie

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

aww that was real beautiful he got back her payals and bangle and apologised for hurting her loved it

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#697

Aww it was awesome
I just complete knowing khushi and now these and I fell in love with it...
Update soon

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 45

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

Excellent update Smita!

Loved it to the core!

ArShi romance gonna bloom now?

Continue soon! Waiting!

Love,

Mrina

@Rash - Thanks for the PM! :)

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GunM

@GunM

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#699

both updates were just awesome, amazing, super

the nok-jhok was awesome...Arnavs concern was amazing and the sorry was super

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

Wonderful updates, loved it. I am so hooked into your stories that whenever I login to India forums, I really hope to have an update from you. Thankfully I login only once in a day and I always get what I wish for.. thank you for writing such lovely stories. 😊

Thanks for the PM rashmi.. Loved your interpretations for previous chapters and waiting for chapter 6 & 7 now. 😊

Edited by PhenoixTears - 12 years ago